Date: 29 Sep 2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
I don’t like Renee
Date: 31 Mar 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
That "Bitch" Renee!
Date: 31 Mar 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm not very happy that Bella called Jake instead of Edward or her father first.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is similar to a another story I've read. "Carlie's Eyes"
Date: 31 Mar 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can you say, "Mommie Dearest"?
Date: 31 Mar 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
The 5 "W's" are running through my head from this.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story and hope too see how to ends. i lovenyour work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am trying to work through writer's block. I am hoping to have something up by the 1st if the month. Again thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 37
Please update!
Author's Response: Working on it. Promise it's coming soon.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 37
I have stayed faithful to this story since chapter one ...but that was mean poor dad ....let them have a moment of happiness ....please
Author's Response: Patience. I promise all is good. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
Omg you killed me (lol) .can't wait for next chapter .
Author's Response: Awe thank you. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
Esme's gonna be so happy. Buh Bye Lauren you skank.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 36
sweet seeing it from E's POV
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 35
Woo Hoo. Go Victoria.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 35
Lovely reunion. Liked the dragging by the hair.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 37
Love me some Daddy C!! great job!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Nice peek into E's side of the chapter.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 35
Victoria is officially my hero! Great chapter, doll.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 37
Oh, didn't realise I got two chapters, even so, after that chapter the next had better appear fast :) x
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 36
Awh, such a lovely story, I'm so grateful for a new chapter, its nice to see the positive interaction, can't wait for more x
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 37
excellent story
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
omg did lauren do it. I hope you can update soon
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow this is a cluster f***....I hope someone gets Renee for all this B.S. she is spouting
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thank you for all those chapters , sorta made up the last cliffie you left me with ..
I still am against Bella going to charlie for anything coz he sure as hell doesnt deserve her forgiveness ..
Date: 14 Jun 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ahhh need more
Author's Response: I will try to get more soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 May 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
This story is awesome so glad I just found it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!! Glad you are enjoying.
Date: 23 Apr 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love your story can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 Apr 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
4 months that is all she has to wait to find out if that was true, personally it doesn't sound like something Edward would say..and be so calious about
Date: 23 Apr 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can not wait for more, love the chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and reading.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
AMAZING. keep writing please!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
Dude you better explain and quick the ring. Please update again soon. Poor edward and now will he call his dad for help.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
Awh, you cant leave us hanging there!!! Can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 34
Aaarrrggghhh! Need another update. I bet Victoria is dragging Jessica away from the door.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 34
I can't wait for the next chapter to read what will be happening with these characters.
I also can't wait to read what Edwards Explanaiton as to why he is wearing a gold band on his hand...it should be good to find out what edward has been up to these past months since he left her in Forks?
It will be interesting also what the family will say about Bella and Edward having twins I hope that we will get to see how they react to this news soon.
I can't wait to read about what they will say when they findout that she came out to chicago and then left when she saw edward hugging Irina before the twins were born and it was because of Renee and her web of lies.
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
you are sooooooo mean .. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Oh and you haven't seen anything yet :P
Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
looooooooool , i love this victoria .. Hilarious .
Author's Response: thank you for reading i love her too
Date: 20 Apr 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yea. The three skanks need to be fired. Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Victoria is too cute.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I really like the way she is playing out in my head.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow didn't see the Victoria and Jake paring coming. Can't wait for more chapters to see where you are going to take this story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad I could surprise you. Lots more of those to come.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 34
You're an evil cliffies leaver!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I take that as a compliment. I did learn from the best. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Apr 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 33
I demand another chapter! Haven I been good to you? Don't I deserve more?.....
Author's Response: Yes you have. There is another chapter, but I don't think it will be much better. I did learn from the best!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yes!!!!They reunited again,I hope that Edward has a chance to explain about wearing a wedding ring to Bella before she runs away again.Reene deserves a fire with her name on it,I mean she killed Paul and abused Bella for years and about Charlie he deserves some hard work before he is allowed to be in Bella and the twin's life's again.
Author's Response: Fate can be a real b**** sometimes. Let's hope he can. Renee well the firey pits if hell are too good for her but I'm sure karma, fate's big sister, can handle her. Charlie is a whole other story. Blinded by love and distraught by the idea of someone hurting his daughter. Denile is a tricky thing. Once it takes root it's hard to get past. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Apr 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to reading more of this story thanks it has been a great read so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
I hve been following this story forever ....finnally he found them letsjust hope no one runs this time ...
Author's Response: We shall see we shall see. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
Lovely to see the update, really like this story, nicely put together chapter.
Author's Response: Awwww thanks. I appreciate you reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what Edward will do in reaction to Bella being in Chicago with twins that are calling him dada when he walks into the room. I hope you will update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have the chapter written just need to tweek it. Hopefully I can get a few more done before the weekend so I can update then.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
She seen him with Rose, she should have atleast confronted him and told him about the baby
Author's Response: It was Irina he was hugging. She knows Rose. She was scared and immature. She wanted to protect everyone.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story however I'm a little confused. How can Edward and Bella be in school together if he is five years older than her? She's about to turn 18 making Edward at least 22-23 yrs old. Could you explain.
Author's Response: The ages mentioned are Bella's. Edward is in college He is 5 years older than Bella. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
O now it is getting good. I wonder what edward is going to think.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Soon you will have your answer. I have Edward's pov half way written. Will update soon.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
Excellent chapter, but now I really want to know what happens next!!! More please :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I will be updating more soon.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow Sick babies and aparty is more important? Jeez louise.
Author's Response: Yeah those nurses are a trip right. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 32
UPDATE ASAP!
Author's Response: SOON!!! Thank you for reading. Reviews make me smile and I definitely doing that.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
Yay! She's finally going to him!
Author's Response: Yes she is. Hopefully fate doesn't rear her ugly face this time. ;). Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bella needs to go to Edward. Like now!
Author's Response: All in good time. All in good time. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Go jake! Billy and Renee... No words.
Author's Response: Yep. They are a piece of work. Jake is a true true friend. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I feel for Charlie. He's so clueless.
Author's Response: Very clueless. He will have to deal with this later but you know how Bella is. She will make sure everything is okay where he is concerned. Thank you reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
What a mess!
Author's Response: Complete and utter mess. But Bella usually does find one to fall into. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh, Bella...
Author's Response: Fate hates her right. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Evil cliffies leaver! Sorry for the delay, life ya know...
Author's Response: Yep. I learned from the best about cliffies 😉. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes I know how life gets in the way. d84;a039; Ya
Date: 13 Apr 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
this is the prologue i assume .. i cant wait for the next chapter ..
I know you have school and everything but please try to update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes this is the prologue. The next chapter is half way written.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
I hope you will update this story soon.
Author's Response: Soon. Working on chapters now. Thanks for reading.
Date: 04 Jan 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
More more more Pretty please!!!!
Author's Response: Soon. Working on chapters now. Thanks for reading.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wasnt attacking Bella , i get why she hid and why she acted like that .. I just wish she tried harder to fight the Renee in her mind .. She had it ingrained in her head .. she may have hid from everyone , renee included but in her mind renee was still there.
Author's Response: OK thank you. I just didn't want you to be disappointed in her. I appreciate you reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
So glad she had victoria to help her. Sounds like the Pediatrician was a freakin MORON.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Dr was OLD.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 30
So glad Jake is a true friend in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes this Jake has no ulterior motives. Glad you like.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
so close and yet so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Yes that has been their lives so far.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thank GOD Jake thought to tape the conversation. Still wondering who the dead girl is. I wouldn't have barged in. I would have had a family meeting or better yet, let Renee play the grieving mother and play the tape at the funeral. ROFL.
Author's Response: That would have been funny. We find out the identity of the mystery girl soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
hmmm Now who else did Renee kill besides Paul? Guessing she didnt like his threats. Freakin Emmy nominee performance huh?
Author's Response: Yeah she can out on a show. Really think she should run off to Hollywood and get a part on a soap opera. They always need more more villains. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad Victoris and Peter and Char all kept thier word. Paul needs to grow a freakin concience soon. F'ing Renee
Author's Response: Yes Renee is at it again. Paul needs to stay off that stuff if he really believes Bella is coming home to him. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sad story.. Renee needs to be in jail for child abuse.
Author's Response: She will get hers soon. Although I think jail would be to good for her. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Hope you update soon .. Cant wait to see where Renee ends , hopefully in a ditch somewhere .
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I will try to get more up soon. Personally i feel like a ditch would be too good tor Renee but hey we'll see what happens.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Charlie deserves the pain he's about to feel .. i dont feel bad for him seeing as he more or less chose that bitch over his only child ..
Author's Response: Charlie was blinded by love. And remember Renee never miss treated Bella in front of anyone. I agree he is not innocent but Renee has a way of charming men. ;-)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
I cant say Bella's an idiot given her life with Renee her first instinct is to protect herself and now her kids but a woman answering someone's phone isnt proof .. Plus it's been a year and she's almost 19 now so no statuory rape threat anymore ..
Author's Response: Please remember that Renee is crazy. Bella feared for their safety more so that the charges. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Charlie is an idiot .. What's the point of looking all over for Bella when he cant see what has been right in front of him all those years.
Author's Response: Renee is a great actress and he didn't see the abuse. He will deal with her in his own way soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Jacob doesnt know that his father is screwing the lovely Renee i assume ..
Author's Response: No he doesn't. That surprise comes later. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
They all stood there and watched her get mistreated .. I get the cullens to some extent but Carlisle was obliged to report abuse and there's onl so many times a child gets hurt .
Why would Bella believe Renee anyway . she knows she's a spiteful bitch .
Author's Response: They never really saw the abuse Bella is clumsy after all. They just suspected and with out proof or Bella reporting it Carlisle really couldn't do anything. I mean Charlie is the chair of police. When someone voices your worst fears and you feel depressed, abandoned, and your hormones are out of whack you will be them. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I blame Charlie .. How could he not see such evilness and hate ..
Author's Response: Love is blind. She hides her crazy very well. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
i dont get why she didnt just up and leave already .. It would have been much better for Bella that way.
Author's Response: She enjoys making people miserable. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
Want more...I realised half way trough that it was not finished but I hoped. Can't wait, its a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Shouldn't be long before it's finished. Glad you like it.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
They are so nice.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Gut wrenching, so sad (great writing).
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewin
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Really good chapter, fills in a lot without giving too much away.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Vicious much but now we see why ella does not want him near Renee.
Author's Response: Yep. Bella trys to protect everyone. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
and here it comes...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
:) :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great set up, I'm intrigued
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh man, i need more to feed my addiction
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Should have more soon.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
You are stopping here really, UGH!!!! I need more you have me hooked
Author's Response: So glad you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow....soo great!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh no. Poor Bella. so sorry that misunderstanding happened.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hope they all keep thier word about not turning her in. Hope Renee doesnt find her. hmm Twins maybe???
Author's Response: Yep twins. Renee is about to meet her match. I think. You know how these people develop minds if their own. Ha ha. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I never like a Bella that keeps the kids from Edward. That's such a horrible thing to do. He may have moved on from YOU but does that mean you punish him by missing the birth growing up etc.
Thank you for updating and I do hope all's under control now
Author's Response: She's not purposing keeping them away. She fears for their lives. Renee is an evil witch. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Bella. Hope things turn out well for her and Edward. Maybe Victoria can intervene on her behalf with Edward.
Author's Response: Gotta feeling she's gonna try. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
love this story one of my favorites hope you come back soon
Author's Response: Started Christmas holidays today. Hoping to get something written soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Heya, would there be an update soon. This story has always being on my mind.
Hope all is well with you.
Author's Response: Hoping to get something up soon. New curriculum at school has really taken up a lot of time. Hopefully within the next few weeks. Thank you for your interest.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Renee is so bitter. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Sorry I missed your review. Thank you for reviewing. I have updated with 6 new chapters. Hope you enjoy.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so relieved Charlie had not participated in absusing and mistreating Bella. Initially I had the impression he was aware of and an active participant in the bad parenting, with that being said Charlie still should have been a more observant parent. I'm really enjoying the story, thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: So so so sorry I missed your review. Obviously I lost my mind when school started. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Charlie is blinded by love. All will come to light Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow Renee is a complete lunatic Bitch to seek unhappiness for her own child, poor Bella. Thank you fr the update.
Author's Response: My extreme apologies. I missed all you reviews and I am so very sorry. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm nervous about what is ahead for these two. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes, let's see what happens :)
Author's Response: Thank you got reading and reviewing. Hope you like what happens. :)