Reviews by rigger42
Anna Poppins by Jekkah Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Hotch hires an old friend as a new nanny for Jack, who has an interesting affect on the team. JJ/Hotch slow build romance and Morgan/OC not a strong focus. AU after 5X13 - Risky Business.

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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134434 Read Count: 9014
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2014
Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Of Snowy Roads and Whispered Promises

Its kind of nice for a change to have Will not be the bad guy, just the wrong guy, even if I enjoy some of the 'Evil Will' stories.

 

You did a lovely job conveying the poignancy of loss.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

Entry to the Smut-off challenge on facebook. Pairing: JJ/Hotch. Scenario: Pair goes to an adult store only to come home to try out their purchases. I put a little spin on this: JJ and Hotch both inadvertantly end up at the same adult store when their two best friends bring them along for the ride. Smut ensues soon after. Rated NC-17. 


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4521 Read Count: 709
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: ... Friends Like These...

Honestly, my favorite bit is Hotch squeezing his eyes shut as though he can't be seen if he doesn't look, and thinking "Damn, could he get any weirder?"  ROFL.

Summary:

When tragedy strikes in SSA Jennifer Jareau's life, she has no idea how she'll handle the coming changes. Until a special friend gives her a hand. Please R&R! Hotch/JJ ♥


Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Hotch/JJ
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32745 Read Count: 2783
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: The Epilogue

You've written a really lovely story here with believable characters and a nice hand with the pacing.  I'll mention that H/JJ isn't my personal OTP just to let you know that you made this work for me.  They are so great together in this, and his deep concern and caring for her was so touching.  I love stories that bring out the happier or more open sides of Hotch.

Summary:

Dr. Spencer Reid meets an unusual man on his weekend vacation and soon finds himself indebted to him. Dean Winchester doesn't know what it is about Spencer Reid that has him telling him all his secrets, but he does. An unlikely friendship forms between the two opposite men. Written for the CCOAC Crossover Challenge. Not Slash.


Categories: Criminal Minds, Supernatural TV Series
Characters: OC/Spencer
Genre: Adventure, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2438 Read Count: 76
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This could make a very interesting series.  Even as one shots where they occasionally cross paths where multiple deaths occur, or when Dean needs some help and gets to see Reid's genius in action.

Summary: Past Featured Story

How I felt the night and ongoing story should have gone at the end of Season 8, Episode 8 "The Wheels of the Bus".  This story will contain spoilers for anyone that has not watched Criminal Minds up to this point. 

Penelope Garcia and David Rossi developing romance and friendship. 

There are scenes of light spanking and slight restraint, all of which is consenual.  Please skip if that will bother you.  I will post warnings for any chapters that this occurs in.

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Categories: Criminal Minds
Characters: Rossi/Garcia
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78938 Read Count: 9530
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2013 Updated: 11 Jul 2013
Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lol. This is tantalizing.  I love how confident she is in their mutual attraction.  A bit sad that she might still have strong feelings for Kevin.  I have never liked Kevin for Penelope I have to admit.  Rossi just seems like the kind of man who sees true beauty.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.  I feel the same way about Rossi.  

And, I always thought Kevin was the 'easy' answer for Penelope.  The relationship that was given between Kevin and Penelope always bothered me.

So, this has become my re-write of how I wish the plotline would have went. 

Let me know if you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for ocmmenting!  KK

Reviewer: rigger42 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so very sorry to see this story end.  You've crafted a very passionate and believable relationship between these two and I'm completely hooked on the affection and trust they share.

You write some powerful sex scenes -- very hot, but without losing the emotional connection between these two.  I love how we got to see so many facets of their relationship, switching between playful and intense, emotional and lustful moments.  The phone sex was scorching, but what made it really effective was Rossi's initial hesitation, that turned into desperate need.

As I said in my earlier review, I have never been happy with Penelope's choice of Kevin.  Kevin as the rebound guy -- and the idea that Penelope isn't used to 'settling' at all with men -- makes a heck of a lot more sense.  Yes, Penelope dons a protective coloration and can be quirky, but she is very lovely and vivacious, and you can't convince me that men aren't drawn to her beautiful heart and outgoing, loving nature. I'm a little in love with your Rossi myself, a beautiful, passionate man who recognizes treasure when he sees it and is so honest and comfortable in his own skin.

I'm sincerely hoping that somewhere in your other stories there is a continuation of this particular universe...or you consider one in the future ;)



Author's Response:

I love that you pointed out specific things you liked.  It means a lot that certain things resounded and stuck with you after reading it as well as during reading it.  I think, no mater what I do, I will always come back to this couple.  I don't know about revisiting this particular universe, we'll have to see what occurs.  But, thank you for the review!