Date: 25 Jul 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 38
Oh god I hope he remembers again!
Heart wrenching, but maybe just the thing Bella needs!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 38
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Jul 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 37
This story always has me crying.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing you should continue it soon.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
OMG is he coming out of it to give her hope she needs some good things to happen
Date: 30 Jun 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 37
Bella and Edward are so strong. It is sad that they feel weak. They will get through this phase and will hopefully enter an easier one.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
Omg! I have never cried so much with a story I've read.
You are truely a talented writer. You can bring out the emotions on not only the characters but the readers as well.
Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully get to some chaps without crying.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 37
I knew she needed to visit Charlie after the dream. Good chapter!
Date: 28 Jun 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wonderful with Charlie! Perhaps things are going to start looking up. Great story; thanks for writing!
Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 37
I hope Charlie is back- Bella needs him. Renee no one needs Renee lol
Date: 19 Jun 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 36
I love the story but it makes me cry so much pain and love.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 35
I just cant imagin how hard this would be to go through.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
Bless their hearts.
Date: 18 Jun 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
This was good
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 36
This was very hard to read. It was a necessary part of the story, but it is hard to read. Hopefully they will have good news soon.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 36
So sad. Still hoping for a HEA
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you for the chapter. I can say as family member of cancer patients you are right there on the treatment. When the cancer is so far along they do the chemo/radiation first and surgery last. After radiation you can not have any surgery for 6 weeks until your system cools.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
I hope Esme gets a HUGE settlement from the school district! It might make their lives a little, tiny bit easier.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapter. It was very touching.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww but this chapter.... can't wait for the next!! really hate Mr. Greene
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 35
These two have to go through so much at such a young age
Date: 27 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 34
This was such a sweet sexual experience. They are both so innocent in this one situation. They have both faced everyone's worse fears, yet they are so innocent in other ways. They both need to heal for much more, but it was a start in learning about each other. They married for true love.
Date: 26 May 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was sweet. Everything they have been through already in there life they are ready to be married
Date: 25 May 2014 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
Our sick babies are married.
Date: 24 May 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Sweet chapter!
Date: 21 May 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
This is such a sad (but good story) I am crying like a baby.... Can't wait for the next update....
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
This chapter was such a tear jerker. I with them both the best. Edward needs to get stronger and Bella has to beat this cancer this time. They both deserve a happy ending.
Date: 19 May 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
This is such an amazing story, although all of your stories are. I have been reading your stories for years and am always happy when you start something new. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 18 May 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 33
I get why you cried so did I. Our sick babies.
Date: 18 May 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
Our sick babies getting married. well if they don't live long they want what they have together..
Date: 18 May 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
I just can not blame her. Any child needs a future and the ones that are robbed of that suffer. This my dear is hard to read.
Author's Response:
It's emotionally draining to write, too. Just so much between the two of them.
Date: 18 May 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hospitals and procedures.. ugh..
Date: 18 May 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
Girl this story has happy moments but there is alot of sadness.
With regards to the principal. Just report him to the board after you gather information and let him get fired.
Date: 17 May 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Marriage? they are children, sick children.
Date: 17 May 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
a Bump in the road. We hope.
Date: 17 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh he passed out.
Date: 17 May 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
Emmett in your story is the head of his family and he has done well with it.
Date: 17 May 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
the issue with updates. I know how you are. I just wait until you get further along to read your stories because I hate rereading all the time. It is hard to read a chapter ever so often and get a feel for a story. I don't write but when writers get mulitple stories out there and they get real life problems they get behind. Then they give up or get mad at us for asking for updates.
I always say I am not reading anymore WIP it is difficult to keep myself into it. Some stories you can do that but others it is a loss.
Date: 17 May 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Emmett is doing a better job of raising his syblings than Carlisle. So the home life is better and then there is Rose she acts as a mother would or older sister with Bella. Perfect or not they seem to balance the family life better. Carlisle is just young and troubled and he needs to be strong so Alice and Edward can lean on him more. Edward is eat up with guilt. They all need therapy.
Date: 17 May 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
The story is hard because it deals with the effects of loss in families and how they go forward. Each person is affected differently. Alice has the rage and the anger. Edward feels such guilt and Carlisle responsibility and grief.
I would say Bella' family is better adjusted because her syblings are older.
Date: 17 May 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Luv it but... Head still hurts from crying..👍
Date: 17 May 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
They all have similiar problems life and death and surviving with guilt. And syblings trying to raise their brothers and sisters. Sad but then again life is like that you have to find the will to keep going.
Date: 17 May 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
The whole lot of them needs help. Rose and Emmett and possibly Esme just work to keep everyone going. Bella, Alice, Edward and Carlisle each have problems.
Date: 17 May 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
he has lost his parents and now is raising syblings.. It is a hard job.
Date: 17 May 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
that made me cry.
Date: 17 May 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
My heart is braking so sad so much love but so sad. I love this story it makes my eyes wet lol
Date: 16 May 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 33
a very emotional chapter!!
Date: 16 May 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 33
Crying as well! Such a good story, keep up the great work!
Date: 15 May 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
My eyes are full of tears but I am fighting to keep them from falling because I am out of tissues here and have to go into another room to get them!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
This chapter brought the tears. These 2 families have become one. They need each other.
Date: 13 May 2014 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
This family has such an emotional burden. Edward needs to realize that a mom would truly do anything to save her child. She would want him to take her heart. Now he needs to live and be happy. She would not be happy that he feels so guilty to be alive.
Date: 12 May 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Just found story and I love it. It is so sad, but good.
Date: 09 May 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 32
Make me cry like a baby Wow heavy shit
Date: 09 May 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yep, they need to get married now. These folks need something to be happy about.
Date: 01 May 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
My heart is braking so sad. She has to have hope she needs to find Edward go to him.
Date: 01 May 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
This is so sad. Poor Bella.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow...Now I am sobbing
Date: 22 Apr 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG my heart is braking
Date: 22 Apr 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bless her heart.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
So sad I want Bella to speak
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
How sad but there is so much love between all of them
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
That would be so hard to watch a loved one go through that.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
This story is so sad, but I love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
poor Bella. I hope everything goes well for her
Date: 11 Apr 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow. So much going on for them, and in an easily scary way. But it was so wonderful that Edward asked to marry her... and that she wants to marry him. That part of it all is so very sweet! Thanks for writing!
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow so much sad to take. I have always believed in the saying God will only give you as much as you can handle but sometimes that does not seem right.
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
Aww, so sad. Sweet ending. You do write HEA's, right? These people need some happy!
Author's Response:
I do write HEA...most of the time at least.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think he was being an ass he put his life on her sholders not nice but he wants what is best for her. Alice should be mad and Edward not Bella that was not nice either but she has to blame someone and she doesnt want that to be Edward.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Didn't see that coming!
Date: 27 Mar 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Haha poor Edward can't control his own mouth love it
Date: 24 Mar 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
The familys get how connected they are now and how in love Bella and Edward are. Love it
Date: 24 Mar 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Heart wrenching chapter.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please say it is a panic attact . She is sharing something very special to her.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Another trauma for these sad people. Poor Edward.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope he's alright
Date: 16 Mar 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow what a great first date all the honest talk they did about there family's great start to there realationship.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet chapter!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so glad to see that all these hurt people can help each other.
Date: 14 Mar 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alice is opening up and feeling comfortable they all are getting comfortable. doing normal things and loving it.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love the conection they all have it is time for healing. so glad Carlisle is pulling his head out of his ass when did he get Esme's number???
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
So excited for Bella and Edward big step. I feel so sad for Esme for all of them so much pain to break through
Date: 01 Mar 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was so sweet he feels like a real boy lol
Date: 01 Mar 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aww, that was so sweet.