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Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 177

I don't care about lemons let's just move forward in healing enough hurting. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 172

Bella mentions interaction Jessica and Angela but when did that happen?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 167

He is a sweetheart and I knew Alice would save the pedicure day. Yeah her cousins SUCK really. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 165

My how the tables have turned. Slutty Bella is now traumatized tentative Bella and traumatized and quiet Edward is becoming more confident and open Edward. Excellent play on the drama.*winks and gives high fives*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 163

I love how Charlie has standards 'hell no I didn't sleep with Sulpulcia' but he did sleep with Renee's sisters. Haha classic!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 147

Happy ending? What now we have two tortured abused individuals that have PTSD. This has been so difficult to muster. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 146

 Incestuous group of gross mobsters you have here. I repeat gross! Are we done with the torture and assult now? 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 145

Um she is being sexually assaulted and beaten. No penetration does not make this easier. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 118

You mean no thumb Riley?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 86

Really Bella? I'm pretty sure you promised Edward you would keep his confidence about his life story but there you go big mouth. JS

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 201

Love Love love thus chapter and this story.  Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 200

Love love love 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 199

I'm so happy that he made it for her graduation.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 198

Happy Esme is trying to be a friend to Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 197

At least nothing bad happened to  Bella while she was out drinking.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 196

Awesome chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 195

I knew Bella would be over joyed for Edward to  be home. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 194

Seems Edward is making a good impression on his bosses. Glad Esme accepts that Edward and Bella are serious. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 193

Glad Bella did not freak out. Glad she took control and realized that she needed to talk to someone and went to them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 192

This was kind of a sad chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 191

Glad they are getting back to themselves. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 190

Beautifully written. Awesome job. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 189

So glad Bella can end this chapter and move on to the next one. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 188

Things are moving right a long. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 187

II think Bella and Edward are going to be alright now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 186

I know Bella is glad that it is over with. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 185

Glad the trail is coming to an end  now maybe they can really move forward in their relationship.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 184

Lol. I can't believe that Aro has a new public defender.  I guess his high power lawyers wanted to get paid up front and are not really his friends. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 183

I hope that she doesn't lose it in front of Aro. 1

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 182

Glad Carlisle and Jasper were assigned to her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 181

Love love love!!!!!! Love that she had her own forever gift.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 180

Wow, I didn't know Edward's mom was wealthy.  Glad his father did not get a hold of her money. That is probably the reason he married her. He thought he was going to be rich. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 179

Love that Rose and Alice are becoming Bella's friends. What's the deal with Angie and Jessica?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 178

Glad they are talking and dating again. They need a new beginning. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 177

At least she was able to tell him who she saw. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 176

Don't mess with Mama Bear Esme!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 175

Poor Bella. Yes she us bring a brat for how she left things with Edward.  But people react to tragedy in different ways.  Again, why did she go out of the salon without someone. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 175

Poor Bella. Yes she us bring a brat for how she left things with Edward.  But people react to tragedy in different ways.  Again, why did she go out of the salon without someone. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 174

Where the heck is Bella?  Edward is being a jerk. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 173

Glad to see you are not sugar coating things. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 172

Loved Charlie's gifts to Bella. So glad they got to spend time together as daughter and father. Sweet chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 171

Glad he w as honest about the reason he was sad. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 170

Poor Edward.  He was hoping that Bella would stay with him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 169

Glad they are all getting along. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 168

Things have got to be so hard for Bella.  But each day gets a little easier. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 167

Love that Edward did that for Bella and for Charlie.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 166

I knew Aro was lying. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 165

The shoe is on the other for so to speak. When they 1st started dating Edward was afraid of touch and needed to take things slow. Now Bella is the one who needs to take things slow and is not wild about touch. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 164

Glad Bella is out if the hospital.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 163

Love love love me some Charlie 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 162

Bless her heart. At least she got it out this time. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 161

She  admitted that she still loves him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 160

Edward to save the day!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 159

Ol no bless Bella's heart for throwing up and her dad's for it being all-over him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 158

Bless Bella's heart. She is a mess. Charlie is there hopefully he can help her some. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 157

So Aro was telling her the truth about being her dad. I hate that. I was hoping he was just saying that to hurt her or he really thought it was true and it was not. I was hoping the DNA paper was a fake. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 157

So Aro was telling her the truth about being her dad. I hate that. I was hoping he was just saying that to hurt her or he really thought it was true and it was not. I was hoping the DNA paper was a fake. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 157

So Aro was telling her the truth about being her dad. I hate that. I was hoping he was just saying that to hurt her or he really thought it was true and it was not. I was hoping the DNA paper was a fake. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 156

So glad that Esme went and talked to her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 155

So glad that Bella is talking to someone and getting help. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 154

Glad she is giving "them" another chance.  Love the ending if the chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 153

Nnnooo!!!!!! She can't let him leave. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 152

I feel so sorry for Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 151

So glad that she let Edward comfort her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 150

Glad Edward could pull some strings for Charlie and for Bella.  She needs her daddy. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 149

Poor Charlie.  Does he know that Bella may not be his?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 148

I hope Aro got shot and is dead. But he needs to suffer  like Bella and all the other people he has hurt.  Maybe he will go to jail and be someone's bitch. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 147

She has been through a lot but at least she had not been raped. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 146

Aro is one sick dude. If Bella is really his daughter and he is letting James and Riley do those things to her that is just all kinds of wrong. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 145

Can't believe they are killing ttheir own people. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 144

What????? She loves Charlie!!!!! Is he the young boy she was in love with when she was younger?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 143

Sulpulcia is going to be nice to Bella.  Well, I did not see that coming. I am guessing that she was taken against her will too. Probably by Aro. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 142

James needs to die. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 141

Poor Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 140

OMGOSH!!!!! Poor Bella.  I hope she can over come all she has been through.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 139

I hope edward does not go into a flashback. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 138

I hope to goodness that they have not tortured Bella to bad. 

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Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 137

I knew Rose would set Emmett straight.  Glad Emmett listened to Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 137

I knew Rose would set Emmett straight.  Glad Emmett listened to Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 136

Glad Emmett apologized to Edward.  Glad they are talking 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 135

I know Emmett is pissed but he did not have to be an ass and beat the hell of Edward.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 134

Edward is handling things better than I thought 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 133

I kind of felt like Charlie was talking to the Feds. I also felt like Charlie knew Edward was with the Feds. Emmett will be happy when he sees Rose. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 132

Can't wait for this conversation coming up. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 131

I hope Edward is the one to find her. Charlie and Emmett are going to be pissed . 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 130

OMGOSH!!!!!!!!! Shit just hit the fan. So glad I do not have to wait for an update.  I a. So off to read the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 129

So glad they finally told each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 128

Beautiful!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 127

I say again, you write the best sex scenes. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 126

You write the best lemons

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 125

They finally told each other!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 124

Wow, Heidi has ties to Aro. I hope Carlisle and the Fed's are keeping tabs on Air and lots Edward know ahead of time what is going down.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 124

Wow, Heidi has ties to Aro. I hope Carlisle and the Fed's are keeping tabs on Air and lots Edward know ahead of time what is going down.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 123

I am worried that Angie had somethhing to do with Aro. I seriously hope not. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 122

They will never get clean at that rate. Lol. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 121

I hope Angie is not working with Aro. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 120

I am so afraid that Charlie is going to die before this story over. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2017 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 119

Glad Riley did not hurt Edward any more than he was already. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 118

I'm worried that Edward is not physically ready for whatever Carlisle needs him to do. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 117

Love that she got him a Sylvester.  Is Charlie already talking to the FED'S? Does he know about Edward? 

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