Reviews by amandalaw
Summary:

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An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: amandalaw Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

I have enjoyed this story and you are wrong I have noticed you have been missing.  I am sorry to hear you hare having problems and hope you get to feeling better soon.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone.  A lot of people are retelling the same story over and over but this is very original. 



Author's Response:

Thank You I try to come up with my own stuff. :) And thank you as well for missing me. Female stuff really hurts alot, like labor...lol. I did get my next chapter back from my beta today. It's called 'family meeting' but I will probably post it on Monday. I am working on 21 as well and I hope to make things up to everyone by posting two this coming week. Love your review it put me at 101 on this site. :)

Later, Diane

Reviewer: amandalaw Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Family Meeting

Once again you rock.  I love to see Carlise take control.  I can't wait until Bella is back in the picture.  I hope it is soon.  I am glad you are going to do a sequal.  YEAH!!



Author's Response:

Hi Lady,

 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. With a little help on the next chapter and then a couple of more chapters that I will write personally, we will be moving on to the next part. I am hoping to finish this one before the end of the year. Take Care and I hope to hear from you again soon! Diane