[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
love the big brother love :) those girls are very protected :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really digging your story. Can't wait for more
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Welcome back lovely! Great start.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I can't wait for the next up date
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this so much can't wait to read more please.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love getting the history. So can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more please.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter,cant wait to read more :)
Date: 08 Aug 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
funny the way Carlisle forgot Esme. I like it a lot but please don't make Edward die.
Author's Response:
Have no fear. I wouldn't kill him off. He's the reason I write.
Liz
Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it. Can't wait to see where Rosie comes in. But at least Edward and jasper takes being big brothers better the emmet. Hurry back with more.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 8:36 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting. I'd like to see how this goes.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 8:32 PM Title: Prologue
cant wait to read more. hope to see u soon
Date: 04 Aug 2013 5:57 PM Title: Prologue
Can't wait to see this story unfold and see who the killer is! :)
-Kate
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:37 PM Title: Prologue
Sounds good. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Aug 2013 8:50 AM Title: Prologue
Wow what an amazing start!! Love the prologue!!
I have red 90% of your other stories & I have loved every single one of them so NO doubt I will love this one too!!
Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:12 AM Title: Prologue
wow .. that was some beginning .. caught me hook line and sinker but now i need more
xo
Author's Response:
I hope that it keeps you for the duration. Here is a little tidbit...
Liz
Chapter 1 Teaser
Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.
Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.
“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.
“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.
“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”
Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.
Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:19 PM Title: Prologue
oy, more please, and soon!
Author's Response:
how about a teaser?
Liz
Chapter 1 Teaser
Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.
Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.
“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.
“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.
“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”
Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.
Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”
Date: 03 Aug 2013 7:00 PM Title: Prologue
Great prologue...can't wait to read more and see how we get to this point. I also am excited to see who are the sibling pairs (if it is the normal Emmett/Bella, Alice/Edward, Rosalie/Jasper or a little different with Jasper/Bella, Edward/Rosalie and Emmett/Alice)
Author's Response:
The sibling pairs are Jasper/ Bella and Emmett and Edward (Twins) with Alice. Rosalie is introduced later.
Liz
Chapter 1 Teaser
Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.
Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.
“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.
“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.
“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”
Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.
Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Prologue
awesome beginning!! can't wait to read more!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad. We'll go back in time and get some back story before we get to that scene. Here is a teaser for you.
Liz
Chapter 1 Teaser:
Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.
Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.
“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.
“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.
“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”
Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.
Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 4:03 PM Title: Prologue
looking forward to reading this
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad that you're with me again!
Liz
Date: 03 Aug 2013 2:59 PM Title: Prologue
I'm so excited to read more of this story. Pkease update soin!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Here is a teaser.
Liz
Chapter 1 Teaser:
Jasper sat down and listened while his parents told him that he was gonna be a big brother in about five months. He had noticed that his mom had been getting sick a lot lately and that she seemed to have been getting a little chubbier, but he hadn’t thought anything of it. Now he understood why.
Next door, the Cullen twins were hearing similar news, only Esme wasn’t due for another six months.
“Mom! That’s gross!” Emmett yelled.
“Emmett Matthew Cullen! Don’t talk to your mother like that!” Carlisle roared.
“Mom?” Edward asked. “Are we going to have a sister or a brother?”
Edward had always been the more loving and gentle of the twins, while Emmett was the larger and more boisterous one.
Esme smiled gently at her son, “Its a little girl. We haven’t decided what to name her yet and we’re hoping that you two will help us with that.”