Date: 30 Jul 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Does anyone ever think before they speak? Even smart people are really dumb. See you tomorrow. Thanks.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love this chapter. As much as I want him around, I love that she's finally telling him off. But he's doing the thing I most want...he's staying.
Can't wait for tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
I never wanted her like this!...Well, shit! Bella is going to jump to the wrong conclusion
Date: 28 Jul 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my fucking god lol. Edward is such a dumbass! He may not have laid the hurt on him, but now I ope she runs likethe wind after she kicks him in the nads!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
Make your mind up, Edward
Date: 27 Jul 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
Mom ALWAYS come first! I'm glad she could work some aggression out on his butt! When is the rest of the merry crew showing up? When will Jake phase back to human? Rose and Emmett are really hitting bells last nerve...it's like PMS for vamps! Thanks for the updats, see you next time.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Perfect. She's angry enough to teach him a lesson but not enough that she hates him. Emmett's 'duh' should be said to Edward for thinking she hated him. It's a beating born from hurt...not hate. He should know that.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad he came back without prompting from the others. Can't wait to hear what is going to happen with them...rose has some explaining to do. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Bella, you go girl!!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
People are weird. I've given up ever trying to understand them. You'll just hurt you're head trying to work out their motivation. Yeah the last chapter was a bit head hurting but as you said its not like they didn't have the last 25 chapters to get used to the style of the story. Sometimes I go back and re read a chap a few times because I feel like I've missed something and usually I have, not because of the way you've written it, but usually because I've not taken my time to read it properly because I'm so excited to have a new chapter. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm still in and ready for the next chapter. Go Bella!! Haha
Date: 24 Jul 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
No actually do I not know what it is or who made it the whole last set of sentences doesn't even make sense to me.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad Bella is letting her anger out. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 22 Jul 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
OK...I must admit, I have to read these a couple at a time, just to understand the flow...I can see where Rose is trying to have, for lack of it, a heart. Maybe she is trying to make restitution for her terrible attitude toward Bella. I thing it may be a big reason why, and I'm guessing, that they felt the need to run. Billy was out of line...guilt is a awful thing, and there seems to be a ton of it. Will Jake kindly back away long enough to let Alice show Edward the 'now' Bella? Or will he be a shadow over her existence to Edward? Thanks for the updates, love them...but I need to read several together to run them right. Waiting for Edward to show...and the rest of the family...
Date: 22 Jul 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ooh. She could keep jake around just to fuck with Edward. I always think he got off far too easy in New Moon. He needs a full mind fuck as punishment I believe. And where is the abandoning 'mother' Esme. (I have no issues at allllll with the good Cullens lol).
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved this chapter
Date: 20 Jul 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ewww jake and Bella. Just no. And head as a bowling ball would be awesome. Or maybe she could throw it at Em's clueless head. And isn't this whole story kinda a tease? Isn't that the point. Maybe I'm getting it wrong but I like the tease factor, it makes me want to come back for more each time.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOL. Poor Bella. I wonder why Jake didn't make himself known? Well, atleast she wasn't all alone like she believed herself to be.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Omg it is out of this world. Hi bella what ....
Date: 18 Jul 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Damn. I have a sinking feeling that this bit of news isn't going to end well for Jake. And I kinda think Emmett said that on purpose to take her focus off of them. Hmm...can't wait for tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
It's all starting to make sense
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
Tits are still intact I see lol.
Author's Response:
Sorry, I know you wanted them removed, but we kind of still need them. Lol. ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2013 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Woo hoo!!! I'm doing the Carlton dance as we speak!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for the next update
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow. Didn't see that one coming.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay! Is Bella going to hand Rosalie her tits now? Please?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm getting more intrigued with each chapter. You gave me so much more info in this one. Edward didn't leave her like he did in New Moon. He took her somewhere alone, and left her at some point after that. Now something "wrong" is coming for her.
Wow! Can't wait to find out what the wrong is!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
You keep giving me more reasons to cry for Bella. How her heart must break wondering if something as inconsequential as a shiver caused Edward to leave; or worse yet, something she said in her sleep. May I please go spend some time with her, and reassure her that you love Edward too... and you are going to fix this? ;)
Great chapter, Chloe.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
This chapter really tugged at my heart. In just a few small words, you make her pain so visceral. This: " but I don't now how to stop them, the memories of him from leaving me, vanishing into this same air that he did"
And her pain at thinking he has forgotten her... I'm dying.
But you also made me happy when I learned that New Moon Edward was your favorite. I thought I was the only one!! Most people choose NM as their least favorite movie. To me, in that movie their love was just undeniable. It was forever, no matter what happened to either of them. We should have a "watch-along" sometime, and chat online while we watch!!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Is she going to get to pound anyone? At the moment that's my focus lol.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh man! I'd love to see Bella hand Rosalie her tits on a plate!
Author's Response:
This made me laugh out loud. Thank you. ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm completely lost.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Jesus woman! The puzzle I was putting together just got flung off the board.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
My guess is Carlisle, Alice and jasper.
Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sisters of the blonde persuasion?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to the next update
Date: 11 Jul 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward, Alice and Jasper...maybe?? *crosses fingers*
And Jake (hopefully) breaks his silence as well.
And Bella frozen without words. Will she get her wish? Did he come back for her?
Date: 10 Jul 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
So, in this version she went away to school in Alaska with Edward and then he left her?
Date: 10 Jul 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Your killing me!! But it's pleasant torture lol.
Date: 10 Jul 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Uh oh...who's coming that has the wolf so freaked out?
Date: 09 Jul 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Lovely as always. Thank you
Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Where is she?????? I am dying to know where she is.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella needs to get away from Jacob wolf so Alice can see. Thanks for writing.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
No she can't forget him. She just has to keep thinking of their life together. She'll remember if she just keeps thinking. Either that or she just needs to go find him.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
New moon Edward was my fave too!! His clothes in that were the best. And I'm not bored at all. I'm intrigued.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Still enjoying the updates and to seeing where this goes.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
I see...one of the wolves found her. And it's familiar to her, could it be Jake? If no one told her what happened to him, any details of why he was just gone, maybe he wasn't gone at all. Maybe, now that he found her, she wouldn't be alone. But wait, that can't happen because then Alice will never see if she cares to look.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Something big found her. Maybe a bear, who knows. But does she feed on animals now since her eyes are still red or is it simply too soon for them to turn gold.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wait...they left to live in Alaska? And that's where she is now? So I have to ask again...when is this??
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is killing me. She just needs to find him. He'll want her now that she's like him.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
She knows he would have never left if he knew her life wouldn't have turned out the way he thought she deserved. And now, because he doesn't know, she's left to live alone. So sad. She should go find him.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder what she'll say or do if she does find them again and finds out that Edward told Alice not to look. That she would have never seen what happened because she listened.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Of course he'd want her. If he knew.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm curious how long it's been since she was changed considering that Charlie and Jake are both dead.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gah, I feel so bad for her. She's hurting so much and there's nothing she can do about it.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I'm excited to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
So sad, Chloe. But soooo good! So Jake was her friend, and he disappeared.
So many wonderful lines in this chapter... "to not mean what he said"... "to not mean it anymore". Such beautiful writing, girl.
And the matching holes... you are slowly killing me. Hugs to you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is the enemy Jake??
Date: 07 Jul 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
She's breaking my heart...
Date: 07 Jul 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yes, the imprinting gave it away. So the wolves have found her. But what do they want?
Chloe, this isn't going to be a Bella/Jake story, is it? Please tell me no. You would't do that, would you? I love this story, and I think you're an amazing writer. But I don't do Bella/Jake... like NEVER... EVER. ;)
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't know what she means. I'm wondering about the red "imprinting" on her snow... interesting choice of words there, Chloe. Could it be?
I'm stumped by the "just inside of green... that isn't any more"
Maybe I'l find out in the next chapter? :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
She's breaking my heart too!! This chapter was really, really sad; and now my heart is sore. :( But I have faith. I won't throw my laptop on the floor like I did New Moon when I read it.
I loved the "glitch" part: and gltchlessly carried him away... brilliant, sweet girl!!
I'll keep reading and reviewing; but if my reviews get kind of slurred and irrational, you'll know you've driven me to the vodka!! Just teasing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so thankful that she hasn't lost her faith in Edward and Alice. She knows that they would come for her, if they knew. Therefore, I have faith in you!! But my heart is still breaking for her. I'm assuming Charlie is dead, and not turned. But don't tell me if I'm wrong. ;)
Still on pins and needles here, and still loving it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now I'm getting nervous. Someone knows where she is, and they made sure she knew it!!! And she's not alone? You're killing me here, Chloe.
Absolutely love this part: he didn't want to change me but he did the second I saw him across the room the first time
Fur-covered heartbeats?
Wow, just wow!!
By the way, I "get" it!! xoxo
Date: 05 Jul 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Still loving this story. Anyone can write the same old thing over and over. Not this one. Brilliant!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope he comes back - and soon!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really hope she can keep faith in Edward and Alice not knowing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
I swear, Chloe, I am going to be a wreck soon. You are killing me with every line. Poor Bella. I just want to hug her and tell her everything will be all right. It will be, won't it? Won't it, Chloe? It breaks my heart that instead of being hopeful now that she is like him, she is worried that he won't want the new her.
This part made me weak: "but he could do that without touching me at all leave a mark his
You are so talented. This one is blowing my mind.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I say fuck em! I will never understand why people feel the need to complain about a writing style. If its not for you move on. And if some people are saying its dragging then they have no idea about building a story or they don't like the thought of having to use their brain and actually think about a story instead of having it spoon fed to them.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm sure he still loves and wants her
Date: 01 Jul 2013 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm dying to know who did it to her. I want to assume Victoria but there's that saying about assumptions....and if it was her, did she leave Charlie alive? Can't wait to read more, I'm a sucker for miserable Bella.
Date: 30 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very cryptic. Very intriguing too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved this line... "and here was the last place I felt alive
because it was the last place Edward was with me in"
I am dying here, girl. This has totally captivated me; and I can't wait for the next chapter. "will never again begin"? Gah, get her to Edward... please...
I REALLY love this!!
Author's Response:
I promise you I want her to get to him. Or him to her.
Thank you so so so so much for your thoughts and FEELINGS about this. They make me a giddy girl. xo
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
is Bella alone then?
Author's Response:
In case you don't see the other... yes. For now. ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really great story. Nice change with the styling. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you can find it nice, instead of the 'annoying' I feared hearing. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
different but good :)
Author's Response:
:) :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good lord, you're killing me with this story, poem, whatever you want to call it. I call it AWESOME! It is so unique and utterly astounding. I go back and reread it, so I can be sure I didn't miss any of the extraordinary feelings you have written. This is really, really good, Chloe.
Author's Response:
Again... sooooo happy. Thank you. I hope I can keep you here. :)
Date: 28 Jun 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful start. Interested to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was brilliant! It almost made me cry. Please tell me you are going to continue it. We NEED to know who, what, why, and what comes next. ;)
Author's Response:
This made me so happy. :)