[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
go bella go take care of these bimbos
wow so much to deal with. i hope she has time and gets to know aro before his time is up
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapters! I love this story. I always get excited when I see an update. Gotta love Mobward!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Go Bad Ass Bella!!!! Taking down the Slore was priceless.
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
awww poor B just wants to know her family. ROFL for Skankya running in terror.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow Charlotte is one bad bitch
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lauren really is pathetic. Ugh for Skankya getting away.
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lauren cracked me up. Because I can imagine that is exactly what goes through some girls heads as there are going after pro athletes and actors.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Jun 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh possessive Ed!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Bella get revenge!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Everyone seems nice
Date: 10 Jun 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow that was quick Ed!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
ohhh everyone is out for free shit, good to see Edward is out for blood.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, your Edward is one colder motherfucker!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
LOVE THIS STORY
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. Tanya needs to get her due now. Ouch for Paul.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
He means what he says. Why would he need anyone other than Bella she is his and he is hers all them skanks can just jump on someone elses dick lol. Who is watching Bella so Black does not get her???
Date: 09 Jun 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG!! enjoyed it and can't wait for more!!!soon I hope!?
Date: 08 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my what a fabulous story!!! just found it today and read the whole thing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. GREAT STORY!!
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
All in a night's work for Mobward.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh my edward had a full night
i am glad he is faithful and bella is #1 with him
man black better look out. i feel sorry for paul. if i where hi, i would rather be dead than blind and a screwed up dick
love it
Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love it and can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love it!! Cant wait for the next chapter (and more Aro) :)
Date: 23 May 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Like how Bella teased Edward at the end. lol
Date: 21 May 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think even straight guys would love Edward. He is perfect.
Date: 20 May 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love how happy they are. great chapter.
Date: 19 May 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
love itr need more.
Date: 19 May 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
"Billy hasn't been mumbling about 'birds', He's been rambling about 'the Volturi'!" lol this story is filled with some great laughs::))
Date: 19 May 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 19 May 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
Your Charlotte is such a sweet & gentle young lady::)) lol The thought of what she's doing to Paul makes my stomach roll! lol
Date: 19 May 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
"I was such a cocky little shit back then. I went up to Jasper during lunch on his first day and punched him in his arm, telling him to give me his lunch. He punched me back and told me to fuck-off" lol lol best story ever::))
Date: 18 May 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
"MOTHER!"—Alice and me
"LA LA LA LA LA LA LA !"-Rose
"I NEED BRAIN BLEACH!"-Emmett
"I THINK I'M GONNA BE SICK!"-Jasper
"Um"-Bella
I think I like Bella's comment best:::)))
Date: 18 May 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Allie, Rose, could you run to the 24 hour Walmart...." I'm very impressed rich boy Cullen knows about Walmart & what they are for::))
"Besides, I found you and I plan on keeping you" lol that sounds like Alice:)
"I wouldn't touch you with my enemies dick" omg lol lol that must be a Cullen saying 'cause it seems I remember either Alice or Rose saying something real close to the same thing!
Date: 18 May 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Rofl for massage. Lol for her teasing him about baby.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
well so far so good
the massage was priceless
love it
Date: 18 May 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good times life is good
Date: 18 May 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that Aro does not seem to really want anything from Bella. I want to know what Cauis told Bella. I am glad that Edward is getting her away for a few days.
I have really enjoyed reading this story and going from chapter to chapter. Now I have to wait on an update. I hope you update soon. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with all of us.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward moves quickly. Wow, they are getting married before they meet with Aro. I do not blame them. I am worried about what Aro wants with Bella. I am hoping that he just wants to get to know his granddaughter. I am really enjoying reading this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW!!!!!!!! Bella has money!!!!! Lots of money!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!
If Aro was keeping tabs on Bella, how did she get lost on the radar?? How did she stay homeless????? This is just getting more and more interesting.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved the trip to the grocery story. Too funny!!!!!! I knew Alice would find a way to get Bella in the wedding party. lol.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
What is the deal with Charlie's parents??? This is getting more complicated!!!! Interesting, very interesting.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad that Seth is helping them with information. What bank account does Bella have that she did not even know that she had????? Loved the comment she thought about Jacob. LOL!!!!! Is Jacob gay????? Just wondering. Can not wait to see the reason that Billy wanted Bella at the res. so bad.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sorry that Seth got hurt and I hope that the Cullen's can turst him. Glad that Bella did not argue with Edward about Garrett following her every move.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad that Edward and Bella had a good date. At least nothing bad happened.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok, so am I understanding it right, that Billy wanted Jacob to date Bella but really Billy wanted Bella in his bed. Bella gave Jacob her viginity, why would Billy say she was frigid??? She had only had one experience. The Cullens definitly has they work cut out for them.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am thinking that James is going to be a problem. Love Rose taken up for Bella. Glad all the girls are so welcoming of Bella.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE Esme!!!!!!!! Possessive much, Edward???? lol
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, I was not expecting those turn of events. Hope Edward makes Billy and Jacob pay for what they did to Bella's parents and her.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love me some Esme in this chapter!!!!! lol
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love that everyone is taken with Bella, even Rose. lol. Glad that Carlisle backed Edward about not marrying Tanya. lol Boy, Edward has fallen hard for Bella already. That was quick.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love at first sight!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Bella has had it hard time with her parents dieing and them being homeless. I am glad that Alice and Rose came out when they did. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well I'm happy that the trouble will not be coming from Aro. He seems to truly love Bella and only want to see her happy and get to know her before he dies. Now I know trouble is coming and I'm glad that they had the foresite to get married before the meeting.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have to say I am loving this story, but I have a bad feeling something is going to happen to Aro before he can see Bella again.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
aww love it
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think Edward should have warned Aro about what Caius told Bella. He is going to cause trouble. Everyone needs to be on alert for his crap. Bella's world has changed so much in the last month. It is a good thing she is a strong person.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
SHORT BUT INFORMATIVE. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
I really love this story, I can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
"Your sister was gutsy to plan an outdoor wedding in Seattle.” lol I'll say!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
"If you really think its necessary, I promise not to argue." Yeah, our little Bella may be canon in many ways but this shows just how OOC she really is::)) lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the chapter and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
Very interesting poor Bella gets married and then meets her sick grandfather for the first time it is a good thing for the pre honeymoon to help her relax.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter. Cauis is interesting. I would liek to know more about the evil one. Thanks.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
me thinks Caius is gonna be a lot of trouble. Cant wait for more!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Caius is going to be a big thorn in every ones side. How could he think Bella would marry his grandson?...because he missed the first generation? I am so glad that E and B are already married. I feel bad for Aro, I hope he gets to impart his wisdom on Bella and Edward. Caius will not leave this be...I can't wait to hear Bella's pov, I want to know what he had to say to her. It's not like he can threaten her and have it not have any repercussions. Can't wait, thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
loved that they got married and are in this as one unit
casius makes me nervous. i am hoping bella has enough time to get to know aro before he decides to leave this world. seems he is bad off with not much time
this family has alot to get through
love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Pls continue and update soon pls!!!!! I really enjoy it so far!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh I love how Edward handled the hussies.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please continue this story
It seems like it will be getting good soon..!
Date: 17 Apr 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just found this story and read all the chapters to catch up. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
TOO SHORT!!!!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am very excite d and nervous to see how the meeting with Aro goes. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
love it
the boys on the reservation need to be dealt with, can't wait
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh goodness bella get ready for the surprise of your life
love the torture that edward had for the dicktwats
love it
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is so very good!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow what a mess up this poor girl has had to face after she lost her parents
i hope those two creeps get what is coming to them
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Apr 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. I honk it's smart for them to be married prior to the meeting.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
So god, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for an update
Date: 15 Apr 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
love it go edward
Date: 15 Apr 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for more.