Date: 06 May 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
REAL GOOD I HOPE U FINSHED IT SOON CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENDS
Date: 27 Jan 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Good morning, liked your story and hope you will continue. please
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
wonder where he's taking her
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
seems he's planned ahead
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
wonder if it's a coincidence
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
think they will find them
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jun 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
read this long ago so restartin it since you seem to posting again
Date: 19 Jun 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward's love and attention will be wonderful for Bella. She needs to be taken care of from someone who loves her.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
So glad that she talked to Carlisle so easy.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor girl there are creeps everywhere. Edward will be more protective over her and very happy she told his dad what happened and she was getting help.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well... that was interesting. Now I can't wait for the next update. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
I was afraid that he had attacked Bella. Or worse!! Thank you for the update! Looking forward to more!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, you were missed! I see it's been a while but no matter still a joy to see you back. A filler chapter but I look forward to the next chapter all the same. READ YOU SOON ♥
Author's Response:
Thanks! I never meant to be gone for long. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow, hope you enjy it as well!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Author's Response:
I'm glad you love it! I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow :)
Date: 12 Jun 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Fun story, I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Next chapter will be posted tomorrow! :)
Date: 12 Jun 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
It has been so long since this story ipdated I had to read the first few chapters to remember whatits avout again. Thank you for updating. Its a real good story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and I am glad you like it. I will be posting the next chapter tomorrow. :)
Date: 11 Jun 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have to ask what is a painted line and why did it cause her to fall when she stepped on it?
Author's Response:
A painted line is the lines that they paint on streets and in parking lots that tell people where to park, or when they can pass. When dew falls at night or it rains because the lines are paint water collects on them. Bella was wearing flip flops that the tread has been worn out on so when she stepped on the line with her shoes having no tread and the combintion of a little water it created a slick surface which caused her to slip and fall. I have done this more times than I can count. Though usually I do not fall... but... I have been known to fall. I hope this clears this up. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
So glad to see this story return.
Author's Response:
Thanks! You will also get another update tomorrow. :)
Date: 11 Jun 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
So have I! Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love how playful they are with each other but Edward is still Master.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter
looking foward to more updates
well done
Author's Response:
Thanks! You will get another update tomorrow. :)
Date: 11 Jun 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! You will get another update tomorrow. :)
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chatper~~
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Finally, they each got some release!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Fantastic lemony goodness!
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Shockingly she didn't get spanked.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
He is so controlling! I wonder how many times Bella will try & buck the system while they hangout for the fourth. It seems he plans on taking her with him back home for as many clothes as he has in the closet.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cockyward makes me smile!
Date: 26 May 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! I commend you for taking time out of a very busy life to share your time & words with us.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it!!!! So good cannot wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad You liked it! Thanks!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thats too funny!! I would love to see this!!
Author's Response:
Glad it made you laugh!! :D
Date: 18 Feb 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome chapter. I am glad that they decided on their rules. LET THE FUN BEGIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes! It will begin. :D
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
they are off to a great start
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
What a life hot ass by a hot ass lol
Author's Response:
Lol!! Thanks!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
IT'S BEEN TOO LONG I MISSED YOUR UPDATE BUT.... THIS WAS WORT TH WAIT. THANK YOU! READ YOU SOON!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it, and that you thought it was worth the wait! :) It shouldn't be nearly as long for the next chapter, but no promises.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
love this story, DON"T question your writing its you
stay true to yourself
love goose
Author's Response:
Thanks! ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
how often do you post can;t wait
Author's Response:
I wanted to say thank you for all of your reviews! I decided to respond to the last one rather than respond to all of them. :) I am glad you like my story. As to how often I post. It really depends. I was going for once a week, but RL kicked my ass the past couple of weeks so it has been longer. My goal is to get back on track and at least update every two weeks, if I can it will be more. Thanks again!
Date: 16 Feb 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
it was hot
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
how did he know, did she have afterglow
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I like longer
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
gonna be caught up and wishing for more in a blink
Date: 16 Feb 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
damn he is hot
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
good I do hope you intend on finishin
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
at least he was concerned about her
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
fireworks are bound to happen since it is4th of July week
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start of course I know who owns that smirk
Date: 27 Jan 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sounds like a great day I would like to have.
Author's Response:
I know! I'd love to have a day like this too! :)
Date: 25 Jan 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am so glad you loved it!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am really enjoying this so far. I wish the chapters were longer though.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it, this is probably going to be as long as each chapter gets.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
I agree the Cullen men are so sweet. Too bad that there is not one for everyone. I love Les Miserables.
Author's Response:
Too bad yes! :) I love Les Miserables as well.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
The girls are really being spoiled!!!!!Love it!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you liked it!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Good chapter. Thank you!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thank you for reviewing and letting me know what you think!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
CHAPTERS ARE STILL TOO SHORT BUT AS ALWAYS A JOY TO READ. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
read it from chapter one to fiteen in one sitting absolutely brilliant.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Your reveiw make me grin. I am glad you like it!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad to see that you have posted the next chapter so will there be any girl three way for the guys to watch that would be a great surprise for the boys
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! No, this is not that type of story, sorrry.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Will there ever be an EPOV?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure. I might do an outtake. I will have to think about it, but for right now no.
Date: 21 Jan 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love it so far can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! You should be getting a new chapter today or tomorrow, it is with my Beta now! :)
Date: 16 Jan 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
nice day of domestice blis
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am really enjoying this story. Bella needs to listen. Her behind has to be tender after her recent punishments. She needs to give it a chance to cool down.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am truely enjoying reading this very captivating& intriginging story!! This truely is an amazingly beautifully well written story!! Than for all ur hard work.
Author's Response:
Thanks you your wonderful review! It has made me smile and has truely made my day, Thank you!!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like this chapter it painted a nice picture for me, felt real,
i thought it was quite sweet actually but I feel like there is still more to edward Cullen
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing to tell me!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was so excited to get this update. I have missed this story. Loved their shopping spree at the grocery store. lol
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am glad you are excited to get my updates. My goal is to start updating every week and to get on a scheduale.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
cant wait till more
Author's Response:
I am working on it! Glad you liked it!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
NOW I'LL BE WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response:
Lol! I am working on it, My goal is to start posting once a week.
Date: 13 Jan 2014 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you! Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
You're Welcome! Thanks for reviewing and letting me know what you thought!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love this story! Thank you for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 02 Jan 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this Edward.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like him too ;)
Date: 01 Jan 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
Happy 2014 to you, too! This is a awesome story!
Author's Response:
Happy 2014 to you as well. and Thanks again!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was hot, hot, hot!
Author's Response:
So glad you think it was hot, I am always nervous posting lemons
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh, boy! This is so good!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew he was a Dom, this is very good, very good indeed!
Author's Response:
Very glad you like it!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
thank you for the update. read you soon!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Never had a pork pop but mercy it sounds yummy
Author's Response:
They are so yummy!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh yum, a little Dominant SexyWard! Yummy!
Author's Response:
:D Glad you like him!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very good story! Really digging it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
This one never knew that painted lines in a parking lot were dangerous! Lol! Great story
Author's Response:
Yes they are! Lol! I have slipped on them many times.