[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
"his girl" ... hmm, let's get a clue E! And "he" was the older cop? Oh gosh you two, wake up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
They are ment to be looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
OH God! I did not expect that. WOW, I wonder what would have happened if they actually met back then. These two need each other in ways they don't even know right now. Bella gets Edward, that kinda makes her perfect for him
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think " Awkward " was the word for the night! Edward had better realize that Bella is more than just a woman. She's a woman he understands and could commit to. Personally, I have a feeling that Emmett, Rose! Alice and Jasper are aware of their relationship and want to help them over this " speed bump" , if you will. Another winner here!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think Edward is letting an outrageously wonderful thing possibly slip through his fingers! He should realize that cops' daughters understand the dedication to their job and town, etc. Bella certainly does. Right now I think he's more frightened of change than Bella. Bella is just resigned to living her life alone. Wonderful chapter! You convey the feelings and sentiment perfectly!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love your stories ..can't wait to dig into this...
Date: 06 Mar 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
They're not going to keep things casual for long are they? They are already feeling jealousy were other people are concerned.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward, can you spell R-E-L-A-T-I-O-N-S-H-I-P? Cuz you are so in one. I really like this story. I loved how he picked up on Bella's clues and facial expressions while not seeing a whole person, Kate. He's a such a good boyfriend, but shhh, don't tell him because he doesn't know it yet. Great chapter!!
Date: 06 Mar 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is in major denial, and they definetely could have handled that better
Date: 05 Mar 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think Edward needs to just admit that he likes Bella and only wants to be with her. These little set ups are going to keep happening if he doesn't.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh Edward, denial doesn't look good on you..Great chapter!
Date: 05 Mar 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow Rose is really pushy aint she.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yeh - Friends!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 05 Mar 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
They should just really acknowledge that there is something between them so that Alice and Rosalie stop trying to set up Bella. But both are stuborn, specially Edward!!! When is he going to acknowledfe that he is in love with Bella ?
Date: 05 Mar 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hahaha bye bye kate and garret
I think jasper and emmett and their girls know something is up.. and start pussing guys toward bella, just to get edward to show his true feelings for bella....
Love it
Nicole
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
hello? Are these 2 really that clueless or just in denial so deep that can't see or think straight???
Date: 05 Mar 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't like him. He doesn't want anything serious but isn't willing to try to let her try with someone else.
Date: 05 Mar 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is so far up that river of denial....but I love his jealousy!!
Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
He just needs to come clean with her
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Im liking jealousward, but Jasper is right, hes gotta make a choice and realize his feelings
Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
How does he not understand he is basically in a relationship with Bella already? He spends all his free time with her and dosen't want her dating others. Loved it!
Date: 05 Mar 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love how the story is developing. Bella is being protective and not pushing Edward for more than he can give, but She knows he is capable of being all that she wants if he lets go. Edward doesn't see it yet. I love how she nurtures him. sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
He's so cute and dumb all at the same time.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
That man is CLUELESS!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
He's delusional! :)
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you...love them both...T
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Someone is in denial.....
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
He is seriously deluded or incredibly selfishness likely a combination of the two. Leave her alone doucheward. Oh love the story by the way
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Edward is way more invested that he thinks. Wonder how long it will take him to realize that.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
he does not want a relationship. He is not in love with her. She is his chubby friend that he has sex with. We all know the rules.. Not much to say sorry but he keeps going over it.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sure, keep telling yourself that, Edward.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hi,
So Ive been reading you story on fanfiction and recently found it on here and i cannot tell you how much i love your story!! its amazing and i simply love it.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Even though they're acting like they're in a relationship... LOL oh Edward... good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
The heart wants what the heart wants but its got to fight the head first and makenit realize. ....
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love is in the air... lalala laa la la la...
Love it
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well they are already in a relationship! Edward just has to acknowledge it! I just hope he realizes it soon enough
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
lookikng forward to more
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Face it Edward, this is a relationship: you just haven't figured it out yet.
Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
At least he is being up front about it. Thats more than most men do. LOL
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
When will he see what his heart is telling him
Date: 04 Mar 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forwrad to more
Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Lusciously sexy and giving! I worry though, as Edward says he can't give Bella a permanent future together. I would think that that might be painful to her later. One more person who won't commit to her and uses her for convenience. ( At least it might seem that way in her eyes.). It isn't his job, she's the daughter of a cop. We, more than most, understand how things work. I do love the real personality you have given each of your characters. Thanks for all your hard work!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
That's my kind of gin rummy! Minus the booze....I like to experience and remember details of everything! Great chapter!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Brilliant use of characters to help some of your readers see a hard truth! Kudos to you for that! You write with such passion and feeling!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Their relationship is lovely and quite sweet. You hit all the right notes with them. Lovely!
Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay,they did the do! Now I hope he gives her more than friends with benefits. Bella needs to slap Leah and tell Jacob he sucks in bed.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Here's to no regrets!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sweet an hot
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wowser. Go B&E. Hope neither regrets it. happy Dance for B having a good lay for once. LOL
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well I really hope they don´t regret it! I don´t really like a guilty edward or bella!!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
wow Flirty E is coming out to play. Hope he doesnt hurt her though
Date: 03 Mar 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
He's being a douche. I hope he's clear with her about what this means to him in terms of a relationship. He knows her past and to make her his f buddy would not be something she could handle.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yea!!! Show her what a real man can do Edward! I just hope he's not a dick to her too
Date: 03 Mar 2014 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow....fucking hot!!! Damn...i want i man like that!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
We want more...
We want more...
Love it :-)
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy smokes! These two are not shy when it comes down to the horizontal tango. No regrets yet. I would hate for Bella to get hurt. Maybe turn the table, perhaps? More dancing please. lol
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
I enjoyed the chapter. While Edward may not want marriage, he still wants Bella and she wants him as well.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! That was awesome!! Glad they seem not to regret it.. Looking forward to more. Will they be friends with benefits through story?
thanks
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my word, yummy chapter!!
Date: 03 Mar 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah, no regrets!! Loved it...just wished it was a longer chapter! ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Damn! That's hot. Like that neither of them regrets this. I never thought they would, but it's good to have the proff
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ah, so they'll just be friends with benefits. ...got it. ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2014 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
I have no idea.. I still think he pitties her. I want her to be happy even if the man she is with is old and toothless. Happiness is important looks don't quite make that list.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
I a soo sorry. I hit a 2 on chp 2 and it was supposed to b a 10. Love the story!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
uh oh......regrets in the morning????
Date: 03 Mar 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
looking forward to the next post to see where this goes,, unless Edward's asleep and this is a dream (don't make me come find you!.. )lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
oooooo damn
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh goodness goodness
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Do it Edward!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow, didn't see that coming..Great chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh no friends with benefits!!!! Lol looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 02 Mar 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
NOOOOO! It was starting to get good. I like these two together. They are fun, even if alcohol is involved.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
No no no no...You can't leave it there....nop nopi nop!! Seriously? :( I want moreeeeeeeeeeee please? Pretty please?
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think that this chapter turned them into friends with benefits, at least.
Date: 02 Mar 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn you! You just know how to leave me waiting to know more. I am just glad you are a daily author so I can't wait for tomorrow!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
i hope Jacob becomes impotent on his honeymoon and that Leah starts her menses with loads of cramping...
Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love that she stood up for herself
Date: 02 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE that she stood up for herself
Date: 02 Mar 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm so proud of Bella right now. I hope this is the last we see or hear of Jake & Leah. Thank you for not letting Jake talk to her alone
Date: 01 Mar 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good for Bella finally giving up in Jake and moving on. He used her and her friendship and she totally deserves someone better - Edward.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
She really should have slapped back. A nice right hook would have been even better!