Date: 15 Apr 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait to read more please!
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope the skanks got the message loud and clear.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
greatchapter glad e told all thosewomen off.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope it will go well with Aro.
Bella would be happy to have a grandfather! Not?
Date: 11 Apr 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter. 76 mill! holy cow.
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Just found this story, really enjoy it. I would like to know how often do you update or plan to update.
I try not to read incomplete stories because it seems I pick the stories that starts out great, but the updates are so far in-between each other that you damn near have to reread the story to understand what is going on.
My fingers are crossed for regular updates.
Thanks
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Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! I'm with Alice, let's go shopping!!!!!!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
I don't facebook.
Anyway good Mafia story.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder why Charlie left. Billy is in trouble now ;)
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!!!!! GREAT STORY. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE.
Date: 09 Apr 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Lauran is an idoit and lucky she didnt get the shit beat out of her. Edward is going to get to the bottom of this
Date: 09 Apr 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
can't wait for more
Date: 09 Apr 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to mroe
Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
omg i love this
Date: 09 Apr 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Really enjoyed the two chapters
Date: 08 Apr 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
So much new info! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love your story...can't wait for more updates.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh Wow....She is a rich chickie!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Garrett is too funny. Ha ha for Skankren being put in her place.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
I liked this story I have added it to my favorites. When might you be adding chapters?
Date: 21 Mar 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great story. Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Mar 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
good chapter The Blacks controling the res and they maybe responsible for Charlies' death.
Date: 20 Mar 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well sweetie that was quick. Your story.. so we read on.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
The plot thickens who was Charlie before he moved to Forks.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
So the plot thickens !
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ahhhh! So Bella has a deep dark family secret. I wonder if she is a mob princess.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love how devoted Edawrd is to her already. I am liking the mystery you have created as well Good chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm glad that Bella has someone from her past in her life.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Seth is a good guy. I'm glad you kept with that for this story.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is great. I love how she brushed off Lauren.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
The Cullen's are great together. Even with being mob, killers, you name it they are still great.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I guess the girls figured it was better to take it slow with the shopping and ease her into it.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooooh Now who was Charlie hiding from I wonder cause thats what is seems like to me. Love Char.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward seems to have very deep pockets and I'm not talking about money.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is so accepting. I'm glad she has people around her now.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Sending them to sadistic Doms seems a fit punishment to me.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh. I like how everyone has gotten so attached to Bella so fast. I loved when Alice said she was keeping Bella. It cracked me up.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is a real hard ass with a soft spot it seems.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella to not only lose your parents the way she did. But then to lose everything else as well.
Creepy 1 & 2 were horrible human beings, but I have the feeling they will never hurt anyone ever again.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really like this story
Date: 12 Mar 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love it update soon
Date: 10 Mar 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
I lie how you have everything coming together.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
lOVE IT SO FAR AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Date: 10 Mar 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nice story!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
James a gurkin. :-)
Date: 09 Mar 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
The plot thickens
Date: 09 Mar 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think Jacob will get his ass kicked now!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great story so far.
Date: 09 Mar 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
She is safe and going to be well taken care of. I cant wait to find out what they get out of Paul. Seth is a good boy
Date: 09 Mar 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Seth is being forthcoming.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
OH My can't wait to read more please!
Date: 08 Mar 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Sexy guy! Can't wait to see what's up in Edward sleeve for Paul...very interesting indeed. Billy seems to be very delusional -the rolling stones once said...you can't always get what you want. Thanks for the update, always wanting more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
So Jake is a pencil dick? Cool!
Love Seth, can't wait for Bella and Edward to get full on lemony!!
Date: 05 Mar 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am liking this story. Great job. It's a different twist and I am enjoying it. Now did Bella go to college at all yet?
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh this is good can't wait to read more please!
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think he is making it clear to all that she will be safe. What a place to live
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
if she said like one more time Bella would of lost it lol
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it corner oops counter lol
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
she is to irrestable lol. Some ass hole is going to die good it will be James
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Esme is priceless lol. the blacks are going to go down.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think she loves the idea going from homeless to wow just wow and to know that he will protect her.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
he needs to tell her now
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
That is moving fast it is good he put Tanya in her place fast
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
That is love at first sight
Date: 04 Mar 2013 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
talk about kick her when she is down those two are in deep shit
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
so far im loving this story and cant wait for updates
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
I just found this story and I love it!!!! I couldn't even take time to review after the other chapters because I need to keep reading. LOL I love the story line. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Also I'm glad that you made Seth a good guy!!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love you, and you are destined to be my wife and oh, yeah, I am a crime boss. Just so you know. ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Okay"? You think Bella is overwhelmed much?
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE love at first sight!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
Your story is an interesting one and one that I hope will continue but I have one favor to ask... could you please lower the font size that you are typing in. I may be close to being blind as a bat but I can still see...lol. Keep up the good work and I cant wait to read more.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE THIS MORE PLZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
love it. I love Mobward stories.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww poor seth. Hope Leah gets whats coming to her. Wonder who called Billy about Bella. Glad B accepted Garrett so easily
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
sweet date. Loved the stories of all the family members. Same James?
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
oooh Lawsuits and takedown I hope ensue. Sounds like Emily needs to be take out as well. Skankya wont let it go I bet.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
wonderful pamper day
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent planners. I agree with getting Jenks on it.