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Date: 31 Jul 2017 2:18 AM Title: But I’m Yours

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 1:02 AM Title: Strength To Go

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 12:49 AM Title: I Wanna Call You Mine

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 12:32 AM Title: Be My Baby

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Date: 31 Jul 2017 12:08 AM Title: Hush Now, Don’t You Cry

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Date: 30 Jul 2017 11:58 PM Title: Gentle Implosions

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Date: 30 Jul 2017 11:05 PM Title: Prologue: Set You Free

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 2:07 PM Title: It’s Only Love, It’s Only Pain

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 1:53 PM Title: Just Too Much That Time Cannot Erase

Fantastic

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 1:38 PM Title: So Sick At Heart

I hate Alice and Edward!

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 1:13 PM Title: It’s Incredible

Uh oh

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 12:51 PM Title: Your Love Lifts Me Out of Time

Excellent!

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 12:03 PM Title: Have It All

Great chapter!

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 4:40 AM Title: If I Had My Way

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Date: 03 Feb 2017 4:01 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 5:55 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home (Outtake)

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 2:23 AM Title: Cleaning House

Uh-oh!

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 1:41 AM Title: Distance in Your Eyes

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 1:09 AM Title: Paradise is Coming

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 12:06 AM Title: Your Sweet Moonbeam

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 11:29 PM Title: Eighteen and Beautiful

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 10:05 AM Title: I Was a Lonely Soul

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:31 AM Title: Two People Meant to Be Together

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:49 AM Title: I Keep Trying

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 3:48 AM Title: Resignation to the End

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 2:31 AM Title: Harder to Find What’s Right

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 2:09 AM Title: The World is Rising

Great chapter!

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 1:48 AM Title: I Won’t Let it Go Down

Amazing chapter!

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Date: 01 Feb 2017 12:46 AM Title: When You Love Someone

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:56 PM Title: Pick Yourself Up

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 6:47 PM Title: Glorious Sadness

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:48 PM Title: But I’m Yours

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:53 AM Title: Strength To Go

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:34 AM Title: I Wanna Call You Mine

Excellent chapter!

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:08 AM Title: Be My Baby

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 6:25 AM Title: Hush Now, Don’t You Cry

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:41 AM Title: Gentle Implosions

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 4:42 AM Title: Prologue: Set You Free

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 8:35 PM Title: It’s Only Love, It’s Only Pain

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 8:20 PM Title: Just Too Much That Time Cannot Erase

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 8:07 PM Title: So Sick At Heart

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 7:48 PM Title: It’s Incredible

Uh-oh! Who took Bella?

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 7:34 PM Title: Your Love Lifts Me Out of Time

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 6:28 PM Title: Have It All

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 7:27 AM Title: If I Had My Way

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 6:53 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:08 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home (Outtake)

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 3:03 AM Title: Cleaning House

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 2:27 AM Title: Distance in Your Eyes

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 2:00 AM Title: Paradise is Coming

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 1:34 AM Title: Your Sweet Moonbeam

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 1:03 AM Title: Eighteen and Beautiful

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Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:19 AM Title: I Was a Lonely Soul

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:59 PM Title: Two People Meant to Be Together

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:46 PM Title: I Keep Trying

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:20 PM Title: Resignation to the End

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 10:24 PM Title: Harder to Find What’s Right

Loved it! Charlie is a horrible person!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 10:05 PM Title: The World is Rising

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 9:49 PM Title: I Won’t Let it Go Down

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:17 PM Title: When You Love Someone

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 7:35 PM Title: Pick Yourself Up

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 6:37 PM Title: Glorious Sadness

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 5:49 PM Title: But I’m Yours

Loved it!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 5:24 PM Title: Strength To Go

Loved it!

Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:37 PM Title: I Wanna Call You Mine

Loved it! Poor Bella!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:23 PM Title: Be My Baby

Loved it!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 4:04 PM Title: Hush Now, Don’t You Cry

Loved it!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 9:10 AM Title: Gentle Implosions

Loved it! Poor Bella!

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Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:50 AM Title: Prologue: Set You Free

Loved it!

Reviewer: SonjaSemeleCorvinus Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 7:14 AM Title: Hush Now, Don’t You Cry

love this song that goes with the chapter

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 4:27 PM Title: I Keep Trying

Loving this so far.

on a side note, you have pics of Bella portrayed by 2 different girls.

this latter pic, I personally don't think she is all that pretty but

i have read many stories with her pic as Bella and I don't know

why. I like even Emma rossum better than this girl. When I think

of Bella, I don't necessarily think of the film look of her esp since 

Edward thinks she is the most beautiful girl, and now Godric and Eric do.

so Bella needs to be a knockout brunette who is beautiful on the outside and in.

i just wish peeps would find some other girl to rep Bella instead of this girl.

just my 2cents...IMHO...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the note on the extra pic of KStew.  This story opened me up to casting my own characters, and while we had thought we had caught allt he ones with KStew's face, we obviously missed one.  So thank you so much for pointing that out.   As for the choice of Leighton Meester, she is the one that appeals to me as my Bella.  I know Bertie and a few others use Emmy Rossum, but while she is gourgeous, she just doesn't inspire me.  Neither does the other choices I have seen.  I had picked Leighton long before alot of other people had, but like I said she does it for me.  You are more than free to picture whomever you like.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:31 PM Title: It’s Only Love, It’s Only Pain

glad i finally got caught up cant wait to see what happens in the next part

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:42 PM Title: It’s Only Love, It’s Only Pain

ack ya killin me with the cliffy.   Ugh for fuckward and malice to get extra poofing powers.  MORE SOON IN SEQUEL PLZPLZPLZ

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 6:33 PM Title: Just Too Much That Time Cannot Erase

Oh wow, I am sorta relieved that Bella is turning and safely with Godric again.  I am sad they did not get to turn her on her own terms.  I very much enjoyed this chapter. :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:11 PM Title: Just Too Much That Time Cannot Erase

Love the pic.   Ugh  poor Em.  Sad that he is still thinking Fuckward and Mailce were telling him the truth.   Em should have gotten a clue with Jasper there though.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 5:54 PM Title: So Sick At Heart

oh Em. Hope B wakes up soon to tell him that Malice and Dicklesssward are lying. Mordred huh? interesting.

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 5:44 PM Title: So Sick At Heart

Loved it...I hope they get Bella soon....does the other Cullen's have anything to do with what's going on...update soon

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 5:33 PM Title: So Sick At Heart

Sorry to delete my review minutes after I wrote it.  I reread and realized I must have scrolled a bit too fast because I missed that they are following the car.  I am so incredibly relieved.  It gives me hope Bella will not be tortured by the spiky-haired freak and the copper-haired loser.  I loved this chapter.  I am so glad I reread because it gives me hope Godric and Bella will be reunited soon.  I hope Emmett will see the truth in Bella's eyes and listen to her.  I cannot imagine anyone would want to live a complete human life with a babysitter, no matter how well-meaning.  I also hope Charlotte will be alright.  I am curious about Mordred too.  Anyway, I really enjoyed this update.  I admit though, I am eager for Bella to no longer be human so that she will no longer be so vulnerable.  I also hope her scent has changed enough that she will never be tasty to Edward again.

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 5:01 PM Title: Distance in Your Eyes

I have truly enjoyed this story.  Godric was my favorite vampire on True Blood, and I really like how you have woven the characters from the two shows together!

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 8:55 AM Title: It’s Incredible

Loved it please update soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 2:26 AM Title: It’s Incredible

ACKKKKK  Ya killing me.   Wonder who the secret talkers were?  Alice???     OMG  need MORE!!!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 8:26 PM Title: It’s Incredible

I knew there would be bad stuff coming but I was so hopeful they would stay safe, together.  I hope whoever has taken Bella is stopped before they even get to leave the building.  That or maybe its Emmett and he'll realize his rescue was ill advised?  I hope Bella is not harmed...  This chapter was really great and like I said, I knew conflict had to be coming, still I care for your characters and so naturally it isn't easy reading them suffering.  I'd rather hoped Pam would be smarter, though I confess I did not see it happening that way.  I will still retain hope.  I also hope the Dark Prince's mate will not be harmed since Sophie and her Andrew desire to make him suffer.  Nora I rather hope meets the sun piece by excrutiating piece.  I shall wait and see what happens next, like I've said in the past -- I am enchanted by this story.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 7:43 PM Title: Your Sweet Moonbeam

I loved Bella and Godric's conversation.  They shared their conflicting viewpoints, expanded on others -- it was a very mature and *equal* conversation.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 7:44 AM Title: Eighteen and Beautiful

I really liked how honest Godric was regarding his attraction and desire to her.  I like the way he did not feel a need for a long courtship before the completion of the physical aspect of their bond.  I love how much choice she has!  I really enjoyed reading the shopping trip -- it was unique and delightful.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 10:44 AM Title: I Was a Lonely Soul

What a beautiful chapter!  This love scene was so intimate and sweet.  I am positively enchanted. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 9:34 AM Title: Two People Meant to Be Together

This chapter was so good!  I really liked how you thought threw the whole sun factor, very smart and incredibly enjoyable.  The visit from the Goddess was also really nice.

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 8:54 AM Title: I Keep Trying

I definitely like how Paul has come to be one of them.  I love that Sam was so wise.  I like the way Eric teases Bella but never goes too far.  I love the care Godric shows Bella in this chapter.  I like how she concerns herself with their needs too.  I'm highly curious - do the coffins have oxygen pumped in or are there discrete holes in them?  You don't have to answer, I just cannot help but asking.  Regardless, I loved this chapter as I have loved the others!

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2013 2:34 AM Title: Resignation to the End

I loved this chapter and their exploration of the Cullen house.  I really like how strong their instincts are regarding danger.  I also really liked Sam caring about his wolves, I know he did in canon but it feels more here.  I like Pam being smart -- that even in having questions -- she is not thoughtlessly running her mouth.  I would never expect Pam to behave that way but she is fairly new to this story so seeing more of her and having it be good and loyal (to her family) is really nice.

Lol, a silly note but I gotta admit I used to wonder how it didn't bug the Cullens eyes to be sparkling and refracting light all over the house.  I had a friend once who had ceiling to floor windows but they were tinted black on the outside and impossible to see through.  The inside looking out looked like standard issue clear windows.  I don't remember if it reduced things like sparkling and glare but I used to laugh trying to picture Emmett playing video games and having trouble seeing the screen through the glare.  Hahaha, I always wondered how the Cullens could be so comfortable knowing a Google Earth sattelite could have exposed them but then I figured odds are the Ficverse doesn't have Google Earth zoom in satellites.  Sorry for rambling but I could not help it. ;)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:37 PM Title: Harder to Find What’s Right

I like the thought of Bella and Eric reminiscing in the way siblings do.  Charlie is just awful.  I loved Godric's threat and speech to Charlie.  I also really enjoyed Eric's confrontation with Charlie.  The three of them are absolutely a family. :) I am so glad Bella has them. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 11:02 PM Title: The World is Rising

I am glad they were able to battle back the venom for now.  I really enjoyed this chapter.

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Date: 19 Nov 2013 10:06 PM Title: I Won’t Let it Go Down

Oh, how I loved this chapter!  It was so sweet but also super special too.  The ceremony was beautiful and the meaning behind it even more so.  The fact that it was touched by a Goddess even better.  This chapter was truly spectacular! :D

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 9:37 AM Title: When You Love Someone

Bella is so fragile and yet so tough in this chapter.  Fragile because who wouldn't be in her situation and yet tough because she keeps going and trying and loving.  Eric and Godric were delightful in this chapter, as was Ludwig.  I am so happy for the three of them. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 11:33 PM Title: Pick Yourself Up

This chapter was wonderful!  I really enjoyed the first half of it being a peak into Alcide's mind.  I also really enjoy the way you wrote him, he is more fleshed out than the books and far more enjoyable.  More tolerant and interesting.

I also really enjoyed Eric, he is fun and serious at the same time.  I like the bond between Eric and Godric and the three of them.  I am also glad that Bella is starting to heal.

I truly enjoyed this chapter. :)

Reviewer: Holidai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 10:39 PM Title: Glorious Sadness

I like how this chapter was exclusively Bella and Godric.  I loved his reactions and hers too.  I am so glad they will be there for each other in the future and I am in love with the idea of them being equals.  Neither one is stronger or wiser -- they are a team!  I really loved this chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:03 AM Title: Your Love Lifts Me Out of Time

Love the necklace and earrings.  Wonder if Pam will be able to behave for long.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:02 AM Title: Have It All

Excellent chapter. LOVED Whora getting put into her place. can’t wait for Eric to be able to get rid of Skanky Anne.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:01 AM Title: If I Had My Way

The teasing is so cute. Love that. The dinner and sunset was so sweet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:59 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home

Wonderful first time. Can’t wait for Eric to get his mate too. Hmmm wonder who you are gonna hook Jasper up with?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:59 AM Title: Feel So Far From Home (Outtake)

OMG That was freakin hilarious.
Beautiful opening picture.

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Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:59 AM Title: Cleaning House

Yey Jasper is there. Can’t wait for more. I think Pam is going to be trouble since she won’t get all of Eric’s attention anymroe

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