Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jacob and Leah are superficial, idiot snobs. Unfortunately there´s people like that everywhere. I´m glad bella finally stood up for herself and I find it great that Edward hit that idiot!
Date: 01 Mar 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
You have to love your self or no one will ever love you. You have to set standards that say no one talks to me this way and maintains a relationship after that. Walk away change your phone number . Grow a backbone and then stick to it. They aren't friends anyway. so no loss. I am not sure Edward is much better because his is pity. At least that is what I get from the story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
:( oh poor Bella. .. those are 2 of the sickest, phoney, pathetic morons ive ever seen. ..good riddance!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Striking Bella in front of her police officer, 'boyfriend'...
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
There is definatly something wrong with both of them, not nice people.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sweet!!! get revenge in advance.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you! Great story....T
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow just wow. At least E got to punch Jake. Too bad Bella couldn't have decked Leah too. What arseholes.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jake deserved more than one punch and I certainly hope that Edward messes him up good later in the story.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
loved this chapter. Bella finally stood up for herself and for what she wanted!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Jake and Leah deserve each other.
Loved it!
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is just too sweet and Leah and Jacob are terrible people.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
Jacob and Leah are both alike and so deserve one another. Saves someone else the heart ache.
Bella is overweight but she has a very kind personality. Beauty should always be on the inside or the outside is ruined.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love that E stood up for her that way. Poor Seth
Date: 28 Feb 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think Jake and Leah are the scum of the earth and Bella shoudn't be giving either one of them the time of day as they both treat her horribly. And I am so glad that Edward is there, because he won't stand for it at all. He will have no problems putting either one of them in their place.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
SOunds like Jake & Leah are both jealous. I hope you choose to frustrate any chance jake has of talking to Bella alone
Date: 28 Feb 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww so sweet, Jake and LEah can take a flying leap of the cliffs at lapush blindfolded and test out the rocks. i want to slap them so much
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad that Edward is there for Bella. She needs a true friend. She needs to learn to love herself again.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella needs to ditch this entire fiasco of a wedding, cut these idiots out of her life like Edward said, then hold her head up high as she leaves town.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww! They zinged!...lol. jeez with friends like that, why bother going to the wedding!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
finally he's gettiing a clue ...
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Again I love Edward. He is just what Bella needs. Seth seemed nice. Jake and Leah need to be hurt slowly and painfully.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Crying here. The last two paragraphs got me. Sweet Bella! Edward, snap out of it! You like her, you are attracted to her, so get with the program!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Not liking Jake and Leah at all
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter.
Loved it!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Keep going its great so far
Date: 27 Feb 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am loving Edward and Bella's friendship and that they are hanging out more and more. And good for him for telling Bella that "friendship is a two way street and she shouldn't allow Jacob and Leah to treat her so poorly". I wouldn't be surprised if Leah picked that dress because of how horrid it was.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love him she needs a kick ass dress an her hot man
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great plans Bella. They are def trying to make her feel bad with the whore dress.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yes they are becoming friends.. But he does pitty her. Maybe that is not what you are thinking when you write. It is not what is coming across.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I get asked out a lot. To someone that never gets asked out at all. How nice!
Date: 27 Feb 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am glad he read that. It is sad. I get why she feels that way.
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
I like that they are friends now. I wish that the dress had really been beautiful on her and she just couldn't see it. She should change dresses for the reception too. Thta's the time to upstage the bully!
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is far too honest to simply pity Bella! They began. As friends, but wheather he knows it or not, he is far into boyfriend territory. I do love these two!
Date: 27 Feb 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward so rocks right now. I so enjoy reading how their friendship is growing .
Date: 27 Feb 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Shit, her date alone will upstage the bride.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad that Edward admitted that he read the journals. A lot of people would have tried to keep it a secret until one day it stumbles out unintentionally and then the person gets all upset that they kept it hidden. In my opinion, honesty is the best policy.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad he owned up to reading
Date: 26 Feb 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
At least he admitted to her that he read it. awww puppies. She's such a nice person
Date: 26 Feb 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! As far as Edward reading Bella's journal, I think it was abig wake up call for him. Like Bella, he needs to get out of the rut he thinks of as his life. Understanding Bella may just be the thing to help him do that. Love the puppies..... And their names!
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
While I think he should have stopped when he knew it was Bella's, it is Human Nature to be curious, so I understand it. I am glad he admitted to Bella that he read it, and she didn't seem to upset about it. Im glad they are going to try the friend thing. looks like they both need it.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Bella would have had some reaction to finding out he read her entire journal. Anger or embarrassment at the very least.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
You never know what can come from an innocent night out. .;)
Date: 26 Feb 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
I was kind of surprised he admitted to reading her journal but happy that he did. Looking forward to more.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, I am the most curious person in the world, so I would have read them too! I thought you handled that very well. No drama.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, people can really so mean and hurtful!! And I'm sure Edward got a wake up call reading that last entry. It just goes to show how there are two sides to every story. He thought she was asking him out and she was just trying to make a friend.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
awww, poor Bella......she'll be super pissed he read her journal......
Date: 26 Feb 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ahh,poor girl.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Damn, that is sad I hope Edward feels like shit and Jacob should go away
Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
I LIKE that he got to see Bella
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. She has had it so tough
Date: 25 Feb 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella's entries, as you have written them, are a wonderful window into jot just her life but her heart and soul. They are moving, they are touching, and they are very, very much real life! Edward reading them now can feel what she felt and see how's he became the woman he knows today. I think anyone reading these now would have to be moved to be a better friend and person to those around them - no matter what size they are! Kudos for giving us a marvelous piece of reality that has all our fingers crossed. Loved it!
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Wow. Charlie should have taken care of Jacob after the first dance thing. What a prick. Jake and Leah both need to fall off a cliff.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I want to cry for this Bella! Edward must feel lower than dirt. I hope he punches Jake in the nose when he sees him.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jake is an idiot!!!! And Bella´s life hasn´t been really nice. It´s really awful to see how people that are different can be treated so badly! And I hope edward puts on his big boy pants on and asks bella for a coffee!
Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
While it's sorta an invasion of privacy once Edward realized it was Bella's journal, I'm glad he read it. Maybe now he will see Bella as a person rather than someone who "wants" him.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
hmmmm, those should be interesting reads.....
Date: 25 Feb 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
WOW! I jjust started reading today and I like it a lot!!!!! I think the journals will be Bella´s and he will learn of her life and the hardships she has gone through and maybe a little about him?
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm thinking adware has found Bella'S journals.... And wow, someone actually got some real police work done. Edward definitely seems to know what he's doing. So much for Jessica and a mike...
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella may have written about him, maybe something that will make him see her in a diffrent light?
:)
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think he's about to find out all the saddness Bella has been through...can't wait :)
Date: 24 Feb 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
looking forard to the next chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Woo Hoo Go James for helping catch a bad guy. So hard to think of Ben that way though. LOL
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Are the journals Bella's? It might give him some insight into how she ticks and how she feels - not what she shows she feels, what she really is feeling. Again, another great chapter. Putting Edward out in the field adds a whole different perspective to it. I look forward to more. Thank you!
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great idea of bella with the bathrooms.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jessica needs to find a new job path. Twit.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
The journals belong to Bella and she's been writing about him.
Loving this story!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
whoa, I hope you keep James a good guy, I like it when he is not the bad guy for once. Cant wait to see what Edward learns from the journals
Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well he should have had back up since he had that much information with an assailiant in the park. One cop on one side one on the other. He is getting closer. Also he needs to take Jessica and bust her down to a street cop for a while until she learns that her comfort is not an issue in her job. If you care cold wear more clothes. Layer them if necessary, but do your job.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella's journals with stuff about Edward in them?
Date: 24 Feb 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad that Edward is talking with Bella more and becoming her frend, and he is encouraging her to do more things that include hime as well. Even better.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
good for him, to give her that advice, and i'm glad she's joining both classes :)
Date: 24 Feb 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm,interesting, would like a longer chapter if possible, love the story