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Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Wonderful chapter! I am anxious to meet Anthony.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

How can Kate leave her son and live somewhere else?!?!? That chick is a piece of work! Jand is no joke, Kate's parents better relax and not fight them.....how will Anthony react to meeting Edward? ??

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs

He's too sweet with her. What else does she have to tell him. She's a virgin so she can't have a kid...

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert

Pretty messed up he toyed with
Tanya

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Another lovely chapter, thank you.

Happy 2014.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise

Lmao!!!! Edward! 

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce

He's too cute all smitten with her!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss

Awwwwwwwwwwww he was kind of harsh for thinking she'd let to him though...

Reviewer: pussy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Hello, i live in Lisbon, Portugal so i have been in France 3 times the last one on August of 2013 and you must put Lil Bite on Eurodisney of course. For Edward ande Bella a must is the trip on the river Senna, there are several boats who offer meals and candleligths and will be great to see Lil Bite on the boat with the candles and the proud mamma and pappa. This year near Notre Dame on one side of the Senna the parisiens put sand for the people but the kids... God that was beautiful, seeing them there, because they don't have beach .

by Luisa

 

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet

What does Rosalie need to take care of? Why does she need to sleep at her place? Does Bella have a baby?

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert

I'm glad he dumped her! I hope Bella can prove she's worth it for Edward to trust!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

I love how smitten Edward is with Bella and how fast his family caught on!

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours

Loving this story! 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Wow. Kate really hid her son and went all the way with that lie. Screw her. I'm excited for Edward.

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours

Wow~ I love when he's a jerk to everyone but Bella! 

Reviewer: mitzi37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery

I'm hooked this story is going to be good I can tell!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

So beautiful cant wait for more

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

They're going to Paris!!!! How lucky!!!

They'll have a great time. But dirst, they're meeting Anthony. After Bill's reaction, I'm a bit worried as to how the  meeting will go. Bella anf Lil Bit's presence will be helpful, though.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

To funny lol

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Bella is right: men are strange. Happy New Year!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

men are so different than women

the way the analaze stuff man

poor jasper. but i guess it was better edward got to him before the bear em did

love it

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Great chapter. Loved he man logic. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Edward was so funny. I love this side of him.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

That was funny. Great job here. Ready for more.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

lol..... Jasper was very lucky! hope you had a wonderful Christmas!

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

lol at least they found away to start the evening before starting the party. i hope esme doesnt freak out to much when she hears bella and edward want to move up the wedding. keep up the good work

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Happy Holidays and thank you for the wonderful present of this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

That was the best need to think of the child first I just love them all

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

None of them will punish him for his past but boy will they punish Kate how could she.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast

omg that proposal was so precious!! and his proposal to lil bit was so adorable i shared it with my family!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Still loving this sweet couple and their story.

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

ok i fucking ADORE vicky!!!!  omg she is amazing and hilarious and awesome! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

He made great decisions for his son. No selfish intent, and He included Bella in everything. So Bella is on board now to move up the date....Esme is gonna be the hard sell. ..

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

So much to look forward to. Sweet temptations is a sweet ride. 

 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Good for Edward. I'm excited to read about the party and wedding. And anxious about Anthony.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 33

Great family dialogue. I missed this and read the next chapter first. Loved the Cullen support. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

I loved this chapter. It is so sweet.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Edward is doing great in regards to his son. Are you going to make Kate evil?  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Yes, Edward is being mature and more important, thinking about Anthony first. No wonder Jane agreed to represent him. We'll learn the reasons behind Kate's decision, although I can't find a logical one as to why she's kept this from him, other than fear he'd take the boy from her. The Edward before Bella might have done it, I guess.

So, they only need to get Esme on board for the  wedding date change. Something tells me Alice will be more against it than Esme. ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 32

suprsise suprise

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 33

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 33

Edward needs to get primary custody of his son. Kate took him from his father. She doesn't deserve him. If she does it without a fight, she may get visitation, but she really deserves jail. If she didn't have other children, I would send her there and throw away the key.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 33

What a dramatic chapter, I am so looking forward to more.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 33

Wow, this is some news indeed! I'm happy that Edward managed to talk it out immediately with Bella, after calming down of course ;)

I'm curious to see what the relationship between Kate and Anthony is like! I mean if she is a good mother, then she would just accept it (but then again she wouldn't have hidden it for all this time) and Edward could get to know Anthony. But I assume that you're not gonna make it that easy!
Probably Kate is still a bitch (the Professor left her, didn't he?) and is not too happy with her situation.
What I'm wondering about is whether she knew that she was pregnant again when she broke up with Edward.  Maybe she just found out some weeks later. Doesn't make it any better though.

The story is amazing and I'M really looking foward to reading the next chapter!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 33

Bella's reaction was impressive. She's an amazing woman.

i'm sure the PI will do as good a job as before or even better. We all need to know more about Anthony and, yes, Kate too. I sense a massive confrontation innthe future.

and we can't forget jow adorable Lil'Bit was with Edward fainting.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 33

Oh damn. I'm excited to see everyone unite to meet Anthony.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 33

pefect family

the support they give each other is great

i am glad bella is supporting edward. it wasn't edward's fault. he was lied to.

wow the family is getting bigger. love it

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 33

Omg what a wonderful chapter!   Love this story! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow, what a chapter!

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

I can't wait to hear the results of the investigation. Really great chapter.

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 33

i hope kate gets whats coming to her and edward can get the right ot be with his son, as a visitor or with full custody. keep up the good work

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow. I had no idea you were going to take us there. Great chapter though. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 33

loved how they all can together as a family unit...get to hiring the PI, Kate should be in so dire need these days since the professor left.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 33

I just want to gather them all up in a group hug.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 33

omg, Kate is lower than low! just sickening that she could do that! who's going to pull all Kate's hair out first??? Esme, Bella or Alice....hell even Vicki!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 33

i love the circle the wagons too my sisters and i have done that many times cause no one messes with family hope esme has a go at kate! xo

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 32

ooohhh crap this isnt good. i wander if bella knew that was in the file or not? i hope kate gets her but handed to her for her tricking and lying to bella, keep up the good work

Author's Response:

thanks so much for your comments.  I will be posting the next chapter very soon - i hope you like it. 

cheers, 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 32

what a cliffie

everything was going well.  oh goodness how is this going to go down



Author's Response:

yeah sorry about the cliffie - couldn't be helped.  But i will be posting the next chapter soon so i won't drag it out too long. 

thanks for your comments. 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 32

holy crap! Bella's probably freaking cause he hung up like that, Esme and Edward are plotting murder and poor Lil Bit just wants to change her name......next one's a doozy!

Author's Response:

Yes I can't imagine Bella will be too happy for him hanging up like that.  I'd be mad too.  I will be posting the next chapter very soon. 

thanks for your comments and for reading. 

cheers, 

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 32

I so did not see this coming and I'm in desperate need for the next chapter. Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

yeah that was a surprise alright.  Dear Edward, so much for him to deal with but i think he's up for it. 

I'll be posting the next chapter today.

thanks for your comments and support. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 32

So when Bella did the background check on Edward she accidentlly found Kate w/Edwards child...and no one new because they didn't go through the pictures till now....canb not wait for him to confront Kate

Author's Response:

You are so good to keep track of it all.  Yes the showdown between Edward and Kate promises to be a doozy.  She's betrayed him three times.  

thanks for your comments and for reading my story.

cheers, 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 32

Well I wasn't expecting that cliffy !!!!

where is his son now ? Lil Bit is gaining a lot of siblings...wonder how that will work out.



Author's Response:

yeah sorry about the cliffie - but there was no other way... 

Lil Bit's family is certainly growing more and more.  

thanks for your comment and for reading my story. 

cheers, 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

What a cliffy.  Loved the chapter.



Author's Response:

i hated to leave it there but it was the natural place to leave it.  i think we all need time to recover from that little bombshell.  

I hope to update very soon but am at a work conference for the next two days.  Do you think they'd mind if i wrote my fanfic while they're talking?  I might try it :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks for your comment.  i hate cliffies but it was the only place to leave the chapter in a sensible way.  I hope to update soon.

thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

WOW! I did not see that coming. Great twist. 



Author's Response:

thank you.  This is Edward's journey and this is an important point of closure for him. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

there goes bella and edward there probably wont be a wedding now edward will think bella new all along..so i am just  going to say they story was  great while it lasted but i am not going to stick around to go through the anguish...



Author's Response:

My darling reader 

of course it is up to you whether you stay or go. but I need to tell you that darling Edward is going to marry his bella and soon. That he is overjoyed to have a son and is grateful to his bella because she has made all the good things in his life possible.

i wouldn't want you to think I would abandon our darling little family.

cheers

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

Oh My.  You know she's gonna come out of the wood work now that he is sole owner of a fortune 500 company.



Author's Response:

Thx for your comment.  Always w Edward it is two steps forward one step back.  But I believe he and bella can deal w Kate.

thx for reading.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow I did not see that one coming. A son? How will that work out?



Author's Response:

Thx for your comment.

I can tell you that Edward will never let go of his sweet one or his lil bit.  This is the journey of his heart healing and learning to beat again.  He is grateful to his Bella for bringing this new piece of his heart back to him.  It won't be angst it will just another step on his journey.


Thx again for reading.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

I love this story. I can't wait for more. I also can't wait until Edward gets his son back and buries Kate for all her sins.



Author's Response:

Thx for your comment.  I have to say I am with you when it comes to dealing with Kate.

ta for reading

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

bella just has to get him in trouble with her food, always got him moaning out loud. roflmao. keep up the good work

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

I thought the chapter was great. The whole scene was perfect for Thanksgiving week. I cannot wait for the wedding.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

 thrilled they are going to get to the bottom of this royce situation

jasper seems like he just might fit into this family

love how things are going

thank you

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Love, love, love Esme!!!. .lol. Edward will never learn , will he? ;) glad they had some good family time

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

I loved it!  Just like this entire story,  simply perfection! 

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

This story always warms my heart and puts a smile on my face. Thank you for the wonderful update :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

OMG, I LOVE YOUR STORY CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE. GREAT WRITING.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Love theses people. So much fun.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Love Esma she is such a mom lol.  I so love Jasper he just wants his family

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Loved the chapter!!! :D

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Yeah. But why do I want cherry pie now?

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

i love the chapter and the story, hope you update soon!! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Another lovely chapter, thank you.  

My hubs and I lived in different towns for nearly a year.  It help us remember why we were married as the time we did get to spend together was so special.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Plans are being made, the future looks bright, it's good they're getting a nice break and time to enjoy things. I can't wait for the party snd for Jasper and lil'Bit to formally meet.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

all that food made me hungry i want pie and its 5oo am lol have a great weekend

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

*wipes forehead* for a minute there i thought edward had done something wrong. im glad that the only thing he did was keep a secret even if it got him in trouble. i am glad that jasper isnt going to take lil bit and is willing to be with the family without hurting everyone. keep up the good work

Reviewer: JAZZPURR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Love the nice JAZPUR!   Give Mr King h...e...'ll. ;-)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Well, sadly I came by late yesterday!   I have now caught up!   Omg this is fantastic!    Totally love Lil Bit!  How adorable can one child be?   Love this Edward & Bella, and the ever eclectic mix of family and friends!    

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Yes, I want Jasper to be a good guy who just wants to be near his family!!!

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

I am so pleased that Jasper is not a bad guy. He just wants to be near the only family he has left which makes him more loveable. 

 

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery

Hi,

I can't believe that I've only found your delightful story now!! But on the plus side - I have 30 chapters to read so yay for me!

justginger

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

love the story and love the chapter very much!! i knew jasper  couldn't be that bad, i hope jane destroys the law firm...  i want to see what edward says to esme about the pregnancy news :-D i hope you update soon 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Now I'm wondering why would Jasper's lawyer do that? Money is. my best guess. I hope we find out.

how did Esme find out? I don't see Bella just telling her. I'd love to know how she got Bella to confess or/and admitt it.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Great chapter. I am still a little leery of jasper but I will get over it. What about his jerk attorney though?  

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Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert

Excellent! 

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Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

Oh, so good

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