Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Change
y does it say complete when it doesnt seem like it is there a sequel either way sorry 2 say bu that was a very poor end
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:00 PM Title: Labor
Is this it? Is there a sequel?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:01 AM Title: Labor
Poor Edward thinks he's going crazy!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:38 AM Title: Change
THIS IS NOT COMPLETE!!!! YOU MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH YOUR FIC AND THEN LEFT ME HANGING. I'M DISAPOINTED!!!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:07 AM Title: Time
im disappointed. i thought this story was a complete story. when will the chapters continue. will there be an ending.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Time
I don't care what you say, but I think Bella is a BITCH. She had absolutely NO right to run away without confronting Edward, especially since he had told her he loves her. She should at least try to understand where he stood before and then decide to tell him or not but NEVER leave and hide his son. I hope he doesen' forgive her so fast. I regard what she is doing as a betrayal. And Rose and Emmet are as guilty for covering up for her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Time
Oh boy (no pun intended, lol), is Edward going to figure it out?
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Time
man, I was expecting Rose to get really excited and slip up and say that it was bella. but i feel as if the truth will be revealed soon.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:11 PM Title: Time
Still think Bella is being a mega bitch and lost a respect for Emmett. He should have never done this to his brother. I hope takes the kid and kicks Emmett out of his life.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:11 PM Title: Perspectives
Some body NEEDS to tell Edward he has a right to know it is his baby too! I'm a firm believer In your body your choice but if your gonna bring a baby into the world then both parents have a right to know!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:09 PM Title: Perspectives
Oh, believe me, I don't hate Emmett, but Bella? That is a hard sell. First of all, and I know you said this is her M.O., but she should have been honest with Edward. And... lets's just say Edward was still against marriage and kids, Bella could have or would have left any way. Secondly, why did she have to get Rosalie and Em involved with moving her out? She should have just got Jacob and Leah to move her out since they aren't close with the Cullens. Now we have Ro and Em close to divorce. And WTFG Alice, loved her voicemails. I believe Bella deserved everything Alice said. All I am saying is Bella could have handled things a bit differently. BTW... the story still rocks :)
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:32 PM Title: Perspectives
I wouldn't say hate... per se... I would go with... strong dislike for her lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:13 PM Title: Connection
See? Heartbreak.
Anyway you'd want to change it up? Edward find Bella before baby, declare his wish to marry her? Tell her he only said no to marriage because he was scared?
I get why Bella felt this was her only option, but a year + is so long without each other!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:46 PM Title: Connection
OOH! I saw this coming at the end of the last chapter. I don' think I like you right now, you've made me cry. JUST KIDDING! I still love this story and think you are doing a great job telling. But please, don't let them be apart to long. I don't think my tear ducts could handle it. And is Edward going to really pissed that his family knew and didn't tell him! That should be really interesting.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:58 AM Title: Connection
OMG...I fucking knew it! Right now Bella is on my shit list and Edward is on my... I want to hug and take care of you list. So, is this about Edward's statement a while back when he said he didn't want any more children? Gah.... LOL Update soon please!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:16 AM Title: Connection
it's called communication. Like I get she's scared especially with the way that edward was saying that he didnt want the married life but all she had to do was talk to him. same for him even though he DID want that life he should have communicated that with her. *Face Palm*
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:55 PM Title: Connection
She fucked his brains out. Then she freaking leaves him. SHE is a BITCH!! She should had at least gave him a chance. I hope Emmett tells him! But I bet he won't, he is a coward to! Ggggrrrrrrrrr!! This chapter pissed me off!!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:48 PM Title: Connection
I'm sorry but I'm flouncing I really see no reason B to leave she must care about his girls or her own child i wish you well on your writing . best of luck. :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Connection
Please tell me Em will tell him, or he will find out some how ASAP, not a lot or angst?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:24 AM Title: Assurance
Please tell me that's not the end...I will be very disappointed if it is
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:08 AM Title: Assurance
After all that, she's leaving? B@!$&
Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:27 AM Title: Assurance
So Bella's moving? She's not gonna tell him?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:26 AM Title: Assurance
Oh... the sexting *huge grin* There is another side of pregnancy... horny as hell.... LOL What the hell is Bella up to now? What is she moving? Another awesome cliffie :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:48 AM Title: Tears
HOLY SHIT !!! *picks jaw off floor, puts eyeballs back in head* I love it when I caught off guard. You are awesome :)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:33 PM Title: Tears
omg, lol, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 10:51 PM Title: Tears
Oh no.....this is what I remember.....the heartache.
Great job. I've enjoyed rereading it! Now I've got to gear myself up for the Heartfail. Stupid doctor patient privacy laws!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 10:06 PM Title: Tears
I knew it!!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 10:03 PM Title: Tears
Yup I just had an inkling that was coming. Yes!!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 9:54 PM Title: Tears
OMG! She's having a baby cool can't wait to see what Edward has to say about that Please more thanks.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:00 PM Title: Declaration
More, please.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:12 PM Title: Declaration
Damn, what a cliffie!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:15 PM Title: Dilemma
Whatcha gonna do now Edward? :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Revelations
I'm wondering why Edward hasn't wanted to move past first and/or second base? Is he thinking about what happen between them their first time together. Or... is his subconscious thinking about the consequences having sex and what happened to Angela?
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:08 PM Title: Revelations
More please soon.its Edwards turn to reply
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:14 AM Title: Progress?
wow!!! now i am anxious to read more as soon as possible
Date: 03 Jul 2012 8:29 AM Title: Progress?
finally!! hopefully there will be no more friggin mood swings. Great Job as always hun.
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:42 AM Title: Surprises
more more more more more more more! lol pretty please?
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 12:59 AM Title: Dates
Alice is good, very good. LOL She finally got Edward to admit his feelings for Bella, out loud and not just to himself. So Edward's a stalker now. LOL It's a good thing, because Royce was quite the ass.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Games
fab chapter hes sneaky lol.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:29 PM Title: Comfort
fab chapter that was so emotional poor bella.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:21 PM Title: Moving
aww bless her that was so emotional.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:09 PM Title: Commencement
ooo hes jealous lol shame he doesn't know hes married to leah lol.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:04 PM Title: Brunch
fab chapter yep they defo did lol.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:47 PM Title: Interviews (Part Two)
fab chapter.ooo wonder what hes gonna say.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:42 PM Title: Interviews (Part One)
fab chapter,bet his face was a pic lol.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:35 PM Title: Alone
hmmm wonder she could mean lol.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:30 PM Title: Uncertainty
fab chapter.love emmett and rose lol.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:25 PM Title: Lemonade
wow that was hot!n can't wait to see look on his face when he hears her last name.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:44 PM Title: Nuptials
aww bless her.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:39 PM Title: Possibilities
hmm wonder who it was.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:35 PM Title: Breakdown
fab chapter.glad shes got alice,jake n leah for support
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 12:31 PM Title: Endings
omg poor bella.fab chapter.bless edward
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:07 AM Title: Games
They sure give each other mixed signals. LOL What is Edward going to think about Bella's date with Royce and that Alice planned it?
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 9:05 PM Title: Comfort
Wow. Edward and his mood swings. I can't believe how he's treating her(again) and for God's sake! It's just a freaking waffle iron. I hope Alice has answers to Bella's questions. One being.... how long as the stick been up his ass?
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Moving
They get along so well. Wonder what it will be like when the girls are added to the mix?
Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:00 AM Title: Commencement
Poor Edward!! Green is just not your color beautiful!! Lol
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Brunch
Oh, yes you did, you both did. hehehehehe. How long is the employer/employee relationship going to last, huh?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:04 AM Title: Interviews (Part Two)
OMG, you gotta love Carlisle and Esme. They had a damn bet over Alice's prediction. Carlisle won the bet too. Hehehehehe I can see Edward's point, but only a little bit. Bella could have mentioned she knew his whole family, at least. And why didn't she tell him she prefers Bella to Isabella? That right there would have been a no brainer. I was kinda shocked at how rude he was with Bella at the interview, but I loved how Esme put him in his place. Emmett is a trip and is exactly like a woman getting all up in Bella and Edward's business. So, Edward is on the phone with Bella. I can't wait to see how this conversation goes. Enjoy your vacation!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Interviews (Part One)
Whoa... i knew he would be surprised, but holy f**K! Looking forward to the interview :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:24 AM Title: Alone
I know why Edward hung up on Alice. When her brother wants to finally start dating, she shouldn't bring up his late wife in the conversation, but if Edward would have stayed on the phone with her, I'm pretty sure he would have found out who the mystery girl was. So.... a late interviewee? (not sure if that's a word, LOL) Hmmm. I wonder who that could be? *gigglesnorts*
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:10 AM Title: Uncertainty
Hmmm... how long does she think she can hide? What's going on in Edward's head? What's Alice going to say about Bella and Edward's disappearing act? What does Jacob need to talk to her about just the two of them? Can't wait to find out! Rose and Emmett were hilarious. Loved how they were giving Bella a rough time.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Flirting
How freakin' cute! Loved the questions and answered with questions scene. btw, Edward, it's called love at first sight or just plain fate! And you go girl. Bella is quite bold when alcohol is added hehehehe
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Nuptials
Poor Edward. He seems so alone, even though he has the twins and his family. If I was Edward, I wouldn't bet against Alice. LOL
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:54 PM Title: Breakdown
Poor Edward. He seems to be at a crossroads in his life right now. I'm also curious as to why he doesn't like Rosalie?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Endings
His family needs to back off and not pressure Edward. Angela was the love of his life and just maybe he's really not ready to move on. But you never know what can happen down the road :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:31 PM Title: Change
Do pray tell what this intervention is about? I think I might know. LOL
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:11 PM Title: Change
I like that Edward was married to Angela,usually it's Tanya or Victoria or god even Jessica. So far so good.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:39 AM Title: Change
Interesting. Can't wait to see how this goes. ;)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Change
Wow I like so sad for Edward and what is Bella doing with James the scum bag?
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:42 PM Title: Change
I love it! I can't wait to get caught up!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Change
For the first chapter of your fanfic, you are doing great. Characters seem fleshed out and not flat. Plus the story is unique and the characters are not playing the typical fic character 'jobs'. I like it.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:35 AM Title: Change
I just came across your story and from the very first chapter; I love it. You have an easy going style of writing that pulled me in from the first chapter.
I did notice one minor spelling error, though. "I shuttered at the memory as Renee tugged on my shirt cuff." I believe it should be "I shuddered..."
Great story!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:17 PM Title: Change
can't wait till they meet!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:06 AM Title: Change
Very interesting. I hope James does not hurt Bella when she tells him she is leaving. I am a little scared.
Why are Edward's family having an intervention for him????