Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am excited to see what happens next. Bella has every right to be angry but I can't wait to see them together! :D
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for more!!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2014 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Skankya is in high school mode huh? How childish.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
interesting..... bella s going to introduce edward as a piano teacher..good good:)
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Esme came down to talk to her.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
She is right, skankya is going to embarrass her as much as possible. I love Em.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Charlie is a wanker. Hmm skankya is gonna be trouble.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. B's in over her head I think.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for Edward to meet Levi. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 21 Jan 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow...sooo happy...can't wait for ed and roger to mett levi...
Date: 21 Jan 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Excellent..loved eds pov
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow. more please :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Levi is so cute! I'm glad that Bella is at least letting Edward into his life.
I hope Edward doesn't give up on Bella, prove her wrong about them.
More soon please!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for them to meet x
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
LOVE Edward's email. Edward and Bella both need professional help but I do not see Edward going to get professional help. I can not wait for Edward and Levi to meet. Loving this story.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ok ok I did the blog. :) u rock
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow that had to have been hard on bella's part to reach out. it was also hard on edward's part. he really did lay his feelings out and told her how he felt then and now.
now he just needs a second chance. i can understand why bella needs to keep her distant but i hope she doesn't close her heart out so much
loving the story and look forward to the future for the family
thank you
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am on there but never got told you updated. I am not sure what is going on
Author's Response:
check spam!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ok so I follow your blog and read a while ago but had to re read again!! Thank you!
First thank you for the 3 chapters and second I LOVED Them!! Loved Edwards email letter to Bella and Levi is sooooooo cute! Can't wait till they meet and start piano lessons!! Sooooooo please update again SOON!! Thanks again!!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
love it! Keep going please!!!!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh...now lets see what happens. Cannot wait.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Some may hate the turn your story has taken but not me i love it andit's your story so write the way you see/feel it can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 20 Jan 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Continue what you're writing. ;) i really love all your stories :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Just wanted to say that I love love LOVE this story! And i also love how quickly you post chapters! I'll be waiting for the next one!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
dear jj ,
i love your story's all of them
i may not like somethings but they go with the plot of the story you are writing so i can 't hate you for it
i even was not able to sleep yesterday cause i wanna know what happend to bella an dedward and how fucked up tanya was able to be to the both of them
keep typing and you will get where ever you wanna be in life cause i love what ever you are typing
xxx lin a fan from belgium
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Your story is awesome and people are just dumb for being ugly about it! I can't wait for more!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think you handled the 4 year time jump very well. It's your story. I would have died wit 4 chapters of years of angst and it would have been boring and I'd have been waiting for an Edward/Bella scene again. You done good !
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
I for one am glad you did chapter 13 and this chapter that way. usually when they ship ahead they go back and remember events I like you just use the years and wrote the importan events and got on with it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my!!! What a road you have paved!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
First off I Would Like to Say That i Really Enjoy This story. About The angst, i Think it is done excessly Sometimes. i Don't Think i Could've read this story if You Would've had 4 Chapters of it. well not til it was finished. i Find That reading stories that has tons.of angst often leave me feeling depressed and tend not to read them until its completed.
Good story and writing...cant Wait For more!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
You could never ruin this story. If we as reader's get so involved in a story it is because of a wonderful writer that pulls us into the lives in your amazing imagination. My only complaint is with myself. I am to impatient to wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
amazing
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
lord give me strenght not to choke tanya
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
LOVE it!!!!!!! I am glad that Edward read her book himself. Glad Roger made him. Also glad that he knows the truth about what Tanya did to Bella. Hope he and Bella together will take Tanya down. I hope he takes his anger and turns his life around. He would make a great dad.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
I liked the time skip you gave some insight of the man behind the mask.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like the skip of four years, forget the haters
Date: 20 Jan 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg! More chapters please! *no more angst :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Another brilliant chapter. I was a little surprised by the time skips but I think it was a good call for both of them. Loving this story still.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for the next chapter. You're amazing and so is this story. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
i dont care what anyone says this is a great story and so are your other ones. keep it up and im looking forward to the next update
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like it even with the time skips but I'm not keen on their child being so smart why cant he be a normal 3-4 year old.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
What an unexpected treat. Edward pov with quite a few questions answered about his whys. I agree with you about the time skips had you written the passage of time it would've been very angsty and probably felt like filler
Date: 20 Jan 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am loving it. I am excited about Edward eventually meeting his son.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved all the insight into Edward's past. Loved that he is through with Tanya: what did he have to give her? Love, love Roger. Love you for writing their story!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Dear Ruthlesslyyours aka JannMcCole
Thank you.
My best wishes and warmest regards.
Shirley Hashim.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Don´t worry, I am still loving it ;D
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter least he has the chance to try and right his wrong and hes no way like his dad
Date: 20 Jan 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm sorry to hear that you received negative feedback on the last chapter. I have enjoyed both and feel they add to the story. It's interesting to see their lives over the course of several years and especially to see Edward's reaction. While a quick HEA might have worked, it needs to be done this way so that they can truely accept each other and build a future.
I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome way to bring it altogether!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
I can't even imagine how hard it is to have readers. Much less angry readers. HOWEVER, YOU ARE THE GODDAMN WRITER. NEVER let someone determine which path you take with a story. Maybe that's selfish or ungrateful to the people that read your stories, but ultimately, you provide us with a piece of you. A piece that should be cherished. I'm sure you take countless hours out of your time to offer up this amazing work of fiction and, honestly? We should be thanking you for anything you give us. You don't do it for the money (although, you totally could!!); you do it because you enjoy it! I trust you as an author. Your work is fanfuckingtastic. Whatever you put out...I know it will be golden. That being said, maybe these "angry" readers need to get the fuck over themselves and have a little faith in the writer. It's okay to share opinions or give constructive criticism, but if you're spouting off hatefulness, you're out of line. People need to get over themselves.
While I'm ecstatic about the glimpse into Edward's turmoil during their time apart, it wasn't necessary. I trust you. If you think time needed to speed up that quickly, then you're right. You're the author. Period. I trust that.
You're amazing. Plain and simple. This story is one of the best I've ever read. I can't wait for more and I hope you'll continue to be true to your vision without allowing others to interfere. I may not review religiously...single mom and all that jazz, but this little gem is ALWAYS, ALWAYS a priority when it's in my inbox!! Keep this fabulousness coming!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
I for one love the way you did the time jump - it often makes me flounce when an author drags it out and details every second they were apart over umpteen chapters. We know they suffer while apart, the important thing is what happens when they get back together- you did it perrfectly :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
In reference to your author notes I for one did not see the twist of chapters 12, 13, and 14 coming. I feel it was a good judgment call to change things up . Can't wait for the next chapter.
P. S. Please let kharma bitch slap Tanya hard.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
it was a great chapter, i think how u handled it was great, thank you. but i have to tell u when i read that last bit i thought oh shit she did not stop it there and we would have to wait a week or whenever u updated but then i read ur a/n and breathed a sigh of relief that u would be updating again today. I hope u slept well, and ur homework got done. :0). Oh and just incase u didn't know i can't wait to read more.....
Date: 20 Jan 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
awe poor edward. i feel bad for both edward and bella. they have been through so much and the still manage to stay strong. im happy edward finally read the book because now he knows everything. i loved the chapter and i cant wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
I thought the time skips were quite well written. Who wants years of bullshit? You brought us right to the best parts.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
the story s going on very nicely :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
I get why you did the time jumps. If you had drawn out the pain they experienced while apart, it would have gotten repetitive, and boring. Thank you consolidating their separated years. We still know what they each went through without it drawn out.
I feel sorry for Edward having to learn of his child from a book and how Bella was treated. Finding out how difficult life was for her. I hope once he talks with Bella again, they talk honestly.
I'm looking forward to more. Don't let those that didn't like how something played out bother you much.
Sherry
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
I will never walk away from this story!!! It is my favorite one right now. Please write your story YOUR way. I love the story you are telling. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
omg! i agree with you, the time skip im not sure how but for me, it made the story that much better. cant wait for more, literally i think you made my day by updating two chapters so fast :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Omg, so freaking awesome, sad and heart wrenching, but oh so good!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
wow my heart breaks for him. so much to wake up and the one person you want is not there
not sure who or what to believe, i could have sworn the rest of the family was there when tanya was throwing out bella. i must have missed something.
i so love roger. he always did have a soft spot for bella. wow for edward to find all the truth in a book and learn about his son. i truly believe edward would be a good dad. he is not his father. i hope he learns to see that.
love that edward beat up charlie. charlie is a pig and deserved the beat down.
love it and look forward to more
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! Your right if you had drug out the their pain people would have accused you of doing it for reviews. I am really loving it and can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Don't let the negative people get to you. This is a great story :)
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank u for writing!! Love it!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Screw all the people who don't like the time jumps- its your story and I, personally, love it. Thank you very much for the quick updates. I really appreciate them and I am sure your other readers/fans do too.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow 4 years later, man tanya you are a witch and i hope you got what was coming to you. you are like those people if you can't have him or be happy then noone else can. man edward didn't love you and wasn't happy he wasn't going to change his mind.
so long being in a coma. i am glad finally carlisle came around to look after edward. edward read the book and find out what your family and tanya kept from you. you have a son spitting image of you and just as smart
oh bella listen to your heart
thank you
Date: 20 Jan 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMGosh!!!!!!! I can not believe that she did not get in touch with him after he woke up. Does Edward know that he has a son?????? I hope he does not try to take Levi away from Bella. I hope we get Edward's POV on what he went through when he woke up from his coma till he found Bella. I am loving this story. Edward has missed 4 years of his son's life. I hope to goodness that he does not get mad about that and take it out on Bella. I was like WOW, that he fucked her right than and there. I was reading it with my mouth hanging open.
Date: 20 Jan 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
i saw the notification about the blog, but still was not able to read till this evening. If Edward is mad now, I can't imagine what's going to happen when he finds out about Levi..
Date: 20 Jan 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love all your stories. have you thought about writing an EPOV from the time he awakes from the coma till he finds Bella? i would love to read about his reaction when he finds that she left, his divorce and what happened with Tanya. you're a great writer and i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
She'll end up back with him. Not sure how I feel about it unless she makes sure to put Levi first.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
She's an idiot! Love your work
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love this story! Can't believe he didn't read her story but if he was pissed before the next chapter should be interesting... XOXO,Cheri
Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was shocking but I completely understand why Bella is doing what she is doing. And any one who is a mother would also. I really want Edward's point of view when he reads her story.
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow!!! more please! :)
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow really love this fict great story very hot in places
well done
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! Glad I had to wait a day, it made a great birthday present. lol
Will definately start following the blog. Please update again soon please.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
You are amazing. I mean really amazing. This chapter was brilliant. I am only sad that so many years have passed. They have both missed so much time. And Levi. The poor thing has lost so much time with his daddy.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
More please, what a cliff... I wonder what mister CEO will do when he reads what happen to her. Are we going to see an Edward POV? Because i wonder why nobody came to her rescue. Not even Roger ..... Emmett or Jasper they saw he was happy with Bella.
when will you be posting the next chapter? .... Soon i hope
lots of kiss
Date: 19 Jan 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Following NOW! Ugh, I missed a day. WOW, what a chapter! I have to re-read and digest it.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay! He's awake & alive......Nice to see a year long coma hasn't changed Edward LoL
I hope he doesn't give up on Bella so they can be together with Levi. Plus he needs to know what Tanya did so he can make her pay.
More soon please!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
love it
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
i agree with reviewers cullencrazed and banshee69 for chapter 12... :) please update soon
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
what is going on? edward is in a coma..tanya wants to prevent the divorce so she can get as much money she can..and now bella s pregnant..?! what was she doing for the past three months..where was she staying..?! edward s still in a coma?!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
u r a very interesting writer...:)
Date: 19 Jan 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
drama..more nd more...