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Great! I love stories where the babies start to come and since you are not going to the time when Christiqn freaked out and left Ana, I am loving this even more! Is the Bitch Troll in this story? It will be interesting to watch Mama and Daddy Big Bad Bears come out to protect their Teddy.
I am so happy to finally be reading part two! I am with Edward, what does Carlisle want? He does not strike me as one who does favors, he will want Maria to pay him back one way or the other. They say children show some part of their parents, so I am thinking Edward is like his mother to a certain extent, so does that make Carlisle like his dead son Anthony? Someone who flies off the handle and can hurt someone and think later that was the wrong thing to do. Children learn their father's work ESP., if you are in the Mob so who does look or act like their father, their mother?
Maria better be alarmed, on her guard there is nobody she can trust in this family except Rose and Emmett's little girl. She is the only person Bella fell in love with. What of the summery happens that turns Maria into a killer, what changes her and will there ever be a time when the Cullen's will trust her enough that she has a gun and they at ease with that. I think if I was a Cullen a lot would have to change before that would happen. Also my next what is, are they going to tell Maria what happen to her father and who will she blame more? Will she blame Edward, the Cullen's or will she put some of the blame on her father? It needs to be on his shoulders, he should have known not to kick a mob leader and his family in the back and he really should have known not to mKe bargains to other mob leaders! Now that was a number one stupid, stupid, stupid! I can not wait for more chapters!
Is all your stories going to be here? I can understand your moving, the other site is getting bad about people stealing stories and they do not monster Guest reviews! I am not a writer, just a reader and I feel the least I can do is leave a review after each chapter that is written! My reviews are long, as I go through just about everything that has happen and commit on what I liked, what I loved and what I would love to see happen! I never persume to make a author change her story, I just wish and hope that some day an author may like a suggestion I have made and add it to a story but if they don't I understand but when I get attack for what I feel about the chapter by guest reviewers I have been shaken and upset for some days! I am learning to grow thicker skin but I admire you and others who keep on writing! So I am hoping you will be happy here! I love this website! I have read some really good stories and I am shocked by some of the snippet of moving pictures that are with some stories, so I am very careful about the ratings here! I do not mind the snippets but sometimes I let my great nieces read some of the stories I am reading ,mso yeah some are very inapproitate for 16 and under! Good luck!
Great author.