Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
great family day in the snow
Date: 26 Feb 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG!!! I've been waiting for something like this to happen. I'm on pins and needles. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
They had such a sweet family Christmas. Alice needs some serious help. I feel so bad for Jasper and Carlie.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
thank you for the update..what is wrong with Alice? It can't be post parum ? can it? Please tell us what's wtong with her..is she really that jealous of Bella and Edward's relationship? until you post again
Date: 21 Feb 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
They never checked their voice mail to see if a message was left or who it was that called. My curiosity is killing me. I had thought since they didn't last chapter that they would this chapter, but I'm sure Christmas made them forget about it. Alice has completely and totally lost her mind!! Poor Jasper. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Alice is behind the Victoria and James deal. Alice is really messed up.
Date: 20 Feb 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
A very nice Christmas and time without the children. The craziness from Alice is sad, she is so jealous of Bella it's sick! Good for Edward trying to go legitimate and away from crime. Hope he makes it! I wonder if the phone call with the woman's name has anything to do with that?
Date: 20 Feb 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Alice needs to just disappear. Poor Jasper. hmmm wonder who's calling.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really like when they just have a quiet family day like this, it doesn't even have to be a holiday!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
family time is nice
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wonder what is up with Malice. Is someone else feeding her cookoo drugs or something?
Date: 04 Feb 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's great that Edward and Bella are back to the way they should be, but it's going to continue to bother them both that they can't figure out the reason for Alice's hatred! I'm at a loss to understand it myself, she and her brother were once so close and now she can't do enough to hurt him. It makes no sense, it's just crazy!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so glad that Jasper came to Edward about Alice. He is loyal to the family, even though his wife is not. I feel bad for Carlie. Bella should have her come play with her babies.
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update..Is Alice Jealous of Edward & Bella?
Date: 04 Feb 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
I knew Alice was involved with the Victoria situation!!!! Poor Jasper. I wonder if this is what was meant when Renata talked out Edward being brought down from within. I'm sure this is part of it, but I know there has to someone else working with her. I wonder if she's working with Caius?!! I guess we shall see. I love the chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
I like that Edward is making good on his promise to share everything with Bella, good and bad. I kind of knew that this would be the outcome of their alone time, renewal and rememberingwhat holds them together.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad e stayed home today. But yea they need to get the Victroia thing figured out.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love their sexy times! Yes, I too think Alice is behind this.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't understand how someone could be so mean, especially to a family member.
Date: 22 Jan 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
This time away alone is just what these two needed, after their close call! Sequim is a neat little town to do that kind of shopping, too. It would be so sad if the crap with Victoria was instigated by Alice. Those close to you are always the ones to hurt you the worst!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Nice shopping trip. I think Malice and Caius are in it together.
Date: 18 Jan 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
It was a close call, and they nearly lost all they had together, simply from not talking to each other. This get away has had a healing effect for both Bella and Edward. They are going to try harder to stay close by staying in communication more. The coming baby should help as they both want more children. Edward is smart enough to realize he's stronger with Bella by his side than alone. That should help him shoulder the burdens of managing the family business. I'm sure this Victoria mess was planned to drive him and Bella apart.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad that they are on the right path again.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad they spent some time with the kiddies before they went away. Yummy ending.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
They both made mistakes in this chapter, but luckily their love won out.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
thank you for the update...Edward needs to relax....I'm happy Bella got him t listen to her.....I don't get it, they are so in love why would he believe the pictures, she always with him, or family, when would she have time to mess around...then he finds out Bella is with child, and all he can say was I was going to throw my pregnant wife out of the house.........What Edward needs to be doing is finding this Victoria Bitch and the man who force himself on Bella...until you post again....well done
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward sure was quick to call Bella a whore.
I wonder why Edward hasn't even thought about retribution, or questioned why Victoria & her "friends" done that to Bella last night, or where the mysteriously delivered pictures came from. For being a mafia boss, Edward seems to have his head up his ass, as well as up Bella's whiny one as well. I mean, HOW was someone even able to put the package/pictures on Edward's doorstep? I thought their home was gated/protected. Was it an inside job? Alice?
Can't wait for more. ;)
Author's Response:
could be ....stay tuned for more.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
That was a close one, Edward almost fell for the faked pictures! I knew that damn Victoria was up to no good! Someone must know how important Bella is to Edward and thought to split them up and weaken him. Without her calm and common sense counsel, he's not as effective as he is with her. Glad they are pregnant again, since they wanted another child. Edward better increase the guard on Bella and the kids, this is getting ugly!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
dude seriously overreacted. Surprised her guard didnt call E and say where they were.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
so glad that bella got through to his ass! now what is gonna happen to victoria and james??
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
I just find Bella SO ridiculous & petty. She doesn't seem to live in the real world. She thinks Edward should be up her ass 24/7, & when he can't for one of the first times because of work, she sulks & pouts like a toddler that isn't getting its way! Well boo-fucking-hoo! :(
All she's done is add to Edward's stress & guilt with her immaturity, further driving a wedge & creating awkwardness between them. Instead of being a supportive, understanding wife, or taking responsibility for anything, she wants to blame everything on Edward, & villify him to Rose.
He's been nothing but an AMAZING husband, lover, provider, father, & friend, & at the first little sign of trouble or mistake he makes, she's off pouting & only thinking of herself & HER feelings! She's incredibly selfish!!! Then she has the audacity & gall to barely speak to Edward, or hardly tell him she loves him. She NEEDS to quit with her drama queen pity parties!!!
And btw...I can't say that I feel sorry for Bella hurting her hand, either. A married woman with 2 babies at home has absolutely NO business going out clubbing, especially if she thinks she pregnant again! What if she had gotten hurt in a way that harmed the baby?
If she wanted to go out with someone as a friend, or have "girl time" somewhere other than a bar or club, then fine, that's perfectly normal, but she should've NEVER went to a club at night. She also had a feeling that something wasn't quite right with Victoria, so WHY meet her somewhere like a club? She should thank her lucky stars that she had Seth nearby.
But now, this is just going to be more stress & worry for Edward, plus because of all of this, they're not going to have tonight to reconnect - she'll be at the hospital. I just hope she doesn't get Seth in trouble by not letting him call Edward. And I also hope that she doesn't try to blame this on Edward somehow. She should've stayed her ass at home & loved on her man that she's been a cold bitch to. :(
Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
Date: 06 Jan 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella is being so stupid and such a brat. Edward loves her so much. He didn't neglect her. He was just busy at work, which she knew would happen when they returned from vacation. She needs to stay away from Victoria. Maybe it is time for her to start college and have something to do with her time besides waiting for Edward to entertain her.
Date: 06 Jan 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes, my dear Bella, you really should have stayed at home with your husband and kids! I've had a bad feeling about Victoria from the beginning, and she just proved the feeling was spot on! Wait until Edward finds out what happened, he will be furious!
Date: 05 Jan 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh new Victoria was up to no good. At least Edward realizes something is wrong even if he is pretending for the family.
Date: 05 Jan 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Whew, I thought she was going to get kidnapped again.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
These two need to really talk and stop avoiding the elephant in the room. Edward needs to balance bettter and Bella needs to realize that he is going to be busier. No one is really at fault. They just have never had to spend much time apart. Bella said she would support him in his new position, unfortunately it got crazy right from the start. They had no time to adjust.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Happy New Year, Thank you for the update, it was bittersweet to say the least. Even with the sweet, we must endure the bitter. They do love each other greatly, they will over come and prevail! I have faith!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward better step up his game, because Bella is either heartsick or pregnant! I also think he should be very careful of this Victoria and her going to a club business! Something is wrong about her being so pushy, wanting Bella to go out like that! It could be a plot to kidnap her or something!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
What's going on with Alice? Has her potential betrayal been addressed yet? I don't like her, & I don't think she should be trusted.
I also don't think that Bella should be hanging out with Victoria - she's another one that shouldn't be trusted.
And Bella...she NEEDS to grow up, & realize that there are adult responsibilities in life, & that it can't always be all about her, all of the time. Edward is stressed enough, trying to find balance, & instead of helping him or being supportive, she's acting like a selfish, spoiled child, pouting, crying, & sulking. She's only making things worse between her & Edward.
Edward has barely left her side since they've been together, & has ALWAYS been loving & attentive to her. In the short time that they've been together, he's taken her to Italy, Greece, Oregon, and done so many wonderful things with her that most people don't get to do or have in a lifetime. Esme has always been willing to babysit, & give her a break, even though she hasn't been a mom very long. Most women/mothers DON'T get that kind of break or free time, EVER.
Can't wait for more. ;)
Date: 01 Jan 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
At least he recognizes that he's causing a rift. hmmm sick or prego I wonder?
Date: 01 Jan 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
whew! good to know thanks!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
theres something really wrong it was kinda hard to read they are both soo sad are they going to split up
Author's Response:
nope.. just a rough patch
Date: 26 Dec 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to support him. She just got use to him being around all the time, but now he has to work. She has been spoiled by all of his attention. If she wants to help him, she should mention the extra drinking. He doesn't want to use it as a crutch. He needs her support now more than any other time. Edward needs to talk to his parents about Alice.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
The worry, the fear and the responsibility are weighing heavily on Edward and messing up what he and Bella have. It will be hjorrible if Alice is the one betraying her family, but at least they would be sure. Bella is just going to have to stand upo for her man and herself, and lastly her family! I still think there's something hinky about Victoria, too.
Date: 25 Dec 2013 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow E is really being bipolar a bit. Alcohol really can do a number on people. I think Malice is involved unfortunately.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward needs to find an outlet for his stress and anger. Breaking things is not the best example for his kids.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Two things stood out in this chapter. First, that Emmett seems to have calmed down somewhat since they ruined his home. He was talking and acting more like the brother Edward needs him to be. The second thing is Bella not saying how left out she felt when Edward had that last meeting with his men. I know it made her feel as if he didn't want her input, but I don't think he meant it that way! I'm sure the two of them will work it out before too long!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm wonder whats up with B at the aquarium. I think it is Malice somehow involved.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella has to stay strong and support Edward. She doesn't need all the gory details. Edward will tell her when he has it figured out.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
thank you for the update...........wow.....I wonder who it is also.....Alice cannot be that stupid...I sure hope Edward and his gang get the Voulti before they can strike again...well done
Date: 14 Dec 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Bella tells Edward how she feels about being left out of the discussions about retaliating against the Volturi. If the message refers to Alice as who will destroy them from the inside, it will be devestating to the whole family! The really sad part is Alice is just messed up enough to possibly do it, too!
Date: 14 Dec 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Renata. I do think its Alice who's passing info. Em really needs to chill. I get he's upset.
Date: 11 Dec 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward also needs to remember how he felt when his home was attacked. It is not easy to sit back and do nothing. They need to wait until they get home and figure out what is the best course of action. Emmett respects Edward and will do what is right.
Date: 09 Dec 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow Alice really went to far this time. Hope Jazz divorces her, get sole custody and pays her nothing, then I hope E cuts her off. WOuldnt surprise me if she is leaking stuff to Caius. aww poor Renta, and Em and Rose's house too.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
You might know Alice would go off her meds or something, and screw up the vacation for everyone! I can't believe the hateful, nasty things she said to Bella! She really has a mental problem! Poor Jasper, all he wants is what Edward and Bella have, a happy marriage and family! I can see Alice going berserk and helping the family's enemys before this is all over with Caius! To beat Renata like that and blow up Emmett and Rosalie's home is blatant provocation, Caius must really want a fight. Lucky Edward has level-headed Bella to be his guide and support! Wonder what they will come up with to pay back Caius?
Date: 08 Dec 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
i'm 100% sure alice is involved
Date: 05 Dec 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that they are going to see some of the sights in Greece.
Date: 30 Nov 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
ugh Alice def still needs alot of therapy. Yummy play time for b&e though.
Date: 29 Nov 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Rosalie and Jasper should only be as happy as Edward and Bella. We all have problems, I guess! This trip to Greece is okay so far, but I fear Emmett or Alice could mess things up at any time! Then Edward would get angry and Bella would try to smooth things over, and the whole thing would blow up!
Date: 25 Nov 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know why they need a vacation to show each other how much they love each other. They are at each other privates several times everyday. It is just a change in location. They have more vacations than work days.
Date: 23 Nov 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is probably smart to worry about what Caius is up to. Sometimes it can be too quiet! With Emmett around that won't be a problem in Greece. I don't know how Bella and Edward put up with his juvenile actions! I'll bet it won't take Bella very long to get pregnant again. She and Edward seem to just think baby and they have one!
Date: 23 Nov 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter loved it
Date: 23 Nov 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter. Loved the thoughts of the halloween costumes. I can just picture it.
Em is such a goober. Aww for trying for baby and Mile High play time.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love carefree PJ days. They are the best.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter loved it
Date: 10 Nov 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like a successful trip this time for Edward, especially after he sent Emmett home. Bella and the kids are always happy to have daddy back a bit early, and Bailey loves that da-da brings her presents! Alice is behaving herself now and Bella wants her and Jasper to come with them to Greece. They will probably be easier to travel with than Em and Rose. The only off note in this chapter was that call from Victoria Hunter. She seems a teensy bit too eager to buddy up with Bella and pushy about the library. Something not right about that!
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmmm glad she is leery of Victoria. I'd be suspicious too. Alice seems to be trying.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter loved it
Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter! It was different from your usual and I liked that a lot.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aside from Emmett being his usual stupid self, this trip to meet with the Maek's went well. If there are no problems at the dinner meeting tomorrow night, Edward will be back where he longs to be in forty-eight hours! With the shopping for Bella and the kids, Edward had a successful day. They all should go so well!
Date: 26 Oct 2013 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Em really is an idiot.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story and looking forward to mroe!~
Date: 15 Oct 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
sounds like a nice birthday party
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter loved it
Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Pretty nice twenty-first birthday! Time has really flown for Bella and Edward, even with all the turmoil that has gone on in their lives! It's nice that Alice is better and back home with the family. Nice, too, that the trip to the Greek isles is going ahead as planned. Emmett and Rosalie will be fun to travel with, I think. Now Bella can worry a bit for Edward's trip east to go well and him to come home safe to her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am so glad u have begun writting the sequel to this story!! I absolutly loved & truely enjoyed reading Across the lines. I am sure I will enjoy reading the sencond part just as much can't wait to read more of this amazing story!!! I will be impatiently awaiting next update!!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Em is such a goober, but you gotta love him. At least the 'rents had clothes on while smooching, lol
Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not that he really needs it, but I think it boosted Edward's confidence to hear his father praise his strength and leadership abilities. You can see immediately why Aro chose Edward over Emmett, to head the family. He's smarter and much more thoughtful than his brother!