Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay I love it!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
THIS IS PERFECT! I LOVE IT!! :)=)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Everything's going to be all right now...
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Every chapter is great and I can't wait for the next one
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love all your work. I'm sorry it got taken down on ffn cause I followed it on there. But I'm glad you're still doing it on another site. Thanks to you guys my sister gets mad cause the first thing I do in the morning is looking to see if it's updated ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well, at least now they know who has been pulling these muggings off. Way to go, Pups. I think they each deserve a big bone for protecting Bella the way they did. And I'm glad that Bella and Edward are on the same page as far as their feelings go.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderfully done! I think Bella will be a little apprehensive about saying yes to his proposal. Is he asking for me or is he asking for the baby? On the other hand, she may not know about the baby. Someone as forthright as Brlla would never try to keep Edward from his child. Her only apprehension may stem from all the times she was treated cruelly by Jake in the past. A sort of PTSD. Again, wonderfully done and wonderfully handled!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome. He was the mystery Seattle cop. Oh it was destiny they were meant to be. So loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
So glad I found you guys here! I was out of town and had no email then suddenly the story dissappears from FFN!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Gosh rose was pushy. Can she no see Edward has staked his claim there. I love jealous Edward. Just the thought of her going out with someone made him claim her against the wall. He wants her and no one else better even look at her love this.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I think that she is overwhelmed at the moment. She just wants to heal and be taken cared of right now. I'm so happy for them. I think that later when she's better she will really think of every thing and freak out. Right now she's tired and hurting.
Hilda
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
I was surprised she didn't even know about the baby. Reviewed on fictionpad also.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad that I was wrong about her reaction, but I wasn't too far away;)
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad everything is well with them, XD baby bella & edward
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awwwwww That is sooooo nice!!!! She gave him a chance yay!!!!! I hope they get Ben soon enough!!!! Well I don´t know could the James guy be in it too? He seemed kind of creepy when Edward interviewed him at the park. You just jeep up the suspense!!! I look foward to the next chapter!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
So... more about the mugger and his friend.
Bella not trusting Edward, I get that. He has hurt her. Even with the honesty in the beginning. There were practially living together. I wonder how he would have reacted to the pregnancy if she hadnt been broken into and hurt??
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
OK, you got me, I thought for sure she would give him a hard time. So glad they are going to work this out. Love the pups too, they saved her life.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you! I was really hoping that Bella didn't know about the baby, but most writers don't do it that way. Thank you! Bella need to say the words to Edward!! Great chapter!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very good again
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Why is Ben so hell bent on mugging Bella .. i dont think she has much .. I hope they catch them ..
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
could jake or leah behind it
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update, thank god you post on more than one site...I can't believe ffn delete the story!!! I think Bella knew she was pregnant and when Edward told her he didn't want kids she did what she had to do...now however he knows and he's going to marry her, lets hope Bella still wants to marry him...you ladies write the BEST STORIES!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope you reported the offensive reviewer. So many trolls in this world. They're so abnormal I generally just pity them but I think a little justice is on order here too
Author's Response:
You can't report guest reviewers.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I´m really so sorry you had to delete your story from fanfiction some people really don´t understand and can be so dense sometimes Arghh! it´s very frustrating!!! Thank you for keeping it here!!!
Author's Response:
We did not delete the story, FFN deleted it for violating the terms of service. Basically the sex and cussing was what got it pulled. Glad you're reading here.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow I really didn´t think about her getting pregnant! It´s great! Well I hope she tells Edward yes! Sorry I´m a sucker for romantic stories! I think she may already know about the pregnancy!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad he pulled his head out of his ass
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
when bella finds out the edward knew about the baby b4 she woke up ... she will prob believe that he wants to b w her coz of the baby and not coz he really loves her .. she does still have serious self esteem issues
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
woo hoo glad he got his head out of his arse, but shes going to freak about the baby thing i bet.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
ugh poor Bella. ooh naughty naughty fibber. But I love it
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is what she wanted all along. I can not see her fighting it. Tell her she is pregnant too.
Now about your problems with FF. I sat here thinking Oh no I hope I did not write a bad review. I write to the story how it makes me feel. The characters and the need for a direction (some never have one). I can not critisize your writing as I don't write. I read! I can only respond to the characters.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
O M Goooooooodddddddd
love it!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Somehow I've a feeling she does not know about the baby since it's still so early in the pregnancy. At first I thought maybe that's why she told Edward she was leaving him because she wanted more and he couldn't do more, but it would have a bit too early in the pregnancy for her to have known at that time . (maybe?).. looking forward to the next post. She may tell him to go fly a kite ya know..lol Pam b.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for continuing the story. Sorry about ffn and their foolish decision to drop it. I really like how Edward is finally opening opening his eyes.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
First of all, it is ridiculous that you have to put up with harrassment just to keep your stories posted on FFN. This is a great story so I am so happy you are continuing it here.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow bella will be shocked unless she already knew she was expecting
too bad it took bella being hurt helped open edwards eyes too his love for her and wanting her to be in his life
can't wait to see if bella pushes him away or welcomes him back
loveing it
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
EEEHHH!!!! OMG!!! I knew they were in love with each other but I never excepted Edward to propose ahh. I wonder how she's gonna react about the baby
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh snap!!! I can't believe she got hurt. Poor Bella first she gets robbed in the park and now robbed in her own house. I hope she's ok
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loving it! I'm glad you posted chapter 18 on ff.net shortly before it was pulled that alerted me to the fact that it had been pulled so I could come over here to read it. I'm sorry it got pulled. I really don't know why it did. Anyway I'm glad you're continuing the story.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
totally loving this story!!
sorry to hear that ffn took it down - they're completely awful for doing so (and for doing it to other writers as well).
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
I would say she doesn't know about the baby but I am so glad Edward finally admitted to her and himself how he feels
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Just the fire Edward needs under his butt! Took some guts though for Bella to end it. Gotta give her credit. So sorry you were targeted on ffnet. I swear the has got to be the most flakiest website I have ever seen. So glad you are here and screw those meddling reviewers. Must be pretty unhappy people is all I can figure if all they have time to do is make trouble for everyone else!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm happy that he's finally realized the truth of his feelings. I just hope that Bella will accept them.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aww about time he got his head out and told her. Let's just hope he explains what was going through his head...other than being a douche. And that he tells her she is pregnant and he is so happy about it. She deserves a full explanation for his behaviour. Debbie
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Woohoo, but couldn't you have made the chapter a bit longer?
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, I think she knows about the baby and I think she will tell him no, she can't trust him, trying to protect herself. She will think he is only saying I love you because she got hurt. Hopefully, that will only last one chapter, cause I can not stand angst. This story is so good, each day I wait with baited breath for the next chapter. Raising the Steaks, so goooooooooooooood!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love you ladies, love this chapter and story ... Sorry about the ffn stuff.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally, he woke... Times flies when everything goes well but the wait is agonizing
Finally, she woke... maybe - I hope - a new start, a new life together, a family...
Read you tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW! okay so I was reading this on fanfic, that's annoying that it got pulled but i'm glad I found it!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hate when removing FF stories that we love, they're getting worse, they haul the freedom of the author and the reader, each chooses what to read, I'll read it now here.
I'm glad that Edward loves Bella acknowledged that, I just hope that Bella believe, I think Edward will have to fight for Bella. I guess now he will not let Bella go home alone.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
ahhh.... she is going to have a baby!!
Edward finally admits he loves her and want her to marry him!! I am soo happy!! :)
Sorry that fan fiction is a bitch and pulled your story!! Assholes!!
Love this!!!!!! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, a baby and I love you.. Very good chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG! I think she knows about the baby, and she is going to go on to say that the only reason he wants that is because she's pregnant......
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg yes!!!! He finally fessed up!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my! He's not taking baby steps anymore.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wondered what happened to your story on ffn. Thank goodness you update it here too. Well thank goodness Edward pulled his head out of his butt. I felt bad for him but I also wanted to kick his butt for being so blind.
I loved how he rushed in there and stayed by her side. Even better was how he figured out that he loves her and the baby. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she knew about the baby. Bella is very selfless and probably did not plan on telling Edward right a way. she does not want him out of obligation but out of love. he said he did not want kids. Edward has got to prove to Bella he can be everything she has been wanting. Im not sure she will just take his word on it.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes! Edward finally realized he is in love. How will Bella take it?
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for continuing the story here. I noticed almost immediately when it was pulled from the other site. I frantically came to this one hoping it was still here. Still love it!,
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for the next update these is getting good looking forward to tomr
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope Bella doesn't know about the baby ,so she won't think Edward just said he loved her because of the baby. I so want to see what Jacob has to say, an Edward will get the chance to kick sum ass. Please post soon!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
She's gonna tell him no. She'll think that he's only saying that because of the baby, and that he doesn't really love-love her. Because she doesn't think much of herself, we know that, right? anyway, that's my take on it. He's gonna have his hands full trying to convince her. And rightly so, the asswipe. ; )
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great story
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she will step back for a few and get her mind together, I don't think she was far enough along for her to know, plus she could have been depressed and never seen the hint of pregnancy.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, Edward has had the wake-up call he needed. I never would have guessed about her being pregnant, but I love it regardless. I can't wait to find out Bella's reaction to what Edward said to her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she will be a bit cautious and Edward is gonna have to show her that he means business!! I don't think she knows about the baby.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes! he said it. I hope she doesn't go through a you're only saying that because of the baby stage
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
I have not even read the chapter yet but just wanted to say sorry a brilliant story was pulled. Some people do not understand the concept of "if you don't like it, don't read it". It's like they have lost their own free will. Rant over. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am sorry the fanfic nazi's pulled your story. I love it. I think Edward is so sweet carrying her into the house and cuddling with her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so sorry that because of some skank you can no longer post this story on FFN but I want to say thank you for continuing it. I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES! Thank you for sharing them with us.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved it! I didn't guess about either one, just that the separation was going to make Edward realize that he loves her. I don't think she knows she's pregnant-but that's probably wishful thinking on my part. I'd lke to think htat Bella would not keep it from Edward if she knew.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she knows but was afraid to tell him because she knew he didn't want children. I was afraid Edward would think it was Jake's baby.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing Bella had some sort of idea she might be prego but wasn't totally sure when she broke up with him. I just hope she really listens to all he has to say and doesn't jump into any conclusions before he's done. Thanks for the update ladies!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
*sigh* at last!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well Hallelujah!! Edward finally gets it. I am not sure if Bella knows she is pregnant or not...sometimes when life is in a turmoil you just forget about periods...
I am so glad to see this story continued here. There is always one bad apple that tries to ruin things for everyone. Thanks for not letting that happen. Love this story and thank you for the update.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
She's not going to believe him. Especially when she finds out he knows about the baby.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
This is fantastic! I think she already knew about being pregnant and I think she may freak out that Edward is only saying that because he knows she is pregnant!!I an excited for more!! :)=)
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow I loved it damn it took him long enough but what will bella say to Edwards confession will she let him in and did she see who attacked her what is next for them
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I don't think she knew about the baby before, because she wouldn't just not tell him - even if he said he doesn't want kids before... I'm not sure she's going to say yes to his wanting to marry her right away though, especially if he tells her about the pregnancy right away;)
Shes very proud and stubborn, which I love about her, but after all his talks about being married to his job and not even wanting a girlfriend... I doubt she's ready to accept his proposal...
I really think that what's going on at ff is more than ridiculous now! If you aren't even allowed to decide which reviews you want to keep and get pulled for protecting your work... What good do they to protect their authors?!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW! I guess what they say about not knowing what you had till its gone, kinda rings true here. Cmon Bella don't push him away now, he just made a HUGE step, take it with him
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am really enjoying your story! Sorry that FF were being idiots. I have enjoyed ALL of your stories, and will continue to do so as long as you write them! :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg!!!! :) im so happy he finally came to that realization! Not sure if she knew about the baby. ...so sorry about FFN.. some people are just hateful and spiteful :(
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can't wait for this story to finish so I can read it one sitting. It's great
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she knows and it will take her some time to get "her head around all of this"
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
First - what the hell is wrong with people? Didn't their momma's tell them if they have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all?
Second - Ffn needs to monitor what these trolls are doing! Why are they pandering to those few who have nothing else to do but whine when they don't like something? Someone needs to replicate or invent something similiar to ffn (because as stupid as they can be, it is the easiest user friendly site). If you don't like a story, that's your prerogative but don't ruin it for someone else.
Third - love this chapter! The baby was a surprise for me but his realization wasn't. Just hope she believes him! Not sure if she knew about the baby when she broke up with him or even knows now.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
So sorry about the nasty stuff over on FFN, but I'm glad you let us know about TWCS. Great place, yeah! Edward is finally wisening up!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think she knew about the baby. That's why she broke it off. She loves Edward so much she was willing to take what she could get. When she found out about the baby she knew it wouldn't be enough for the baby. She was already being a good mommy!! I knew it!!!! I've never been so happy to guess correctly before. They needed this!!
Hilda
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
I call she pregnant y'all. Ah I was right
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
AAAAHHHHH. Part of me thinks she found out she was pregnant and tried one more time to see if he changed his mind, and when he didn't she figured she needed to walk away. But then again, I don't know if she'd keep something so big from him.
I hope she believes him and doesn't think it's just cause he missed having a permanent booty call.
Wonder who attacked her....
Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's about time! It seems the worst of the worst has to happen for true feeling to come out. Being stupid and stubborn is not a good excuse. I wonder, did Bella know she was pregnant? Or is this another surprise. Is she going to think he asked her because he knew??? Can't wait for the next installment. Thanks.