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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: twimom1960 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have to say I love it when he brushes and braids her hair.  My husband does mine and it doesn't get any better than that lOl

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think Bella should have given Esme a container of frosting to take home!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

great love it so far cant wait to see wat happens next in the next chapter of there sequel

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

No sooner back home than it starts to change, just as they both feared it would. Now that Aro is gone there is bound to be some who will test the waters, so to speak, to see if they can get away with stuff! A strong leader's death usually causes a power vacuum like this. All Edward and Bella have to do is stay strong for each other and it will work out fine, hopefully!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

vacation sounds nice.   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved this

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad their story is continuing!!  I love your story and your characters. Thank you so much for continuing with their journey together. I can't wait to see how things will be for them once they get back home.  I'll be waiting/watching for the next chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  Like seeing sweet family times mixed in with the agnsty stuff

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yay!! I'm so excited to see that u have started the sequel!! I have been patienly waiting to see u begin!!! U truly are an absoltuly amazing writer with such an amazing talent of writting!! U truly captivate ur readers with the amzingly flow of ur words & chapters.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Weird computer this morning, this chapter posted twice! I guess it was good to have this short respite before haeding back home to the heavy responsibilities of leading the family. I'm sure Edward can handle it, especially with Bella to help him, and of course his aunt Renata. He's got a good core group of guys around him, loyal, smart and brave. That will surely help!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading this

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