Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
good old charlie
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
look forward to reading thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 201
Great story I really enjoyed it!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 201
Great story, wonderful wedding and fabulous epilogue! I'm so glad I stuck with this , all 201 chapters. Some of it damn near killed me but it all turned out the way it should have! Bella says only one baby, but I know shw will want a miniature Edward to be a brother to Bethy. Thank you so much for another terrific story!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 200
Just flat out romantic! But then, look who was making the proposal! Lordy how that man loves that woman! And how she loves him back!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 199
What a guy! Practically killed himself getting home for Bella's graduation, and the big question after! His flight home sounds like a short day in Hell!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 198
Sounds to me like Bella did a great job finishing up her schooling, and has a bright future in publishing, even her writing! Those are accomplishments to be proud of!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 197
Sounds like Bella's boss might be a good friend , if she lets him. It hurt her to see Angie and be reminded how her cousins' abandoned her after the kidnapping!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 196
Another huge barrier overcome for Bella, and boy is Edward a happy, happy man!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 195
What a darling, loving man Edward is! And how blissfully happy he makes Bella. He even mjakes the cat happy!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 194
Must be what it's like for a zombie to fly cross country. Lucky Esme was able to pick him up at the airport. Now they are off to look at rings!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 193
It has surely been a godsend to have Irina to talk to. Bella is a bit short in the friend department, not to mention family. Hopefully Edward is so swamped with work, he hasn't had these same issues!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 192
Poor babies! Thy are really going to miss each other! Theynwill just have to keep busy and cross off the days!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 191
I envy them their cross countrytrip, even in the winter. They are both probably hoping the next six months goes by fast so they can be together again. They will miss each other but both have goals and lots of patience!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 190
What a wonderful Christmas for Bella and Edward! She ans Esme made peace with each other, and Bella introduced Edward to her mom. She told her all that had happened and I imagine it was healing for. The gifts to each other were very nice, but that swan tattoo he got for her was perfect! The best gift was the love they gave each other after so long. I nearly wept too at how beautiful it was!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 189
Bless you (and the jury, of course) for that wonderful verdict. Wonder if Bella will want to watch him die? I understand sometimes the victims and families have that privilege. That was so kind ans thoughtful of Phil to have Charlie there for the verdict.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 188
If the jury is not on drugs or suscepticle to bribery, Aro will be sentenced to die!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 187
A truly major step, to let his hands touch her scars and bare skin! They are getting there, slowly but surely!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 186
That was awful for Bella to have to recount what was done to her, but thank God it's over!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 185
The idea of Bella writing the fictional account of her time with Edward is a really good one! Now she just has to get through the testimony and they will both be rid of Aro forever! That kiss he laid on her will keep Bella's mind off how scared she is!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 184
It is good for our side that Aro is forced to have a public defender, and an inexperienced one at that! I'll bet it bothered the hell out of Edward to have to calmly recite the circumstances under which Bella was held!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 183
This is going to be tough for both Bella and Edward to testify, even though they both want him to be convicted and executed!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 182
Surprising that Bella has to go to a safe house for the duration of her testimony against Aro. I really hope she blasts him !
Date: 14 Feb 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 181
Lovely date, especially with the gift exchange. They are trying their very best to get back to where they were!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 180
I really like that they keep learning things about each other, makes it interesting!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 179
Well, at least now Bella is listening to her therapist. Irina is absolutely right when she says Edward is a bit more help because he's been through some of the same symptoms as Bella.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 178
I'm so glad they have decided to quit hiding from each other, and to try to get back what they once had!
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 177
If there really are going to be lemons in their future, it will have to be very slow and gentle, her with a leg that always hurts and him with a broken arm pinned back together!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 176
Seeing that guy who was one of Aro's guys put Bella into full-blown meltdown and she needs Edward to come back from where she's hiding in her mind. Thank God he hasn't given up on her yet! Sure pissed off his mama, though, getting out of bed the day he has surgery on his arm! So, mom drives and he worries! What a pair, he and Bella!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 175
Now, now I want to shake her until her teeth rattle! This having to do it on her own is bullshit! She ought to listen to her therapist for heaven's sake, that's what she pays her for!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 174
All her issues aside, that was a cowardly way to move out!These two just can't seem to hurt each other enough! What a damn mess!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 173
Anyone that would gripe about Bella's attitude has obviously never had trauma in their life, or else is clueless. Either way, their opinion is a bit skewed. Edward has a ton of patience because he's been where Bella is, in a roundabout way. They deal together better than apart, that's for sure!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 172
So emotional, it was almost enough to get me misty-eyed, too! It will be tough for Charlie and Bella both, but so worth it in the end. He'll be be free and she should be much better by the time he gets out.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 171
Like he said, he understands why she wants to leave and have her independence, he just doesn't have to like it!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 170
Poor guilt-ridden Edward, she breaks his heart without even trying!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 169
Bella has a real problem about the scars those monsters all left on her body, and also her soul! Glad she is having some fluff time with the girls.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 168
Wish I could tell Bella it will get better, it just takes a while. She really is coming back to herself, just not as fast as she wants!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 167
Isn't Edward just about the best guy in the world?
Date: 13 Feb 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 166
Thank heavens for that bit of good news! It was preying on Bella's mind so much, it should relieve that burden from her mind!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 165
It is getting a little better, but the trial may cause a setback. I really like that Bella is staying with Edward for a bit, but I see why she wants to go home. The stairs sure are going to make that a problem.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 164
Lighten up Edward, it's your girl and her father, it will be okay!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 163
There probably is no use intesting again, but it will make both of them happier. Good thing Aro's wife was lying about that much, at least!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 162
Thankfully Bella seems to be doing better in the Seattle hospital! Maybe it's just the idea of being home? Hard as it was she has told him and now we'll see what Charley has to say!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 161
I can't believe knowing the truth will make a spits worth of difference to Charlie. Bella is the child of his heart, always has been, always will be!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 160
I think I'll help Edward kick ass and take names! Of all the careless, stupid cruelty, I can't believe it happened to Bella again! Does this girl ever get a break?
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 159
Bella was so happy to see her dad even with all her tears, and then she vomits all over him! That is seriously messed up, no pun intended!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 158
What she went through will be a while healing and some scars may never disappear, and not just physical scars, either!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 157
Too bad they feel bound to try Aro in court. They ought to smear him with honey and throw him in a pit with a couple of bears, let them take care of him! Bella and Edward are going to make it, just not right away.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 156
How sweetly thoughtful of Edward to send his mom to be a friend to Bella, and he sent Sylvester,too!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 155
Dr. Cope seems to be making progress with Bella and her demons. It's awful that she can't sleep without nightmares, that's no way to get well!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 154
A big woo hoo, indeed!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 153
Bella might just as well rip his heart out of his chest, it wouldn't hurt him any worse!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 152
Well, I see Bella is going to be giving Edward a ration for a while, no big surprise there I guess.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 151
Never expected to see them fall immediately into each other's arms, all forgiven! It's probably going to take a while for both of them to heal, physically and emotionally. Plus Edward has school to finish and the bar exam.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 150
It really does help to have friends in the right places! They are being very nice to Charlie
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 149
I'm not surprised that Charlie wants Edward to take care of Bella, especially since he's always know who he really was! Those fiendish bastards, James and Riley almost did Bella in, I'm beyond thrilled Edward killed both of them! They got off too easy, is all!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 148
Don't know and for the moment, don't care. I'm worried about Bella with her mangled leg and battered, bleeding body, poor abused little thing! I'm almost as glad as Edward that she wants him with her now that she's out of that hellhole!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 147
James, the stupid son-of-a-bitch, probably nicked a vein or an artey when he cut Bella's tatoo off her body! Ignorant, evil, pencil-pricked bastard!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 146
Anything done to these bastards would be too damn good for them!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 145
Frankly I've had about all I can take and just want this shit to end, now! It's beyond horrible, and since I have a quirky memory it will stay with me nearly forever! No way to rinse out my brain!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 144
Well, well, how interesting! Sulpicia loves Charlie! That would piss off Aro if he knew! Well, even if she drugged her again, at least Bella is cleaner and had some food and water!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 143
Of all the people to help Bella, somehow I'm not surprised it would be Aro's wife.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 142
You really think what he's doing to her isn't rape? Maybe it isn't penetration but trust me, it's rape of a sort! My God, poor Bella! Good thing she's a stong girl!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 141
I knew I would hate this part! These cretins will do awful things to Bella, I'm afraid!