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Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

I want to know who leaked Bree's info and pic. It is one thing to make a buck off of adults but to exploit a sick child they need to be punished. She is still a ward of the state so it should be punishable I would think. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

First time was great, such a sad chapter..On the up side Jacob is an ASS...to wish a child dead he needs a good beat down or public humilation.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

man jacob you so need to back off. i hope justice crawls up your ass and you aren't able to sit anylonger. leah get a life and away from jacob he is no good

 

awww angela. i sure do hope they are able to help her with her list. sounds like they have a good handle on it

love it

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am balling my eyes out. Great chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved this

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think they need to leak the hospital tapes to the paps that would sure mess Jacob up he is a slimmy asshole.  I love the idea of Bella adopting Bree she loves her unconditionaly and that is more than I have see birth parents do with there own kids I am a foster parent so I have see to many assholes that think they have the right to do as they please because they have kids.  Poor Angela my heart was breaking and tears where falling reading this chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

i am afraid of the tears. i know you let us know someone would pass and i was hoping it would not be bree. so sad so many have to get this horrible disease but soemone so little so hard t fight heartbreaking

look forward to next chapter.

love the press conference they all did a great job

love it and thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

Angela is not going to make it that is the test right or is Jacob realy Bree's dad?????

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved th epress conference.  Can we have a Jacob POV when he has to go before the judge?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

Aww, man. I know you warned us, but I really hate bad news.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

Worried now....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh what do the test results say...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Edward better get to the jewelry store and get Bella a real ring. He might also want to stop by a lawyer, just in case this goes crazy.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

It wasn't a rabbit. It was a rat.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

DAMN YOU JACOB!!! I can't wait for it to come out the type of man he really is. I am however shock and suprised and happy for Edward and Bella. They are so good togther. Edward is the man of my dreams, and his family is hilarious. Til next time

E/k

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Jacob Black should did a thousand painful deaths.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it they still have not figured out that they are in love already everyone else has.  Jacob is a creepy bastard are they going to tell the world the truth?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jake is a jerk! Loved the proposal and ring

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

Too cute!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

awww there getting married and stupid jacbo gonna get wats coming to him great chapter loved it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yes, I new someone would think of the clause...marry him Bella.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, you know it was idiot with a camera. But our little family is so sweet, really who could not take a picture of them?

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

Dun dun dunnn!! Paps. Damn. Can't wait for next chap.

E/k

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

The paps got a pic that they can put a thousand stories to and the only one that would be right is that they are in love just dont know it yet.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved this.  Why do the paparazzi have to try and spoil everything

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter loved it think it was a paparazzi and bree saw it hard life been famous bet they will be writing crap if it was them and glad that bree got to have a fun time out of hospital before she gos through the transplant

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love Alice she is young and dumb but full of life and now I see her getting her shit together.  I love the sweet kiss Edward gave Bella. When are they going to see they are more than friends?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Alec is lucky that is all he got but that was good lol

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

Alice is too much.

E/k

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

Alice! You can't take that girl any where. Well, she is over whats-his-name anyway. Our couple is too cute.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward for the next chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story. It is funny and sad at the same time.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

ok. such a keeper. can't wait for more.

E/k

Reviewer: lissalou72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very cute story I am enjoying reading it. I can't wait to find out what happens when Bella and Rose meet their parents at Alices birthday party. I am glad that she figured out that Alec was an ass before she got to hurt.

 

Keep up the great work

Lissalou72

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

loving it, can't wait for more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved this.  The uncles are a hoot!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good chapter. i like these people. Well, not Alec, but he is gone now.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love it!!!! So cute how they were so caught up that hey passed Edwards car.

Poor Emmett is sad because he thinks Rose and Edward are dating :( please put him out of his misery.

Till next time

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Too stinkin' cute!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

She is so specail Love Rose she is very protective of Bella .  Poor Emmett thinks Edward and Rose are together.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

loving it, Rose is piece of work but she is a good friend

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow what a great start to this story!!! I love all the characters :)

its sad that cancer effects so many people but for so many of those to be children is even harder.

looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Till next time!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Suprise Suprise Alice is to funny.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

Amazing!  And Alice needs a mild sedative! Now do I have to wait  until Monday?  Can't I have some more, pretty please! !!! Loved it Ladies, thanks foe an awesome storya

 

Krazi

Xozo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well congrats ladies... and being the greedy fandom whore that I am... Jess anf TAT... I'll be bombarding u ladies with emails begging for more...lol! This has already got me hooked! Loved this first chapter and can't wait to sink my teeth into more.

Krazi

Xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

great story so far love it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love the Chapter, I hope Bella can adopt her and make her happy for as long as she has left...So for character death I couldn't persuade you for it to be Jacob and not Riley, Bree or Angela..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

loving this

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

I wasn't sure if Edward recognized her either!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is in love with little Bree and has had a tough life.  What is Edward going to do when he finds out that she is Isa.



Author's Response:

Edward is a really salt of the earth kind of guy in this fic.  I hope you like this it will nto be super angsty, and it will have a lot of fluff to it.  Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

Reviewer: mrsmadkins Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh what a shock it will be when everyone discovers Bella is Isa



Author's Response:

Yeah it will be surprising but it is funny how Edward finds out.  Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

can not wait to read more..So Isaand Bella are the same person

Author's Response:

Second chapter posts today.  Yes Isa and Bella are one in the same.  Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Like it a lot!



Author's Response:

YAY!  We are so happy to see such a great turn out so far.  Thanks, Nikky, Jess& Kasi~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it looking forward to the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Second chapter will post today, glad you're loving it.  Thanks, Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading this



Author's Response:

Good to hear, because we are enjoying wirting and sharing it with everyone!  Thanks, Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

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