Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
ugh, stupid guest reviewers :( I hate when AMAZING stories get taken down because of one person, so sad!
FINALLY so happy that he has finally admitted it to himself, what everyone has known for quite some time! Can't wait to read more and see her reaction to his confession!
-Kate
Date: 09 Mar 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
very pleased to have an account here to read the end of this beautiful story
Thank you
(Isnoname in FF)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
She is in a coma isn''t she. Was she raped and finds out she is pregnant. Aww edward get your head of your ass finally.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
Omg this will wake his ass up he has been so unhappy without her and now she is hurt is he going to blame himself for not protecting her
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
oh edward
i guess you never know what you have till it is gone
love that bella is looking out for herself and her future
tough decisions but she is making them
Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
It's fucking Jacob!!!! I hope Edward realizes he loves her!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow he let her get away for a whole month? What an ass. But I guess the saying goes, "You dont know what you have until you've lost it."
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for tomr it's getting good update soon
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
OH MY GOD!!!
I can't wait!! I just can't!! :(
I love this sooooo much! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think they will discover that either Jake or Bella's original attacker are involved. It was bound to take something drastic to open Edard's eyes. He needs to readjust his priorities! Great work! The emotions here could have been sappy, but in your hands they worked perfectly! Kudos!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Really your so mean lol
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Upset is the least I can claim over the fact that FFN targeted thus story and pulled it! I'm so glad this site is still allowing creative works to be exhibited.
I'm not sure how Bella's going to react to the lie that Edward said about being engaged.
So glad Emmett called Edward. Let's hope he has pulled his head out of his ass!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
So glad there is an alternative to FF. Love all your stories!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Well ladies I am so sad this is not on ff anymore. I think you write the most wonderful stories and I love them all. For this one I think once he sees her he will get his head out of his ass a realize that he can't live without her. Maybe we will find out the robber was really Jacob. So glad I can still read your story here.
Love Lilly ala Sharon Vanek
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! I hope it wasn't Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! I hate FF now, I almost had a parade when acardiaca not found
this story in FF, I rescued here in TWCS now, I know you never give up on a story.
Kisses.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Holy mother of god! You two had me freaking out when I couldn't get the story on FF.net, shitty what happened that site has changed so much. I'll be reading it here now though, need my fix lol.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
i am pissed for cliffhanger..kasi...please..update soon... don't think about those freaks who are handling ffnet... TWCS is better....love u and this fic...too
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
nothing changed but she got hurt. He still has his job he is married to. She gets well he is gone.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm I dont think I would have enough strength to still talk to him after he turned me down
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow this Bella sounds like me.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
He is still clueless. Maybe a cute doctor will make him realize what he wants with Bella.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
I almost panicked when fanfic.net said story not found. Thanks for leaving the note on your profile page. Anyway, I did not actually see this coming. but sometimes something traumatic has to happen in order to wake people up. Edward's rule of work is my life is really just a cop-out. He does not want to be rejected because of his work, and he knows this happens, it has happened to him before. But the right person had not come along yet. I have faith that with your "help" he will see that.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I knew it was going to be Bella that got mugged./
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wonderful chapter......so sorry the story got removed from ff..... glad that you updated the author's profile so I knew where to find you!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh poor Bella. I am overweight too and I can only imagine the humiliation that she felt when he turned her down.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh!!!! Why is fanfic so ridiculous. My previous comment there had to do with me wondering if Bella is pregnant!!! I'm dying for tomorrow's update!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
How will this effect Edward's perspective? I want to say that the removing this story from the witch hunt site is their loss. I read most of my fan fiction on this one anyway.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
I seriously almost had a heart attack when I tried to pull this chapter up on fanfiction and it said story not found! Gah! Love it and def can't wait till tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh dear, poor Bella, I hope she isn't too badly injured. But I hope this gets his head out of his ass. I'm sorry that FF pulled this fic, I don't know why. That site just gets worse and worse.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Maybe he's finally getting a clue. Good for Bella. That had to be so hard for her to do.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
You know the saying...the heart needs what you don't know it needs!? There's one out there like that. Edward had in his head he was already married to his job, but he was not looking at the whole picture...he was dating Bella, without realizing it. He obviously didn't figure that out during his month hiatus from Bella. Cant wait to see what happens next to the miserable couple. Thanks for the update, I love this story.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward needs to get his head out of his butt!!!!! I hope he finally nderstands bella is for him!!! Arghhhhhhh he is so frustrating!!!!!!! I hope Bella is alright and is able to recover fully!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
He's a idiot but I think this might be the wake up call he needed to see that he can't live without her. Hope she's not too badly hurt.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Nothing like the one you love being injured or facing death to make you understand just how deep the feelings are for them.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I knew it! Watch Edward backpedal now and reevaluate what his prioritys are now - no. 1 will definitely be BELLA!! So glad this story has been continued on TWCS, can't believe those puritannical idiots at fanfiction.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
So glad you're over here! :) Maybe this will wake him up now!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
He loves her awww and Ben did it. Plus keep thinking that he's going to see her if she's going to be pregnant with his baby
Date: 08 Mar 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Any Chance Bella is pregnant?
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
I still think he's a doodoohead. *BTW FF sucks for pulling this story*
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, hope she is ok, maybe this will open Edward's eyes.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope Edward finally will realize that she is what he has needed all along. I loved this chapter and can't wait for an update!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Bella did the right thing, but hopefully Edward will realize now that he is in love with her. The fact he ran all the way in the middle of the night when he found out she got hurt speaks volumes.
Thanks for the update, had a minor panic attack when the link to ff didn't work, but luckily i found the story here.
xoxo Mina
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fuck me sideways... I had a feeling that Bella might fall for him, I just didn't thought he would allow her to walk away like that!
There wouldn't be a Ben Cheney be involved with the break ins, now would there?!
What happened that this story was removed from ff.net?
Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well done Bella for standing up for what you wanted! Edward you are an arse!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Seems like realization has hit Edward smack dab full frontal! Let's just hope he recognizes it and doesn't try to explain it away by pulling the friendship card!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Although I guessed it, I sure didn't expect anything as drastic as Bella getting attacked to make Edward realize it. Have I said that I love this story?
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
GAH!!! I can't believe it stopped there!!
Oh wow!!! Um, yeah. I'm glad Bella stood up for herself. Edward needs to get it together and this maybe his "eye opener".
I hoe Bella is okay in every way.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope he realizes how much he does love her
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hopefully this is his wake up call. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
about frickin time..
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
So cause Bella changed her mind, she completely cut Edward out if her life, that is so wrong on so many levels. And look what he does, he is there for her again when she needs him, I hope she appreciates that when she wakes up. Im more upset at Bella then I am Edward.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope she's ok....
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope she wasn't hurt too badly & I hope Edward follows up with a proposal
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
hopefully e will pull is head out of hiss ass soon
Date: 08 Mar 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
poor b. after what jake said, e's reaction and distancing must bite
Date: 08 Mar 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
well thats depressing ..edward reinforced everythng that jake said about never being a mother or a permanent partner who will b loved .. that blank look and acceptance of their abuse makes me worry that bella cld b a suicide risk
Date: 08 Mar 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
While Jacob's words were horrible, and thank goodness she finally kicked him out of her life for good, he did put it back in her mind that she wants a family of her own, and I don't blame her. Edward on the other hand, needs to get off his one track mind about not wanting a family and see what he really has with Bella. He stays with her 5 nights a week, they do everything together. He doesn't realize it, but the two of them, are a family. He needs to start opening his eyes.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
So proud of Bella. Great chapter
Date: 07 Mar 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad she stood up to Jake.
I hope Edward doesn't do a "new moon" on her. I really hope that someone asks Edward what he thinks the difference is between being married & what he & Bella are doing now. I mean, aside from the fact that he still has an apartment he occasionally goes to, they are living like they're married
Date: 07 Mar 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lets face this.. You wrote him this way. He just has her a friend and fbuddy. Nothing else. He does not love her after all this time she is nothing to him other than that. If she ever wants anything as in marriage and family she better change her life, including him. He has said time and again he is married to his job. That is what he loves..
Date: 07 Mar 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward had bett open up his eyes! As much as he sees Jake hurting Bella, he is too. Edward almost has his "20" in, as they say. Maybe he needs a job that lets him have a life too. Right now, Edward is allowing Bella to believe everything Jake told her about him. That Bella is just a convenience and not worthy enough for forever. Great work as always. This one hurt my heart for Bella!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Finally she's waking up. He won't give her what she wants so she needs to look for it elsewhere
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
The arrangement could only last for so long before feelings became involved. At least she finally stood up to Jacob!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well at least she finally told Jake off. OMG can't believe Jake had the nerve to ask her that.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
poor Bella..
Date: 07 Mar 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ugh, I'm all over the place with this chapter. 1st) I want to castrate Jacob and give him a lobotomy. 2) Poor Bella, she's getting screwed in so many ways, Jacob's nastiness and cruelty, and Edward's "I'm married to my job" BS. And 3) Edward, I'm losing confidence in him. I know he's in denial, but he's aging to cause Bella a lot of heartache if he doesn't figure his mess out soon.
I know Bella is not innocent in all this, cause she agreed to the relationship type, but, she's the one who's gonna suffer the most.
Cant wait a it to read more!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob just drove home the point of Bella being a friens with benefits only in the cruelest way possible! Poor Bella, stupid Edward.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Is Jake for real?? The crap that comes out of his mouth! He must have been dropped numerous times on his head when he was a baby...and hard!
Edward messed up. He better wake up and smell the coffee, get his head out of his ass and rethink the "I'm married to my job" crap. It's just become second nature for him to say it. His actions are speaking way louder than his words!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
She's close to realizing she deserves more and with the space he's putting between them is only going to lead to heartbreak. Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
He called her, "Love." Think, Edward! I hope that spending the night apart may help him see that he doesn't want to be apart from her. Bella, on the other hand may decide to try dating to see if she can find someone who would like a baby and "relationship". Ahh, Edward.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
ugh, what a worthless piece of scum, i'm glad she finally cut all ties. Looks like Edward is about to distance himself big time. she'll be so hurt....smh
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Mar 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
How long can thry really keep this charade up? Edward said "my girl". I caught that!
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Really good story! Like the realism.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
A shared bad memory... who would have thougth..
When will he find out she is it for him??
Date: 06 Mar 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
My girl?? He has it so bad & doesn't even realize it! Funny!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
I find it funny when people say they don't want a relationship, when they are already in one.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hmm... His girl? Lol
Date: 06 Mar 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, that was horrible about that girl in the story, however, Bella makes. Very valid point in that she is the daughter of a cop so she knows what it is like to be with one.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
'My girl' huh?? Yeah, he's so in denial. Funny that they 'met' before they really met. I hope he figures out that she is the one he needs. She knows what goes into the job, and I believe she will be the perfect match for him. If he'd would just open his eyes/mind a little more.
Great update. Can't wait for me!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
You said, "my girl", Edward. Uh huh. Loved the chapter. Soon, he is going to realize that Bella is just what he needs in his life permanently.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love the updates !!! I think the foursome are going to give them some trouble
Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
See E. B would be the perfect girlfirend. She's grown up int he cop world.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
His girl.....hmmmmm...interesting, thought it was his friend. .lol ;)
Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
I just wish he would open his eyes and see what's in front of him. She would be understanding and love him even with his job. Loved it!!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
thank you...i just love the way a new chapter appears for me just when I need a break from my work! Great story...T