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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Readabook Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I hope Mia and Sarah are well soon.  This is such a good story.  Now, I need to go back and read the first two books.  Can't wait.

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - You. Are. Mine.

Oh what is she going to do?  And why didn't Christian refuse the date?  This will be interesting.  

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this.  Can't wait to meet Ana.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Meet Ana

Sounds like she has a back story.  Can't wait for the interview. 



Author's Response:

Most of it just came out, but we haven't seen or heard the last of Mr. Whitman.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Interview

This is going to be fun. Love their interaction. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Old Friends

Hilarious!  His inner thoughts are great and the background with Elliott is priceless.  What's the story with Brad? 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The background with Brad has been posted.  We'll see him more in the future.  

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I think I like you...

I hate Elena.  Poor Ana, hopefully Christian will save the day and get Ray there for her graduation.  Love this!



Author's Response:

I hate her too.  She'll get hers - eventually.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Georgetown

Oh snap!  They were so close.  Poor Christian, poor Ana.  Loved her graduation speech - and his reflections during it.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I know, but they'll get there.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go

And the plot thickens.  Oh Mr. Grey, what a mistake you've made.  I don't think she'll forgive him easily - nor should she.  Damn Elena.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Oh, my heart broke for Christian here - and the plum dress too.  Love this story soooo much.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

I continue to just love this story.  I'm so glad you didn't make it a triangle with Eric. The honesty between then was refreshing.  Love this Ana.  

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Piano in the Dark

This was definitely the one I was waiting for and it was well worth the wait.  I really liked how they dealt with touch issue...and the piano was hot, hot, hot.  I'd say you do well with lemons.

Reviewer: Readabook Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Declarations

This is one of my all time favorite stories.  Thank you for this wonderful update.  

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Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: Readabook Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

I've just caught up with this story and I love it.  Such a great take on Fifty Shades. The only thing that seems off is that the role play doesn't seem to stop outside of the playroom and they haven't really defined the Dom/Sub aspect in a way that makes sense to me.  The constant Kind Sir seems out of place at this point in their relationship, as does him putting off his affection at times.  I'm also curious as to why he hasn't insisted on birth control yet. Condoms do put a damper on things in the heat of the moment and CG hated condoms, but of course, I understand this is your version. That just seems a little strange that they are living together and it hasn't come up yet. Once again, great story.  Looking forward to more.  Oh, and I love sinister Kate and Elliott is great.  



Author's Response:

Read the chapter again when Ana reconfirms her submission to him.  In a long-term, loving romantic relationship that includes BDSM, contracts really aren't necessary.  Ana trusts him, and she also tells him that she wants their sexual adventures to be spontaneous -- not so clearly and clinicially defined by a contract.  Do people only have sex in the bedroom?  Just as any other couple would treat a bedroom, they don't always necessarily play within the RROP.  

Kind Sir is Ana's endearment for him.  He's still her Dom; therefore, he's still her Kind Sir, just as she is his "baby."

As for the condoms, I honestly haven't had the chance to write that scene with everything else going on in the story.  But I'll take that into consideration for an upcoming chapter.  It's just a matter of fitting it in with the rest of the plot as it unfolds.  

Thanks for writing!  And glad you're enjoying. Hope this clears things up a bit.

xx

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