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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

I think they are getting along lol



Author's Response:

It is about time i would say hahaha

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

How else is she to feel it is Christmas and nothing for her kids I get it.  I love the catching the squirrel to funny .



Author's Response:

You are right... from her site.

But if you at his site, he did tried to make her feel better....

 

I loved the squirrel part, i had so much fun writing it

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

what the heck happened to the kids. 



Author's Response:

No worries :-)

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Distracted by 'only a towel'. ... Oh my



Author's Response:

hahaha ..... how to sleep next to him now without  attacking him in your sleep

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sleeping next to him each night must be .... Teasing



Author's Response:

hmmm sleeping with temptation....

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Safe but trapped in a cabin with a stranger.



Author's Response:

is she realy safe? or is he just telling her that to keep her calm?

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

Basic cabin - ugh.  I don't do well in rustic - I hope bella fares better



Author's Response:

i think i will go crazy.. i need to be able to get out... to move around...

 

 

ps you can read fast

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

Baby can smell really really bad



Author's Response:

hahaha I KNOW hahaha

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

A natural reaction to danger but not useful :)



Author's Response:

hahaha not usefull at all i would say.

now see realy is in trouble... she can't see where he is taking them

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

She is probably operating on adrenalin



Author's Response:

yes, i would think so too.

 

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

How frightening for her.



Author's Response:

yes it is and she needs to stay calm for her kids at the same time... very hard thing to do

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ninja skills :)



Author's Response:

hahaha can you see him do it?

Reviewer: LillianBroderick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have never seen snow. It would be expensive to dress warm enough I imagine.



Author's Response:

never seen snow? that i can't imagine hahaha

it is expensive to buy winterclothes, Bella even has to buy for two children and herself...

 

 

thank you for reading and reviewing

love to hear your what you think about each chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

She is going cabin crazy she just needed to look at something different Edward in a towel is good ;).  What are the babys screaming about please dont let anything hurt them .



Author's Response:

no worries...  i can't tell you anymore... but you don't need to worry.

 

you like edward in a towel too huh.... would he still have some water running down his chest??? hmmm

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

hmm will she get caught



Author's Response:

well... that would be interesting..wouldn't it?

 

 

hahaha see ya monday

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

He is trying to make things alright for them.



Author's Response:

well maybe it makers her a little bit easier to live with?

come on who could live with a woman for more than 4 weeks on PMS- like temper?

i would try anything hahahaha to keep it all easy going

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

That is just so much to take in one day she is free and now she is not how could she not worry about her and the kids



Author's Response:

yeah, i would have snapped too...

 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

She is going to freak out but will like the snuggling



Author's Response:

well who wouldn't like the snuggling??

esp. from Edward hahaha

 

friday we will know more.

:-)

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

update plz



Author's Response:

every monday and friday i post an update

 

thank you for needing it :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

She took the info better that time



Author's Response:

yes she did... but he took the time to tell her everything now...

and he took her to other people, so maybe she feels like he won't kill her now that there are eye-witnesses.

 

monday we learn more...

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

That is a lot of info to process at once.  will she believe him

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

OOOH  shes p*ssed

btw whats your posting schedule ?

 



Author's Response:

i can't blame her....for being pissed.

 

 

 

i try every monday and friday one chapter....

 

thanks for reading

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I dont think she believes him so far how is he going to convince her??



Author's Response:

hi

 

it is a hard thing to believe isn't it?

if someone kidnappes you.. with a gun

Then tells you he is  helping you? i wouldn't believe him so soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

good start.. waiting on  you



Author's Response:

thank you :-)

 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

Shit Shit Shit freak out time when is he going to tell her that he is trying to protect her.



Author's Response:

hahaha i like how you react to this.

how would you react if you were Bella?

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

He is protecting her but why and how is she going to react I bet not good to begin with



Author's Response:

keep reading and you will find the answer to this question

;-)

 

thank you again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

That is a shity way to start life with a family.  Poor girl



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and writting a review.

 

yes Bella her life is hard, hopefully things will look better for her soon

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow lovely build up there,lots of tension.



Author's Response:

thank you (again) :-)

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

Like this Edward.



Author's Response:

yes Edward knows how to handle things :-)

 

 

thank you for eading and writting a review

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and writting a review

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I promise to start reading this very soon.  I am sorry I haven't yet.  But I am here to support you in this.  HUGS, Kasi~



Author's Response:

Thanx Kasi.

hugs back to you

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

well this is nice and different - looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and writting a review.

 

Reviewer: lovesurfer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

My dear I'm so happy you decided to post this story here! you're a great writer and is so great that you share it with others.

This is going to be an amazing journey and I'm glad to be able to tag along. Hopefully poor Bella would be able to find the light at the end of the tunnel! 

Let's keep this show on the road! ;)

Kisses.R.



Author's Response:

thank you my sweet friend

without you it wouldn't be possible.

 

kusje

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