[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
Aw! See edward is the man, he can tackle potty time like a champ.
Author's Response:
Nothing phases him when it comes to his little love. i was proud of him.
thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
awww, so sweet with her!!!!! can;t wait for their talk!
Author's Response:
yeah Edward was so adorable with Lil Bit. I definitely feel we need to have some backstory, should be interesting.
cheers.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it.
cheers.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
Lil Bit and Edward are adorable. And Edward passes emergency child care 101 with flying colors. Just ask the EMTs and Sue :)
So Lil Bit is her sister/daughter. And I'm sure she's moved into Edward's heart along with Bella, good thing they're related and wn't mind sharing him. That little thing has Edward wraped around his finger already.
Author's Response:
I remember being pregnant with my first baby and a friend asking me to take her child to the bathroom.... i had no clue..... but I think Edward did great! Lil Bit is pretty much irresistible.
thanks for your support of my story.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
me too! i have the next chapter drafted but it will be fun to flesh out.
thanks for reading.
Date: 06 Aug 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 carrot sticks and a juice box
awwww!! lil bit is adorable glad the misunderstanding was sorted out love this story lots!
Author's Response:
yeah, Edward jumped the gun when he saw jacob but with his background, i guess it is understandable. I am glad though they are back on track but they definitely need to have a serious talk. Next chapter :)
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Oh lord I need more
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
oh my so much drama
it seems there is a story for bella and i can't wait to see what it is
she seems to be a mom and a young one. i am hoping edward listens to her and doesn't run before he gets answers
loving it
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
The baby is her little sister? Edward knows he loves her about time lol
Date: 03 Aug 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
I think he is freaking out for nothing
Date: 03 Aug 2013 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
Wow i would like to try some of those sweet treats myself :))
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Bella has a baby?!?!?!?! adopted??? will she be ok????
Author's Response:
It will be interesting to hear her explanation - I am sure Edward will want to know, but right now he is more concerned for her medical condition.
thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
no! omg, WTH!!!! please Bella, explain!!!! :( his poor heart......
Author's Response:
Yes i shed a tear for him - he has been hurt so badly in the past and he wants so much from this relationship. He did tell her that trust was a problem for him. thank you for caring about Edward (you'd be surprised how many people have been pretty tough on him). i think he's doing remarkably well given his past.
thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Thanks for the excellent chapter I will be on pins and needles until the next update.
Author's Response:
thanks for your support of my story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
Oh no, poor Edward is so traumatized from his past relationships that he immedietly thought the worst of Bella. I think he's jumping the gun and poor Bella must be devasted with Edward running out on her. I hope it's all a misunderstanding and these two can get back to dancing soon. I'm glad Aro and Marcus were not apart of their son's schemes Thank you for the wonderful update :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Ok.... I know the only way Bella can have a kid and still be a virgin is if it is not hers. But if it looks like her..... Maybe a sibling or something like that, or a nice..... Or she lied and really isn't a virgin.
Author's Response:
i am sure Edward will be keen to have some answers once he is sure she's okay
I have enjoyed everyone's theories - we'll see.
thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
That has to be jake. Say they are just hanging out and not a thing?
Date: 02 Aug 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
I'm thinking lit bit is Bella's sister.
Author's Response:
that is a popular theory - there have been some fascinating ideas.
thanks for reading.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 02 Aug 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
Good thing Edward didn't run and was there. But there are so many things here going through my head...
I hate asking for updates, but here.... I must, please let us know soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yes. He has decided to give his heart and do his best to trust but i am sure he will want some answers once he's sure she's okay.
thanks for reading - i hope to update very soon.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 13 cup cake
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
It's been a crappy Monday. I hope Bella fins himmquickly, because there has to be an important reason she already said she had to tell him about.
Date: 02 Aug 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
oh nooo! please tell me the next chapter is coming really soon
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 12 chocolate croissant as well as brioche
here comes the drama
Date: 30 Jul 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I hope to update in the next few days. next chapter is a tricky one :)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
Great dancing ;) I cant wait to hear about what she is afraid to tell him.
Author's Response:
yes they dance well together don't they. Yes she definitely wants to tell him something.
thanks for reading
Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs
I am so glad to be finding out about them and there past so sad. Fun time at the club Edward will not be able to keep his hands to himself
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
whew!...i'm sure they both slept very well....lol
Author's Response:
Yes it was a big night. very stimulating :)
thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs
lots more to learn! i loved their talk, good to get everything out in the open beforehand :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
The dancing in the club and their time in the limo was super sexy, I also look forward to their more intimate dancing. Thank you for the update :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 scallops and crab puffs
Fantastic update for this fantastic story. It was great how you explored their emotional connection as well as their physical connection. I felt teary when Bella discussed Charlie, Renee and Phill. Then you moved on effortlessly to their steamy elevator makeout session. Great job butterfly, keep the updates coming :)
Date: 29 Jul 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
I'm intrigued about what has Bella so worried about telling Edward.
It was a great night, all of it.
Edward is being so sweet.
I guess it wasn't Rose at the window...
Author's Response:
Bella definitely wants to tell him more
it was a great night - fantastic second date.
he is being sweet and is trying very hard. he really wants a real relationship.
was it Rose? i suppose we'll find out.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
well that was a hell of a date
Author's Response:
hmmm it certainly was a pretty amazing second date. Edward is doing very well i think.
thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
Enjoying ur fic and really want to know who it is that she's living with .. at first i thought she had a sibling that renee and phil had b4 they died but not sure now ... why would rose have to stay with the person ... disabled in some way?? looking forward to ur next updates
xo
Date: 29 Jul 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 virgin margarita
sigh hes so gentle and sweet to her i love it
Author's Response:
Yes - he is adorable, isn't he. Not bad for someone who really hasn't had a decent romantic relationship before.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise
need help taking your foot out of your mouth Edward....lol.
Author's Response:
:) LOL
She has rocked his world that's for sure.
cheers.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise
Now Edward is in shock lol. He is so cute
Author's Response:
Funny that Esme called him adorable. i think he is adorable. He is trying and doing pretty well too.
Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise
Dinner was lots of fun and their date will be better.
Author's Response:
i have the date chapter mostly written and yes it is better.... much better.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 9: cherry surprise
Fantastic chapter, love the v card cliffy at the end. Thank for the update please update soon I need in on that date :)
Author's Response:
I love his complete shock. she already had his head in a spin by looking so sexy and then to tell him she's a virgin... it was just too much for our boy.
I hope he recovers quickly.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce
He's so thoughtful and a true gentleman:) Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
That is what he's aiming for. He's had shallow and dysfunctional relationships and he's made the decision that he wants more and he's doing his best to get it.
Date: 24 Jul 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce
He is sweet where did Bella go?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce
i love the book and i also like the flour idea
my mom loved to bake and she used to mail order her flour from vermont and she would freeze whatever she didn't use. man did she go through flour
a baker can have very expensive baking items. that was a cool idea jess
go edward your doing great
love rose she is very protective
Author's Response:
thank you for sharing that about your mom. My irish Mam was a great cook and baked all the time. She often said that good flour is a key ingredient in good cooking. I also love to cook and until i was diagnosed as a coeliac i baked all the time. it is harder now to get good flour but i am learning.
Jess is great isn't she and Rose too. i think Edward is doing very well although his possessive jealous side could cause him some trouble.
cheers.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: pour ma douce
nice touch with the book and flowers :)
Author's Response:
I think they were a great idea. He's really feels out of his depth but really wants to do well.
cheers.
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
What is she hiding from him what happened to her family?? That was a very sweet date
Author's Response:
maybe they'll get more time to talk on the next date.
it was a sweet date wasn't it.
thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
that was a nice first date
jealous much edward wow. bella is not tanya. she is in a whole different league that tanya
bella for her age is grown and mature and not a selfish bone in her body. she seems to get along very well with others
love it
Author's Response:
it was a lovely date wasn't it - that's a real restaurant in Seattle btw.
he has a lot of baggage to deal with and he jumps to the wrong conclusion - trust is an issue. but you are right Bella is definitely not Tanya.
thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
love it and looking forward to the date
Date: 21 Jul 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
She feels the same about him. Does she have a child???
Date: 20 Jul 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert
He used the honey that is for sure I am so glad she is out. Emmett is so smart sometime.
Author's Response:
yeah i am a big fan of Emmett - goofy most of the time but so sincere and clever when needed.
thanks for reading.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
It was a lovely date, even with Edward's tension. There are so many questions I haveaboutBella, and I'm sureEdward has more than a few too. Will she share more in their next date?
Author's Response:
it was a lovely date wasn't it. Edward has to learn to trust that's for sure. i hope they'll learn more about each other on their next date.
thanks for the review.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
Edward is a unique boss getting the coffee for everyone at the office. Buthe wouldn't have itanyotherway, no doubt.
I wonder what he's gotplanned for their date...
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
That was a delicious kiss indeed, thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
i hope they have more yummy kisses on their next date.
thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
Edward finally asked her out, clapping hands and excited to see what you have planned for their date. Thank you for the excellent update :)
Date: 20 Jul 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
yummy everything !!
Author's Response:
they make a delicious couple - glad you enjoyed it.
thanks for reading and for the review
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss
awww, what a sweet 1st date :)
Author's Response:
it was sweet. not bad for a guy who hasn't dated in a long time.
thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2013 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 short but sweet
they are too cute! so glad Rose is sweet in this
Author's Response:
yes i am a bit of Rosalie fan. she is a really wonderful character in this and we'll see lots more of her later.
cheers.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug
Love his family and he could not have been lucker to have them. He is his mommys dumpling love it lol.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert
that was a very interesting way to handle tanya
it is done and she got more than she deserved, he was too nice
now he needs to deal with the family traitors
love it
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug
love edwards family
i have a feeling his mother and sister will get to know bella very well
look out edward
love it
Author's Response:
they are a great family aren't they, teasing each other but the love there is strong.
i'm sure esme and alice will see Bella soon.
cheers.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
oh i can't wait for tanya to get hers
all the food is making me hungry. it is so hard to find a good bakery
love it
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert
wow, nice job Edward! awww. Emmett's speech was so sweet and moving.....i hope Edward's get the courage to ask Bella out
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug
lol.....love the banter, Bella will get a lovely visit from 2 wonderful women very soon :D . Good luck with Tanya, Edward....you're gonna need it.....
Date: 14 Jul 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5 - just dessert
well done edward!
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
I can't wait to meet Alice and then for Edward "visiting" with Tanya. Also, I can't wait for his next visit to Bella's Bakery :)
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
It's risky thinking you're a step ahead. Ask James...
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
In the middle of his personal storm, he found a plac and someone to calm him down. No wonder he went back.
Date: 09 Jul 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
A great beginning. Well written. I wonder what more Edward will learn from Tanya. Will Tanya accept the break up or will she try to get Edward back? Are Bella and Angela from the same tiny town about four hours away? Most important question..... how will you get Bella and Edward together? I want more!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
well, he needs to use her business again and maybe bring something to Esme's house tonight for dessert ;)lol
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
Yeah Bella and Angela!!!!
Date: 08 Jul 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 Petit Fours
I bet Bella was unhappy not seeing him either or did she if he was asleep on his couch. I cant wait to see what he does to Tanya.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2013 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
WOW, juicy out the gate!
Date: 05 Jul 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
I cant wait to hear what he does to Tanya. Are we going to hear Bella's POV
Date: 05 Jul 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
He will get a lesson in love
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
set her up and take her down Edward! kick her to the curb! ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery
great beginning! now he has to start up a conversation and not just order coffee ...lol
Date: 05 Jul 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
looking forward to these story
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
Can't wait to read more, btw great chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours
wow .. well written and captivating storyline ... cant wait to see how edward handles tanya and also how he gets together with bella .. hope it doesnt take too long
xo