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Reviewer: colorblind19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

awesome, cute, hot... puff you are the Great OnTheTurningAway godddd!!!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: jasam4ever19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely LOVED this. It was so sweet and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review!  I never thought my first story would be so soft and emotional, but it was so clear in my head, I just had to write it down. I blame my favorite slash authors, who were torturing their own poor Edwards & Jaspers while I was writing this, for the fluff factor of this story :) I really wanted to show a realistic progression of the boys' relationship leading up to the final night, so I hope that came across well.

Thanks again for taking the time to read & review. It's very much appreciated.

Marilyn

OnTheTurningAway

Reviewer: VaniV Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow... Congrats for winning the contest, I absolutely loved this story. It almost made me cry. I loved the intensity of it and the lemon was nice as well...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review!  I really enjoyed writing these boys and was shocked when I was told I won 'Best Slash' in the contest.  Writing the boys' intimate moments was nerve wracking to say the least, so I'm glad you liked them as well as the build up to the boys' first time.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. It's appreciated!

Reviewer: helese Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, very well done. You did a great job demonstrating the "slow burn". 

 

Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review.  One of my goals was to show the build up of the boys' relationship and not just jump into their first time.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review :)

Reviewer: CullenGreen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was so beautifully written.  I loved seeing Edward and Jasper's relationship grow and change as they got older.  Their first times were sweet, sexy and clearly showed the love and desire they shared for one another.  I loved it. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review.  My goal was to show a realistic progression of the boys' friendship, and later romantic relationship, so I'm glad that came across well.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: guitargirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: twilight4real Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

really cute something about jasper and edward seems right



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I read all pairings, but Jasper and Edward are definitely my favorite.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.  It's appreciated!

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