Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:07 PM Title: French
Wow. I'm in awe of this story. I love the slower approach with these two. It's like e original but better because your are flushing out the characters more taking time to develop them and there relationship. I love it.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:16 PM Title: Double Jeopardy
Glad of the update wish they came more often have to go back and read the previous chapter again but no matter enjoying it . I like the humour in your writing.
Took your advice and downloaded Caasual Rule. Great read, can't put it down. Look forward to more.
Thank you. I'm so glad you;re enjoying the Casual Rule...I LOL's a few times writing it.
As far as this story. Im going to try my best to update more often. I wish I was a faster writer. Thank you again for the feedback!
Date: 10 May 2014 3:31 PM Title: Surprise!
Nice. I like this relationship this far. NOT liking Elenas influence on Christian. We need more interaction with his family. Some way of letting Ana know how they all think Elena is a 'friend'. Also Elena tends to discount his therapist, be good for Christian to thinks of what game Elenas really playing and what her motives are.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 5:21 PM Title: Jeopardy- Chapter 20
You write extremely well and I really thought that this story was going to be different,
but here we go again -first we have the restraints, next stop the playroom? Same old same old - exactly what is it that is different?
Date: 16 Jan 2014 8:25 PM Title: Off to the Show - Chapter 18
thank you for the update....That's my Christian...yes he is going to buy all of the prints......He'll probaly ask for the negatives...until you post again...I loved this chapter...Fifty at his best...frist Jack , then Jose...Fifty is showing restraint
Date: 27 Dec 2013 6:35 PM Title: Third Time's the Charm? - Chapter 15
Nice twists to get there, but after all the effort to get there it was not very sexxy, sorry but the love scene was to short and perfunctual. He just slammed it in and did it. Endings make and break stories because it takes so long to get there I want them to be in context with the story and then memorable and when it's a root at least it should excite me and the description of this one left me flaccid. But that's just me hopefully other engaged with it more. All the rest of the story was good and kept me interested. Overall wel done.