[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awe too sweet and how cute is Edward talking to the baby and wow so his toast to Bella straight to the heart I loved it update soon
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
awwww. they were sweet but someone should really beat Mike's ass..
Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
aaaawwwwww
Date: 14 Mar 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so happy for E&B! It's a good thing he finally recognized that he loved her and wanted to be with her. I sort of wish she'd run into to Jake and Leah one more time when she's obviously pregnant to rub in their faces...wicked, I know. =D
Date: 13 Mar 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was perfect. Just so simple and sweet. Just enough, no over the top. And I wish to hell Edward had put his fist in Mike's big mouth. Just one punch. But I suppose it was for the best he didn't. I hope in a future outtake Mike gets stuck with an old hag with no teeth and wiry hair! lol and a dozen kids!
Thank you for the update.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Very nice. I still have a hard time believing people as rude as Mike (& Jacob & Leah) exist.
Why was Mike invited to the bachelor party?
I'm very happy that J & L did not appear at the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
I d love to read how miserable Jacob and Leah are together, kind of poetic justice for how they treated Bella.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
Exception done of Mike the Douche, everything was perfect, there is no need of a big wedding. The sentiments have to come first. Very good chapter, thank you.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG he is just so sweet!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Aw, Edward melts my heart...
Thanks for the update! xo Mina
Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww too cute but wish Edward hit Mike.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is letting everyone know a little of life's secrets with his toast. He seems to have an inner peace and joy within himself now than he ever did before. I love that he talks to the baby! I wanted my husband to do it when I was pregnant with our daughter, but interestingly this brilliant man with three college degrees could only think to say, "Hello! How are you?" I asked why he never said more and he said he didn't know what to say to her! I'm glad Edward is different! Great work!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is so cute when he talks to the baby. How far along is the pregnancy?
Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
The toast was amazing... I loved it..
Wish they had knocked Mike on his ass!!
Loved this story and this chapter!!! :)
Awesome :)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
So great! "Tear"
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
This is fantastic!! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww I loved that toast. Mike is a fucknut and deserved the beat down.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love him taking care of her that is what she needs. Love that he is moving in with her. Glad the punks are off the street.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward put it all out there everyone knows how he feels. Mike is lucky to have his teeth in his head what a prick.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the toast! Edward's so sweet and is finally found his happiness. I can't believe the stuff mike was saying. That guy needs a good swift kick in the ass. I think if I'd had been Edward I would've kicked his ass out.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the chapter!!! And Mike is a total idiot!! Who says those kinds of things about someone to the face of the person that is about to be married? That guy must have a death wish!! But yes, I did love Edward's toast. He is totally a changed man.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Mike deserved to be punched in the face! How could he be so rude?
Aw,sappy Edward!He is so sweet!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! So sweet!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love Eric's words, had tears in my eyes! Wishing there were more Eric's than M Ike's in the world!!! Such a sweet story....more lemons!!! X
Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
good chapter - always -
Except Mike, a teen, nothing in the head...
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE.... Yes I liked his toast also...
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wowser Mike is a real piece of work
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
ahhhh , theres nothing like a good bit of mushy stuff to brighten the day
Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
awww he is just adorable!! and the daddy and baby talk. uhh i want to eat him up!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love, love, love! Except for Mike. Really, I wouldn't have minded if Edward had hit him. ;)
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome toast! They all should Have jumped Mike!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Are we gonna see Jacob and Leah again before this is over?
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward has turned into a real sweetheart. Mike is a jerk.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow gotta love edward
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter. Loved it!!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awe. A truly changed man
R
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ahh the toast was great has tears if happiness in my eyes. Mike so needed a beat down for saying those things. Loved Jasper's response not enough money, lol.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Scarred the other shoe will fall. Soon
R
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awwwww.....these two are so cute together. Mike needs to be run over by a diesel. What a jerk!!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
A hen party, I don't think I've ever heard of that before. Things are going well.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
The dogs are super cute, they'll be big brothers and/or sisters. If they conceived over Thanksgiving, then she has quite a while before her due date. I hope this story includes the baby born or perhaps a sequel? Bella deserves a lavish wedding even if it is small. If she quickly plans a ceremony she can wear a form fitting gown.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Good that they didn't get bail,otheriwse it would have been something to worry about.
"...I need it in good condition." Haha,did Edward think his friends would destroy his apartment?
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
oh getting closer
glad the guys where denied bail
i was a little worried abut bella being on her own. wondering how she copes when edward is not aroud
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Glad that the bad guys were caught, and so glad that everything seems smooth with Edward and Bella.....thanks for writing!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Extremely happy how happy he makes her feel, she is the only thing that matters in his world.
Caught the nabbers. So eventhough the purse was returned what they made a list of their victim houses or the town is just that small?
What a proud man Edward is of his family..love that
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hi, I love your story and just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy reading it. Sorry for all the trouble with FFN. I am glad you are able to post here. Jane
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
enjoying the story still . thanks for sharing. Pam b.
Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hmm not so sure Emmett can be trusted!!
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
aww.. they're going to be a family..
Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
About time mister. Now who the hell hurt Bella? They'll replace Edward on my shit list lol. He's forgiven because he's given her a baby!! :-)
Date: 12 Mar 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm upset that a whole month has passed and he is just fine living without Bella. Sure he is missing her but he doesn't get the I don't want to live another day without you by my side. Now he wants to play house, "fiance." Grr men lol. Fucking Ben, enough said.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love these developments!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh boy! I hope Emmett doesn't cause any trouble! lol I can't wait! :)
Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
aww they're just so cute!!!! I love how Bella is back to herself. Hmm Ben is the who robbed her go figure. I don't remember Bella getting her locks changed? Oh well hopefully they'll find them soon
Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
With Edward calling her "love" and these two living together, cause that is what they are doing just without acknowledging it, way too much involvement doing 'couple type' things to pass off as a non-relationship. I bet what Jacob said about if he loved her then... is on auto replay filling her mind with insecurities. He is an all around asshole and I hope he stays away. I imagine Bella asking herself why can't they be official when they obviously work perfectly fine with his career. Asking why can't he love me. His being married to his job cop out line makes me want to give this cop a good slap. What's his deal, was he that hurt by the girl that cheated on him and afraid of commitment, set in his way after all this time, reluctant to change?
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
So glad they caught them quickly and Edward is off that case. Let's hope the stress of the court, wedding and everything else doesn't cause her too many problems with the pregnancy. Debbie
Date: 12 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
So they are now planning a wedding, the baby, the moving in of Edward at Bella's place. Everything takes place nicely. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I am so happy for them. Things are coming together quite nicely. Looking forward to Emmett and his "guy's" night.
thanks for the update
Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad that they caught those guys and things are going well for Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved this chapter! I can't wait for the wedding.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Calm, relief and projects, no cloud in the blue sky
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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loving it, will Jake and Leah be returning anytime soon
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
They deserve to be happy. I love that they have succeeded. But I think Jake and Leah show their ugly faces at some point.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
So happy Edward came to his senses and doing it 100%
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
My thoughts are that they need to run I to Leah and Jake. Bella needs to see how happy and healthy she is compared to the unhealthy and toxic relationship those two have. I'm pretty sure Jake never told Leah about the baby, he just wanted a baby with Bella. I don't even think Leah can get pregnant because of all the abuse her body has gone through in order to be stick skinny.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well I keep hoping this does not fall apart.. So, so far so good.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love how his priorities have totally changed......sighhhhhh x
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank goodness they were caught and now that is one thing they don't have to worry about and yeah they are getting married I can't wait
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Where r the diabolical duo Jake and Leah? Somethibg tells me he is gonna be stupid when he finds out she is pregnant and getting marrief
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Still wondering if Jake is going to make another appearance! He and Leah are going to have a cow about "fat" Bella getting the great husband, fantastic sex, and a baby!!! Those two are going to be green with envy and probably not nice about it!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad the bad guys were caught. That has to relieve Bellas mind a lot.
Wedding soon :)
Can't wait. :D
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad to know the bad guys are behind bars. I can't wait for the wedding, it will be small and intimate but I guess there will be nice surprises.
What about the baby's sex? Will it be kept a surprise?
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
thrilled she said yes to the living locatins and being his wife
so much to look forward to. perfect
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad the bad guys are behind bars and hopefully stay that way until court...
Aw... I'm sure the weddin will be very special
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Glad the bad guys are in jail and staying there.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hope her stress doesn't get too bad
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think he has made it clear what she means to him love him
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
looking froward to more