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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

hot dam thats hella funny looking forward to more 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

Damn! This Bella has all my respect. That was bad ass. 

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

This chapter was hilarious....I love that Bella sent Tanya packing and I like that victoria is a good person in this story...good riddance to the skank and the cheat

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

Damn! Bella is good! Lol that was awesome! !! I hope Vocky finds someone worthy of her.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

wow i am so proud of bella. she is strong and smart

wow she is powerfu. i bet edward saw a different side of bella. she can take care of herself and wow blew me away. i love that she was able to put tanya in her place respectful and with dignity. i doubt they will have any more problems with tanya or james. man vicky is top notch and deserves someone way better than james

oh i am so happy a wedding or two look to be in store

love it

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

 I so loved Bella putting skanky Tanya in her place and Vicky kicking dirty James to the curb. Thank you for the fantastic update :)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

Bella keeps surprising everyone with her tallents and secrets. I can't wait to find out how she knew about Tanya's past.

poor Vicky, that was awful. However, she now has a wonderful group who will support her through what's to come. I'm glad she's part of the group now.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Enjoying this so much! XOXO,Cheri



Author's Response:

thanks for your note - the next chapter posts tonight, i hope you enjoy it.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Great chapter - thanks for update :)



Author's Response:

thanks for your note - the next chapter posts tonight, i hope you enjoy

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

brilliant chapter - love this ' Vicky' hope Bella dont take no sh*t from Tanya



Author's Response:

thanks for note - the next chapter posts tonight.

 

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Your Vicky is terrific, love the dialogue.  Looking forward to Tanya!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your note - i love Vicky - i will be posting the next chapter tonight. i hope you enjoy.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Oh yeah it's time for Edward to sweat it lol :D love the chapter!! :)

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Vicky is wicked! Love her. Now ready to face down Tanya.



Author's Response:

I love your note.  i'm glad you like Tanya.  I am posting the next chapter tonight i hope you like it.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Life is perfect until now how is Bella going to deal with Tanya or how is Vicky going to handle Tanya should be fun lol



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  the next chapter is posting tonight and the girls have an interesting time... i hope you enjoy it.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: lovedimitri Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

and here comes the show down!

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

I can see that Bella's friends from church are not going to be comfortable with the grown up "sleep overs". Is Bella afraid of driving because of her accident? I love Victoria.



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  she and Edward will be discussing this in a chapter or so down the track but you are right REv J is a little uncomfortable with the current 'sleeping' arrangements. the next chapter posts tonight i hope you enjoy it.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

oh dam things are about to go south with tanya and her fat mouth, i hope bella gives her a "what for" and puts her in her place. hope everything goes good for them at the event. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

I love Victoria with her loud over the top personality. The nerve of Tanya is that you Edward honey, did she forget he dropped kicked her out of his life. I look forward to boardroom Bella putting Tanya in her place. Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

victoria is a hoot. i am just sorry her husband is cheating on her. i hope she knows i hate when me make their other half look like shit. victoria seems so kind and doesn't deserve that

oh tanya be good cause it seems there might be two women there willing to take you on

i thought fer sure edward was going to propose to bella before the shower scene , hmm

love it

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Victoria is something else. I liked her a lot. She seems to really care for Edward. I'm pretty sure she's smarter than she thinks. Maybe not what her dad wanted to run the business. Ut enough to be wise enough to understand and accept the decision.

There might be a fight coming up... Who would team up with whom....

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

I adore Lil Bit. Thanks for the backstories and the Bella business savant gives a reason why such a young person is so successful in business. It's palatable.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Another great chapter. Can't wait to see where we go from here. Thank you 



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.  The next chapter posts tonight.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

oh boy, the bus issue, Victoria, James, Tanya..what a night Edward is in for...=O

Author's Response:

yeah i think Edward is going to have words with Bella about that bus thing - crazy!  

next chapter posts tonight - i hope you enjoy.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: Rachael Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

:-)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

I loved all the backstory details in this chapter. I also love how Lil Bit and Edwards mother share a name. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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Date: 06 Oct 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Thank you for the beautiful chapter Aileen :)

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

im glad that he finally found a sign that showed him his true path (cant think of a proper term) and that him and bella are going ot be happy. cant wait to read more. keep up the good work

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

love it awesome chapter

i love getting the backstory-like and aha moment

thank you

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

aaww that was sweet

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Aw. These two were so meant for each other. Love the backstory.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Seriously? No tissue warning? Because I cried while reading it and now I am crying again writing this. Sooo sweet!

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

:-)

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Looking forward to more

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Aww I loved the chapter!! :D

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Love the backstory, son touching!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

That was priceless its a small world after all.

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Date: 30 Sep 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Aww loved the chapter!! :D

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Date: 30 Sep 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Lovin it!!!!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Thank you for another fantastic chapter :)

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Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita

Love it :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce

I am enjoying this so much :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

They are looking out for her I hope they understand Edward is going to be doing that from now on



Author's Response:

Sam and Jacob have been the father/big brother figures for Bella for awhile.  But Edward will set them straight and Bella too!  

thanks for reading

Reviewer: joytome123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Thk u. Best story ever. Loving every word. suck at reviews. When I checked your inf. saw I had read all yr stories. Pls keep writing. thk u again for many hours of joy. Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au

Author's Response:

thank you for your kind words and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Sam and Jacob are just doing what Bella's parents would have done. I like little old soul Seth. Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

yes Sam and Jacob are looking out for her; it is great that she has people to do what her parents can no longer do this.

I have always been a fan of Seth.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

good looking out Edward! :) Seth is adorable!! Jacob & Sam could have been a wee bit less hostile.......glad Bella went in with them too

Author's Response:

Yes.  Edward is so happy to have his two girls to look after. Yes although the boys all think she needs protection but I think Bella can look after herself pretty well.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Pregnant, I wonder? Funny chapter with Jacob and Sam being big brother mode.



Author's Response:

Yes - i like that the boys all had their proectection mode in top gear!  pregnant? ... we'll see. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks for reading.  i very much appreciate your support for my story

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Edward should have just told Jacob to go ahead and plan the wedding! I love Elizabeth and Seth! Too cute. My grandson is actually just in the third grade and has had his own Lil Bit since Kindergarten. He says, "she's a keeper".



Author's Response:

Aren't Elizabeth and Seth adorable... :)  I love your story about your grandson... my daughter at this age had her own little Seth too.   they are still very close friends.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

I had insomnia around 3:30am and read this story until 6:30. Then I slept for a few hours and finished the rest. It's very cute and sweet.



Author's Response:

ooh, i have nights like that sometimes.  I am glad you found my little story to read.  

i hope you continue to enjoy it. 

cheers, 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

They are all too cute, Tyler included. Hmmm, makes me wonder when Alice will meet her man.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise

Yes, Edward...go really slowly with Bella.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce

*sigh* How sweet Edward is. No pun intended. And I am thrilled that I remembered enough of my college French to read the line without the translation.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Love that kid she is so cute.  Edward is blown away at how smart Bella is he will freak when he finds out that she is the one he is trying to find info on.  She is into everything such a smart girl and sexy to.  She loves him that is all he needs



Author's Response:

Yes Edward is starting to realise just how special his Isabella is.  but you are so right - her love is the most important thing to him.

thanks so much for reading 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

So cute!

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

I must admit that I passed by this story several times and never really gave it much consideration. However after reading this I am totally enraptured and am anxiously awaiting the next update!!!! Great work! 



Author's Response:

this review warmed my heart so much.  thank you.  the first part of our lunch chapter 21 is up and i am working on chap 22 now.  

i hope you continue to enjoy it.

cheers, 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

These guys are so much like a family already. And Bella is one wicked cool woman. I'm ready to see how she interacts with everyone in her element.



Author's Response:

Yes our sweet Isabella is one canny business woman.  i hope you enjoy chapter 21 a baker's dozen.  It was a lot of fun to write.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours

This chapter made me hungry!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours

Ohh, I can't wait to see what he has to say to Tanya!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery

Great first chapter!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Love me some Lil Bit!  She is just so precious and sweet!  Edward and Bella seem to be on the same page, relationship wise.  I am so glad they are such an adorable couple.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your sweet words.  Chapter 21 a baker's dozen is up and i am writing the second parter for the lunch now.

i hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

love lil bit--she is adorable

love our sexy couple. things are going very well and the group makes an awesome famly. seems like something they were both lacking but it wears well on them both

love these guys together

can't wait for the lunch with the family

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Edward is thrilled and happier than he ever imagined he could be. Bella is happy too and excited to have someone to share life with.

I'm really looking forward to lunch.



Author's Response:

i have had to split the lunch up into two chapters cos with 13 guests for lunch there is so much happening

I love a happy edward :)

thanks for supporting my story. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thank you for you kind note and thank you for reading.

cheers, 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

so cute! he's melting my heart :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you're enjoying it.  

cheers, 

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

love it adore lil bit now im gonna go eat this chapter made me hungry!



Author's Response:

i know what you mean about the food.  i was researching what she could make for lunch and it just made me hungry.

thanks for reading, i appreciate it very much.

 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

oh love that chapter. seems bella had to grow up fast and she lost alot of important people.

but wow she was surrounded by so many willing to help her and start over and gain her sister and not be part of the system. she has alot to be thankful for and a hell of a support system. so is bella have more money than edward. i would have never guessed she was that well off blown away. most people with that kind of money wouldn't be working everyday as hard as she does

well it seems as if these two have pledge themselves to one another. 

loving it

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

Bella keeps surprising Edward in so many ways. He has found the love of his life and he same goes for her. Bella has lived life so fast but so full, she isn't slowing down and taking chances not being 'careful'. But she wans to feel free, just follow her heart and gut. I'm wondering how Edward will handle that.

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

wow! great chapter he was soo sweet and wonderful to her for her first time love how strong she is i hope she is pregnant Happy anniversary wishing you many more happy years

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

wow! she's been thru and done so much. great chapter!! happy anniversary!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 cinnamon and simply Bella

Happy Anniversary Thanks for the update on your specal day.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 peanut butter and honey

trust edward

they are worth the time and love. trust bella won't stir you wrong

she loves you. man her house is awesome and her bakery and business she seems to really have it going on

love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 peanut butter and honey

He is so perfect with her  he needs to trust

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 peanut butter and honey

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 18 peanut butter and honey

Interesting. I wonder if Marcus is how she came into her building and all of her success at an early age. Maybe he knew her parents.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 18 peanut butter and honey

Something tells me Bella, Marcus and Artemisnare someow connected. The thing is how. Poor Edward, he was flippong out and now he has to wait a bit longer for Bella to sit and talk it all out with him.

I'm imprssed with all she's accomplished at such a young age. I'm really dying to hear more about Bella's story!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

the family. they fit very well together

they have good friends and edward has a great family to help and be there for them and help them through this difficult time

 

love bella's place is sounds very warm and homey and not far from work perfect

love it



Author's Response:

yes i have such a clear vision of her home.  in chapter 18 we see her private kitchen - that was fun to think of.

thanks for reading

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

I love these two together as well. Thank you for the update 



Author's Response:

They are adorable aren't they.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

These three already make the cutest family ever.



Author's Response:

they are so adorable aren't they

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

They are so cute together.  Edward would like 5 min with these guys please



Author's Response:

I thing you are right.  thanks for reading.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

Love the story!!!  Bella, Edward, and Lil bit make a great family!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

Tyler is so sweet! i'm so glad they caught those guys. lets see how well Edward does as caretaker ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 17 a hint of spice

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

They are a family so cute.  Tyler wants Zafrina lover boy.  I am so glad that Edward told Bella everything 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

love tyler asking about zafrina go tyler go.

 

my favorite is little bit. she is too damn cute. i think she has anyone and everyone wrapped around her fingers. so love her adorable

 

love it all thank you



Author's Response:

Mr cool Tyler melting around the edges for Zafrina - that will be fun.  Lil Bit is adorable and such a good little girl too.  

thanks for reading and for your kind words.

 

cheers, 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

lol....Tyler is adorable :) i'm glad Bella knows the full story now. that was so tough for Edward..... can't wait till the family bombards lil Bit and Bella with love :)

Author's Response:

It was tough for Edward - he deserves a break in the romance department don't you think.  

Yeah I think Bella and LIl Bit should fit right in at  the crazy Cullen family weekly dinners

 

thanks for reading and reviewing

 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

Aw they are so cute. I'm g,ad Edward shared. They seem to have a good chance.



Author's Response:

Now that Bella knows his darkest secrets i think she'll understand his possessive, insecure nature.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I am too... LOL.   I am writing this weekend so i hope to have an update for you very soon.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

Edward's actions have been explained and we understand. It doesn't makes them right though but we get it and so did Bella. 

Tyler likes Zafrina!!!! Tha will be fun and may give Edward, if Bella agrees, leverage to get Tyler to call him Edward. We'll see ;)



Author's Response:

I agree and so does Edward.  He knows he's done wrong and he wants to do things righ with Bella.  I agree with you, Edward may actually get his first name out of Tyler yet.

cheers, 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

I so love him he is so good with the baby and Bella



Author's Response:

i love him too :)  i think he has a lot of love to give.

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

love it

i am glad everyone is getting to know each other

getting more back story on bella and how things came to be

look forward to the relationship growing



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella has quite the crew around her but so does Edward.  I am curious how they will blend.

thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

Beautiful chapter, thank you butterfly :)



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box

edward is too cute with lil bit

 

i love how she got the nickname

love it

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

Awww! I know Rose is protective, but I just hope that she won't try to run Edward off

Author's Response:

I like what Edward thought about Rose - how aptly named she is... beautiful flower but mind the thorns!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

awwww! so sweet love lil bit! wonder whats bugging rose hmmm...



Author's Response:

Yeah Rose seems to be having trouble making room in their lives for Edward....

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

It was so sweet and funny! Everyone seems to be very accepting of Edward. All but Rose. I guess it has to do with how much Lil Bit likes him.



Author's Response:

I think you're probably right she's having trouble with the fact that Edward wants to be front and centre in their lives.

Reviewer: mtaz4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

Love it! Great chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you - i am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

so am I ... LOL... hope to update soon.

thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box

Love Elizabeth!  She is so adorable and she has Edward wrapped around her little finger.  I am so glad that Edward has finally gotten his head out of his ass.  I know that he has been hurt but now maybe he will learn how to trust.  Bella is a good girl and is very mature for her age.  Well she had to grow up pretty fast.  Please update soon, I need my Elizabeth fix!



Author's Response:

Isn't she just adorable.  I love that lil bit.  Edward reacts to her so naturally, it's beautiful.  thanks for your kind words.  

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