[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
Really good, you have a keen eye for details in a story!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
Well I'm glad they clear that mess up and that Jasper is good!! :) loved the chapter!! :D
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
I really like this story! Very good great background!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
Looks delicious!
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
Jasper stepped right into the Lioness Den. I'm glad the confusion has been cleared up and our southern gentlemen was not there to harm Bella or Elizabeth. Thank you for the wonderful update :)
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
I was waiting patiently for an update I LOVE this story how many more chapters do u think in going hate to c it end
Date: 17 Nov 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
A beautiful chapter, so well written. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
WOW!, Jasper's lucky he made it through alive...lol OMG, Leah was awesome! Royce is so dead, can't wait till Jane gets to him! How did Esme find out??? love this story! awesome job!! :D
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
I can totally see the lawyers trying to pull a fast one for cash. I bet they did not count on the fact that he would go straight to Seattle. I bet they are in for it now.
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup
Jasper he is such a good guy and will be welcomed to the family. I love how Bella and Leah layed into him lpoor guy didnt stand a chance lol. I want them to rip Royce Kings balls off or just ruin his buisness lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
roflmao, helllooo jasper! finally you make an appearance after all this time of wandering where you were. i hope that whatever he really wants does not tear this family apart more than it already is. keep up the good work
Date: 06 Nov 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter
well discovery is always good it tells us the why someone acts the way they do.. Tyler and Zafrina.. well well.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
What is Jasper doing does he just want family or does he have a death wish lol.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
That shit will not happen how could he. Does he just want control of the money little bit has??
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Bella would not lie maybe that child is her sister. She is raising since her parents died.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
Jacob as always. I can do without him..
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
it is all so good. When does he fall apart? I know this bad boy will .
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Great chapter!!!! And nice surprise with Jasper. Is it possible that Jasper is really Lil Bits father ?
cant wait for more :)
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?” He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy. “You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption. “We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs
More to tell. Well she maybe sterile after that bad crash. No babies for her.
Date: 05 Nov 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Loved it and I am glad I was right about Jasper! Can't wait for Alice and Jasper to meet! Maybe he isn't going to cause too much trouble and just wants to be a part of the only family he has. I just got to say that Lil Bit is just precious and she just wraps everyone around her little finger, including your readers. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
Very nice start. 19 going on 20.. Hard worker to be in business already and be succesful.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Now dodn't I feel silly for not guessing, Alice will be pleased. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 05 Nov 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
I hope he treats her right and not like the whores he is used to. She will dump him quickly if he does. I have a feeling
Date: 05 Nov 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert
When you play with whores you get screwed... Lesson learned yet Edwardo?
Date: 04 Nov 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug
he may kick her to the curb, I hate that saying. I think she has been dipping into those funds so long she won't stay there long.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
they can fight it, she is Bellas halfsister and that trumps nephews...and since they will be married
Date: 04 Nov 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
Well sweetie when you play you pay. Select play partners carefully and of course always put on the rain coat and protect your investments.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Ooh it's Jasper!! Well I hope he changes he's mind!! :) loved the chapter!! :D
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
i must have been in lala land cause Jasper didn't even come to mind...oops. Why did Jess let him in???? (sorry, i'm not gonna open my arms for him until i find out the true motive) Edward was awesome and Jane and Vicky together are scary as hell...lol
Author's Response:
yes, we'll have to ask Jess what she was thinking letting Jasper in like that. Edward is doing great - i am glad you think so too. Jane and Vicky - yeah pretty scary gals.
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
oh so this is how jasper is brought in wow.
well i sure hope he doesn't rip apart the family
loving the story
thank you
Author's Response:
thanks for your lovely note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Another wonderful chapter. Well now I want to hear Jaspers intentions.
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
omg please update soon, i want to know if jasper really wants to take elizabeth or if the law firm was the one to send the agreesive lletter... love the story very much.. are jane and alex going to get together in the story since they are not bother and sister?
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight - i hope it answers some of your questions at least - here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Jessica let him in? Stupid? Great chapter otherwise.
Author's Response:
yes, i think Edward will need to find out why she let him in... not like Jess. thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
I have to say I honestly didn't consider him, especially with the letter. But there has to be a very good reason, and I can't wait for next chapter when we find out.
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Poor Bella, this was the last thing she needed to deal with. I'm so glad she went to Edward for help. I'm hoping that Jasper was unaware of the tone of the attorney's letter and that they will be able to work it out. I'm sure jane won't let it get to far :). Looking forward to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
Oh this was so great.
First, I love Jane. I couldn't help but laugh at the description of her. Perfect Twilight references. Inflict PAIN Janey.
Second, I guessed Jasper as They described this "cousin". I think all the military and southern stuff did it.
But why go to such extremes? Why such a shady law firm? I have a funny feeling there is more here than meets the eye. Who has a grudge against Bella or Edward?
Author's Response:
i love your comments. thanks for your note. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines
oh no! i hope doesn't kill him before we find out what he wants! please please please update soon!
Author's Response:
thanks for your note - edward is in protective mode but with everyone else in the room i think he has to take a number to look after this problem. LOL. I plan to post the next chapter tonight. here's a little teaser of chapter 30 :
Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones. Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.
He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest. “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her. So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up? Huh?”
He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.
“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do. She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.
“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child. We are their family and we will protect them.”
Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Lil Bit does not know Phil's nephew. Bella is her mother!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
wow lil bit is bella other half.
i will tear them apart to lose her. heart breaking
i do not see how he will get guardianship
love it
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
What! That did a 180. From supper happy she is prego to crazy sad. Bella is young, can this dude really take Elizabeth away? Please say no. :(
Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Oh hell no!! I hope Edward doesn't let anyone take Lil Bit from Bella!! :/ Loved the chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Words have failed me , why can't the nephew just visit lil bit doesn't know who he is why spoil the bond between not only sisters but mother daughter so to speak he most likely has a hidden agenda? Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
What!? hell no!, she's her sister, that's closer than a freaking nephew!!! wth??She's never had any issues, Lil Bit is very well taken care of and in a stable home, hell no, tell Mr. Green Beret he can visit with her but she stays put!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
At most he will get some visitation but nothing more. Plus he has done nothing to help Bella in all this time. Not even a visit. Great chapter.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Is it Jasper? I can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Even if this guy has a good lawyer, he'll be facing an army of lawyers. I can only guess the amount of legL counseling Edward, his, dad, Aro and Vicky to name some will put together for this case. This guy has no clue what he's getting himself into. And he picked the worst timing, even if Bella and Edward have kept the baby a secret so far, if the rest find out... They'll all be out for blood. Can't wait! ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
Oh no the drama but will a court really let a small child be raised but a single man? I hope not I recon this man only wants the money.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish
We know it will work out. Nothing to panic about. When's the wedding?
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Awesome story. I look forward to reading more.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Aww loved it!! :D
Date: 25 Oct 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Perfect proposal. Cutest little girl Evah!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your note. I love Lil Bit too.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
I cried through both proposals. Great chApter. I loved it!
Author's Response:
I am glad i issued the tissue warning then. I am glad you like both proposals.
thank you so much for your note.
cheers,
LB
Date: 25 Oct 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
SWEET chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
Date: 25 Oct 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Yeah pregnant ! I love this story
Author's Response:
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story. Edward seems pretty comfortable with the idea of a pregnancy doesn't he?
cheers,
LB
Date: 25 Oct 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Just wonderful! XOXO,Cheri
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
pricelees proposal
it works for these guys. perfect
love the way edward included elizabeth in the proposal as well
truly happy family and expanding it seems
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
Edward likes Bella's pastries !
Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
It was a wonderful proposal. I liked the neckless with the ring.
i wonder if Edward has already bought pregnancy tests... ;)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it.
researching for jewellry is a fun thing to do btw. I had the idea for the ring on a necklace for Lil Bit and then when i searched i found lots of them - the one i finally settled on was so lovely.
there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
Edward is angry
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
The good beginning
Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Too stinking cute! I didn't have tissues handy and had to blot my tears on the hem of my dress!
Author's Response:
best review of the day! I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
Loved the proposal! So beautiful and what he said ti Lil Bit just melted me! Yup, better go get that pregnancy test! !!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. I love books generally but most especially children's books. i have so very many of them.
i think a trip to the chemist (pharmacy?) should be next on Edward's agenda.
there is some fun ahead for our little family so i hope you keep reading.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
Date: 24 Oct 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
I love how he included little bit in the proposal because they are a packaged deal. Very sweet I loved it
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. Edward loves Lil Bit, i don't think he could've prposed without her - they are definitely a 'set'.
there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
That was so cute. I love when guys include a child when they propose. It's like the first step in making a family. I'm so excited for a new baby!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. edward loves both bella and lil bit - it will be interesting to see how he reacts to the pregnancy - i think he's excited but how will he react to the physical side of things. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
:-) So sweet!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
I love this story!!!!!!!!!! I just love the way you make Lil Bit talk, LOL it sound so right. Keep up the great work!!!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. i love Lil Bit - her speech is fun to write. She is such a sweetie.
there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
Date: 24 Oct 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. i loved writing it. there is some fun ahead for our little family.
thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.
cheers,
LB
Date: 24 Oct 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
I just found this story and read it in it's entirety. Such a great story. It's sad in some spots, a little bit of drama, a lot of humor and a whole lotta cuteness with Lil Bit. I can't wait for the next update. Could the surprise visitor be Phil's long lost nephew? And could Alice be lucky enough that it is none other than southern gentleman Jasper Whitlock himself? I think it should be because just like Emmett and Edward were saying, Alice needs to find her "one".Thanks, Maria
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
You brought tears to my eyes again. Loving this sweet family.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yay a baby!! Loved the chapter!! :D
Date: 20 Oct 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Such a sweet story:-)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
that was perfect. it was good they has some one on one time
edward is getting along with bella's friends that is a plus. i so love seth is and elizabeth are so cute together
love how edwards parents have been so accepting of bella and elizabeth
love the chapter it was awesome. thank you
Date: 20 Oct 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
can not wait for more.....Loving it
Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
I think the child belonged to Renee and Phil..
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
Surprise visitor? Hmmmmm........ I wonder. These two are cut together. And I hope Bella is pregnant.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
Loved it, and does Bella have a secret..
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
so very sweet! yes Edward, hurry up and get the ring!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
awww esme and lilbit! i had acouple tears wondered why edward didnt drive thanks for the info :]xo
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
That man needs to buy a ring ASAP! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
"food porn" rofl never heard it called that again. hes so in love its funny. i think he loves her food more thought :P (joke) hope that her being tired is a sign of being pregnant like he thinks and that he puts a ring on before she shows. keep up the good work
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it!! :D
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Sneaky Bella! He hehehehe. I have to give Edward props here. He was rational and didn't run, that was awesome.and I hope she is prego.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love the story! Please update soon.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad they got that out of the way and are on the same page . Got to love how Bella handled Tanya lol
Date: 15 Oct 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
lol edward had a point of her doing the background check was a breech in trust issues but im glad they were able to work through it and get to an understanding. keep up the good work
Date: 15 Oct 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved their time together. Bella has so much she keeps to herself. Will she be able to truly open up to Edward?
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow we all got through the first fight
noone ran and it got worked through
thank god. hope and future
love it
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug
I'm totally liking the story, but you know that cos isn't a real word right? It's text speak.
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Looking forward to more
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Liked it. How could Edward get mad about the background check? It only makes sense for the ultra wealthy. Maybe if he had done a better one on Tanya, he wouldn't have gotten mixed up with her.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
I am glad to see that Vicky will be rid of James. How did Bella know about Tanya? Good riddance Tanya. Emmetts in love with Rosalie. Yay! Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
I must say this is the first story i've read where Vicky sak James! Hooray!!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
OMG I'm loving it!! I'm glad Bella isn't taking shit from anyone lol damn can't wait for the next update!! :D
Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
Go Bella and Vicky not a good idea to piss either one of them off lol
Date: 12 Oct 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe
I am enjoying a nice Victoria.