Reviews by emerald eyes
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Come on!!!

I can get no more the suspense.

Give the girl a freaking break.

I'm sure the "hero" is our villain (Carlisle)...

Let me guess he will take care of Demetri. But our Bella's "honour" will be at stake with the black corset.

Don't let him rape her. Please!!!!

How much more she can handle. If she is and pregnant right now... (my guess). I'm begging to feel sorry for your heroine and not torture her so much.

I ran immediately to read the chapter when i saw you posted it and i found that. Please bring Edward saving her from the bad guys and punching his father.

This Carlisle deserves it!

 

Haunted by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Draco has waited for years to claim her for his own. He has a plan and nothing the Head Girl does is going to stop him. Originally a one-shot song fic that due to demand has been expanded into a full story.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16310 Read Count: 9208
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 12 May 2010
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

First, I was very surprised to see your fanfic here in twcs.

Secondly, I noticed the notes of the story.

You will continue it!

I’m very happy to learn that.

I don’t know if you will make both POVs of the story but I believe for the beginning it will be better only Hermione so as to have more of the story.

But I would like also some flashback from Draco when you have the time. More about the veelas. I was a little confused about the venom though.

Did you want to give a sense of vampire?

Anyway… Quick!! Go and start writing. I already added your stories to my favorites and I’m looking forward for the second chapter. The darker, the better…



Author's Response:

I've read in several fics about the exchanging of blood during the bonding process, so the use of venom is my own little twist. I imagine that since he is veela and she is not, he must do something to make her DNA more compatible with his own, hence the venom and why she slept for so long afterwards. I'm not sure about Draco's POV though. This story will be from Hermione's POV. Maybe at a later date I will extend Haunted, Revisited. I have five chapters written for this story and I'm almost done with the sixth. I only originally planned for five chapters and the story just seemed to take on a life of its own. Maybe I can shoot for ten. Not sure, I'll just see where it takes me. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You are a bad person and i love it. I never expected this twist. Great chapter I'm looking forward for the next chapters. 
The more the better.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And yes ladies... she is back!!

Great idea, great plot.

As you said you are back to your element.

The darkness calls to you and suits you perfectly!

I love the fact that in this case the bastard is our lovely teddy bear.

It's something we don't see so often.

I don't know if you consider it in your plot but when you continue the story please make a few flashbacks.

Like Bella's dates with Emmet, her first time with him by her POV so as to see her comparison with Edward.

I don't know with whom Bella will have her happy ending but I trust your instict.

By the way, do you have any idea about how many chapters this story will be or you haven't decided yet?

Good luck with the contest! This is for gold metal!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  I'm not sure how many chapters the story will be yet.  It will take a while to get to a happy ending with this story for reasons I can't say yet.  I will definitely need to give everyone more background in the story to understand how Emmett convinced Bella to marry him.  I plan on having a lot of "fun" with this story. **Cue Vincent Price's evil laugh**

Take care!

Mic

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great chapter as all the ones before.

I bet from all that I read in this chapter that soon "daddy" will have a big surprise from his little baby though...

Keep the good work.

 

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

I see that you rewrite this story. Thank god I was checking the recent stories or I would have missed it!!

 

As a greek fan let me make a few suggestions or advice. You may listen and then you can throw them away.

Most  of the names of the girls that you had used, are used actually for boys.

Names that you could use from greek mythology coulb be some of these:

 Lethe (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lethe) for forgetting

 Eris {http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eris_(mythology) } for provoking disputes

Hedone { http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hedone } (daughter of Eros & Psyche) for  pleasure

Medusa  { http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medousa } for freezing them with only one sight

On the other hand Erevos is ehem for boys { http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/z4;ρεβος }

That is if you are using the greek mythology.

In the matters of roman mythology and I understand that Edward's origin was Italy the names of some gods or creatures may differ.

For example: Eros (greek), Cupid (roman)

 

I know... Don't shoot the messenger!!

That doesn't mean that I don't like the story. I love it actually. So, keep the good work.



Author's Response:

lol no it's ok you TRIED to give me advice, but this is the reason i tell ppl to trust me lol. I did my research lol trust me, when i picked out each name, I was looking for either goddesses, Uni-sex names, or powers that i could more or less "Fuck around" with. You're suggestions is another reason why i didn't ask for them for the girls lmao. I know every power, tick, trick, and reason behind the names that were picked,so you the reader don't, which is why "corny or obvious names usually make a reader's suggestion cut." The names I've chosen are for a reason and it's so obvious. what is the one thing edward wants again? is it a boy? So maybe he "UNI" named  two or three of them, for a reason.<----  lol i'll let you sit on that lmao.

Another thing, I never wrote Edward's origin. I just mentioned the volturi. Italian Mythology was never a factor. Once again another "misread suggestion" I said the volturi attacked his coven, I didn't say where lol, which is going to come up in future chapters. As for a greek lesson, i really hate doing this shit here, and i'm not one for school lessons, but it irritates me when someone assumes what i do or don't know  about my own story without asking first lmao. You immediately went to wiki links ( try a book next time sweets), so i'll guess i'll enlighten you "greekfan"

the names chosen were Personified concepts, <==look that up, usually a uni-sex spirit or creature or (gods) in the greeks case, used to explain various reasons of life or human health, or personal mythology, weather, witch craft and so forth. such as

Mania-,lymos, and lyssa (which i don't need to elaborate on because i'm sure a greek fan as your self know that). These deities if you want to get technical didn't have a sex, it was usually up to whom ever told the tale, to add a sex to it, basically "old wives tales". In one of the books i used to pick the girl's nameExample: The question of if the christian God Is Man or Woman.  I can rec you the book if you want! Most of the names chosen, are chosen for a reason, When i started my reasearch I wanted personifications by power, not the most obvious names i could find. I picked the best, researched the Gods and Goddesses and spirits and was happy with what i chose. Every choice has it's individual reason, which you'll find out later if you keep reading *winks* Hopefully other people will read this and abide by it

Just let a author do their thing, "They Know What They Are Doing, even if you don't" If you feel there's a mistake, ASK first. <-that's a smarter thing to do.

Did you really think so little of me? I bet you had a big smile while you wrote this, not knowing you ended up wasting your time because i ALREADY KNEW WHAT I WAS DOING lmao! Sometimes I don't understand why ppl assume instead of just asking. It would've save you quite a bit of time from make OBVIOUS suggestions. ( not trying to offend you, but it's just really unoriginal. sorry) ..... 

I know, don't shoot the med student <-----

That doesn't mean I don't like your suggestions, it just means i won't use it lmao! That's for reviewing, I appreciated it!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: emerald eyes Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, I didn't know your story and I began to read it yesterday. I'm still in the beginning but I have to say that this Darkward seems very dark and I like it...