Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think Bella is overwhelmed by how well things are going for her and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
thank you for the updates.........Well Bella is going to marry Edward YAY!!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
sweet and glad it is going in this direction. Size is not so important, what is important is truth, trust and love.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edward talking with the puppy was so funny!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
So he was the man staring in her fantasy and he just said my girl!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jeez these two. Chuckling at the way Edward sat on the arm of Bella's chair and how he safe word came out perfectly.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Make time. And yes Edward you have time.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was deliciously hot. Oh why can't he commit, he needs to get over that already lol. I think he will as Bella's pussy power will break him.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was the sexiest game of cards.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
it wouldn't be edwrad if he wasn't at least a little emo, right? :D
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was horrible. The good thing to come from the drama is Bella leaving it behind her. I'm glad Leah knows what scum Jake is. Oh well he is her problem alone and not Bella's anymore.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
I've never heard anyone speak to Bella the way Leah did calling her fat and gross. That is cruel and I wish Bella wouldn't stand for it. Edward finds her sexy! When is he going to bust a move already.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Stupid guy for forgetting her birthday. Maybe by the time the wedding happens he'll be introduced as her boyfriend. Well I can hope.
Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Too cute, at least he admitted to reading her journal along with giving Bella an apology. I'd crawl under a rock if someone hit like him read my journal!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
So they officially made up, she told him she loved him im good
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
no shopping with Alice, go with Edward !...lol
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
So freaking excited!
Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love how attentive and sweet Edward was being. And he wants to move in with Bella, and get married. I'm totally loving it.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
even tho they have expressed their love for each other how does bella cope w the fact that he had pushed her away ... how can she trust him emotionally esp considering her past and all the hurt/angst
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Im liking the mushy side of Edward.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad that Edward opened for love, but I thought Bella agreed so easy, she is such a sweet person.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wonderful chapter!! thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
These two are so cute! Is Jake going to be back? I bet he and Leah are going to freak out when they find out that Bella and Edward are getting married and having a baby! I am assuming that Leah can't get pregnant because of her anorexia or she is just so damn afraid of be "fat" which is just a part of the eating disorder she obviously has! I could see those two trying to cause problems for our happy couple!
Edward - GO GET THE GIRL A RING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a feeling that the necklace is great but Bella was hoping for an engagement ring!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
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Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
He always so sweet
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they talked because we knew he has issues too.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it can't wait for more... I love this story so much, hate Jacob and I hope he gets what he deserves.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love this story!
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awww he is so sweet just love him. She said yes so excited.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I loved their talk! And it's a very good thing Edward allowed her to see some of his own insecurities, because so far he was showing nothing of that side to her. And with all the new feelings and the pregnancy I'm sure it's getting a rock off her heart to know he isn't above feeling his own insecurities;)
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, everything is going to be fine, for Bella and for Edward. Thank you for the update.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
In fact they were both unhappy away from each other, they only had to admit it.
things flow more easy now...
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
I was really surprised of Edward being insecure. I always saw him so sure of himself that it was nice to see his softer side.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww they are too cute
Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
He is so sweet and admiting to being in love is a good look for him. She is still ready to let him out anytime but now she said yes to having him move in and marry him I hope this changes her to know he realy loves her
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aww, it's about time he told her what was going on in his head instead of running away. So glad she agreed to marry him. Debbie
Date: 11 Mar 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow she said yes but its a good thing they know they love each other and after what happened they don't want to waste anymore time so awesome
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, she finally told him I love you.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad they tallked and are moving forward together..
Loving this story so hard!! :D
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lovin this so much.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
Damn I knew it was Ben now will they catch them and bow will Edward prove himself hmmm I loved it update soon and I am sorry for the way you were treated on FFN its not right at all
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yes,that is true.Edward was always straight with her,so there is no reason for her not to believe him.I did guess that she probably didn't know about the baby.It was very early,after all.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am so glad they got their hearts and minds working together. They have been in love for so long. They will finally have the family they both need.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
He's always been honest with her. She had no reason not to believe him.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
What rule did they say was broken?
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I'm so glad yal left a message on fanfic that this story was still on here. I'm really enjoying this story
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
Those dirty scoundrels over at ff. not sure what their prob is. I have enjoyed this story. Happy writing. Stephanie.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
good one.. thanks
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hey I was there when they took it down, had read the chapter and was a bout to click to review and it was gone, what in 10 minutes. That was awful, you ever even said anything back, and you have nothing nothing on the ones still there. I think about those authors that say something back to people who mess with them. Well I hope who ever it was does not follow you. I am sorry and was so unhappy. I decided to sit down and think about something other than Edward and realized you'd mention it somewhere and found it in bio oh thank goodness cause it was a cliffie and oh what two chapters a difference makes. He realized it and she is having his baby her baby. So glad I found you.
Sandy
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hey I was there when they took it down, had read the chapter and was a bout to click to review and it was gone, what in 10 minutes. That was awful, you ever even said anything back, and you have nothing nothing on the ones still there. I think about those authors that say something back to people who mess with them. Well I hope who ever it was does not follow you. I am sorry and was so unhappy. I decided to sit down and think about something other than Edward and realized you'd mention it somewhere and found it in bio oh thank goodness cause it was a cliffie and oh what two chapters a difference makes. He realized it and she is having his baby her baby. So glad I found you.
Sandy
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
thanks muchly for the update... glad she told stinkyward to clean up..lol
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Excellent chapter. I miss this story on FF.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
love it
then need to catch ben and mystery man
baby yeah
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love love this story. You guys are the best ever what great stories you write. I hope she has a little Edward how cute would that be. Glas I followed this story over here. Till next time.
Lilly aka Sharon Vanek
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Squee! So happy for them! !! Cant wait for jerk Jacob and loser Leah to see ho happy she is!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Good for his stepping up and start the wooing.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I don't think ahe knows. About time he got his act together.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
So maybe he has head out of butt and if he was with Bella this wouldn't have happened.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh Edward you fool and you had the nerve to stop Garrett so she has no chance at a real life because you have no balls. I hope Em has a few words with you.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad that she believes Edward!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yes! yes yes yes! I don't blame her for being careful, Edward did let her walk out. No he didn't deal with it well, but still. And a baby, a sweet baby that is part of both of them. Wonderful! I love it! thank you so much for the update! Looking forward to the rest.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter, so it's is what it is, a real relationship with a future and everything. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
ffn and its assblessedholes (cul-bénis in french) sucks to death; I was afraid seing that your fiction was not there anymore. But now, I'm so glad that I can find you on TWCS. Keep going the good job. Thank you girls !
Date: 10 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Kinda figured it was Ben but the locksmith was a surprise. Go Puppies!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
thank you for the updtate...Ben and his partner needs their a$$es kicked!!!! I hope Emmett and Edward are the ones to do it
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay!! Loved it!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow the guys are working together. I bet he will be easy to catch now they know who it is. Christmas Eve in the hospital that sucks. I can wait to see him take care of her for the next two weeks.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awww he is just so sweet I wonder if she knows she is pregnant.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh noooo I hope she is ok she has the worse luck. It was bound to happen that she would want a commitment. Maybe this is what it will take for him to take the next step
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
He has never lied to her but it still surprises me that she believes him about loving her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm not surprised about her believing him about the 'love you', but she was right to be sceptical especially when he has said he doesn't ever envisage getting married or having kids. I hope they catch the two of them quickly and emmett interrogates them. I'll bet he will be as scary as Edward. Debbie
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
Soooo loving this. Such a shame fan fic axed it but so glad you are posting here x
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
I think that Edward is sweet as all get out. Yeah he was kind of a tool for a moment or 2, but I chalk that up to him being scared. He is making up for it and is truly happy with how everything.....I love it. I wasn't surprised Bella believed Edward - they have never lied to each other.
Seriously can't wait until they catch Ben and his accomplice.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well OK he has always been open and honest with her.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
love it love it love it
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
How is Jake going to respond to the pregnancy
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Does Leah not realized it the deprived brain of hers that anorexia or belemia causes you to not have your period therefore not children to be had. I can't believe Jacob would expect her to sleep with him and them give up the baby. He is just down right vicious. So glad Edward beat the shit out of him and Bella stood up to him. Does Edward even know he calls her love and is practically living with her. He need to wake up.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it! The puppies save the day! It makes perfect sense for her mugger and the locksmith to be working together. Just as it makes perfect sense for Bella to believe and trust in Edward. For all she has been hurt in the past, Bella is still an open and trusting person. She knows Edward loves her and she still loves him. Thank you for another marvelous chapter.
P.S. Losing this story is really FFN loss! I came here originally because stories were being blackballed left and right some time ago. I'm happy you found a home here at TWCSLIBRARY. I would never want to lose your work. Thanks for remembering those of us who love your work instead of the one reviewer who didn't. :-)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank goodness I found you.....I've been reading over on fanfiction and wondered I'd not had any updates....I soooo love this story. Xx