Reviews by Motherthing
Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Family Time Part II

I don't mind waiting until May.  You're on my fave's list so I won't miss it when it comes out.  You really write the emotional stuff well and I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Motherthing

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

What happened?  I was really enjoying this story and you seem to have abandoned it.  I do hope that you take it back up and finish it.  The characters and situations are well thought out and realistic and I'm hoping to see more of them.

Motherthing



Author's Response:

I haven't abandoned this story, I've simply had a very rough summer and haven't been writing as I normally do.  I'm in the middle of the next update for this and I'm hoping to get back in full swing and update more regularly until this story is finished in about 10 chapters or so.  It means a lot that you love the story enough to ask what happened and it's on its way, I promise.

 

AgoodWITCH

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40831
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

I actually felt the guy/guy thing was handled quite tastefully.  BDSM is so different from vanilla that it isn't even in the same galaxy, much less the same world.  The sexual part may be integral but isn't the most important part of the whole scene.  I'm not looking forward to what Tanya will do but more to Isabella's reaction to it.

Motherthing

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Dear God that was good!  I think interspersing the action with the lemons is a good idea.  Always leave them wanting more is my motto!

Motherthing

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Glad you liked my first lemon.

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

While I would love to see Jasper give Edward and "ol' fashioned @ss whuppin", the only way for him to stay alive is for Edward to die and for the 'family' to be broken legally.  Otherwise both Bella and Jasper would have to disappear and Bella needs her work to survive emotionally.

Motherthing@kc.rr.com



Author's Response:

Eddie boy will get a surprise, but it just might be from Bella!

 

Thanks for reading!

Chances by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Bella Swan lives a dull life, but when a trip to the emergency room brings her to the Cullens, everything changes. Things are not all roses and sunshine though, there are attacks on women at the local campus of UW and it's got everyone worried. Everyone needs chances, but what happens when someone chooses the wrong one...?

 

(AU-AH, OOC for Bella's vocabulary)

 

Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and violence.

 

On temporary hiatus, 12/19/11Chances Banner by Sarah Elizabeth


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100701 Read Count: 5338
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Uh... Yeah, About That...

I'm so glad to see you updating this story!!  I enjoyed it quite a lot and kept it favorited so that I'd catch any more of it, but it certainly has been gathering quite a few cobwebs.  Do you have any plans for regular updating?  Charlie may not be the quickest on the uptake of things but he sure can get to the center of the problem and see his way through.  Thanks for continuing this story.

Motherthing

 



Author's Response: I sincerely apologize for such a long wait, I had some issues with writing. I'm crossing my fingers as to an updating schedule. I'm glad you are enjoying this story, it means so much to me. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I liked your story well enough that I've added it to my favorite list by the second chapter.  I don't normally do that or even review but you've caught my interest.

Motherthing

 



Author's Response:

Well...Thank You! and I'm glad you like my story...lml

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

Banner made by Moonlit-Wishes

 

This Banner is for the out-take that is now posted here as the final chapter. 

Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter

I'm really enjoying My Sisters 3 and am very grateful that you are updating so quickly!  I've been wracking my brain trying to figure out who the stalker is but can't wait for the big reveal...

Motherthing



Author's Response:

the big reveal will be soon....things get hairy from here!  soon you will know who the stlaker is!  thanks for reading and the story love and I will psot as soon as I can the next few chapters should comeout fairly fast

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389602
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

PUULLLLEEESSSSEEEE don't leave us hanging!  I've been reading avidly and would just wilt if I didn't get my fix of Sir and Pussycat!

Motherthing

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

This is basically my application to be a beta reader for you.

I have been enjoying Twilight and fanfiction for almost three years now.  I fell in love with the Twi Universe thanks to my daughter and found fanfic shortly after being diagnosed with breast cancer in 2009.  It kept me sane through chemotherapy, a radical mastectomy and radiation treatments.  It is time for me to take a more active role in life and believe that this would be great as a 'getting my feet wet' exercise. 

I have an excellent ear for proper English and grammar, an intense dislike of misspelling and poor punctuation, and a need to feel a good 'flow' to what I read.  I've been reading your work for some time now and feel that I know your 'voice'.

My email address is Motherthing@kc.rr.com.  Feel free to send me a private email and I would enjoy corresponding with you even if you don't need another beta.

Motherthing  aka Jeri



Author's Response:

Thank you =) We will email you sometime tomorrow! 

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells and Tyggy

Summary:

 

Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Did you lose your muse? This is one of my favorite E&B!!!

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

Please tell me that you haven't lost your muse on this E&B! I love them so very much...

Reptile by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

She spread herself wide open to let the insects in. 
She leaves a trail of honey to show me where she's been. 
She has the blood of reptile just underneath her skin. 
Seeds from a thousand others drip down from within. 

Devils speak of the ways in which she'll manifest. 
Angels bleed from the tainted touch of my caress. 
Need to contaminate to alleviate this loneliness.

Come what may, because  even creatures of the night have to live it large, but Karma has always found away around strokes of luck right?

Warnings- The usual: Things you wouldn't want you children to read.  Keep away if you're under the legal age to buy cigarettes. 

 

Short, multi-chapter, Prompt for Durty Nelly's  Gore Corner Vegas Prompt.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Horror, Humor
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 470
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...

Ok, Tyggs, you got me. I don't normally read the original stuff, much less horror or 'gore' but you got me into this stuff... Now I'm really enjoying it. I like this minimalistic style you've got working here. It creates an eerie feel while giving just enough information for the reader to extrapolate. I won't even try to guess at where this is going because I know how much you like to fuck with your readers. Just know that you have now started me on a new type of story to read. Thanks for getting me to dip my toe into your pool...

Author's Response:

Well I'm glad to broaded your horizon. This style is technically a poetic form with a mix of just not giving a fuck. I could've wrote this out hugely, but I thought about it and decided to keep it simple. There's noone to impress but myself so I decided to take a style I wrote in before and just write. Oddly enough this is free hand. No planning. No outline. All brain and 15 minutes a piece to write it. This is a great exercise for prompt work. It's not meant to be serious. It's meant to be...fun. Challenging, but nothing to burst a blood cell about lol So it's always amazing to see someone whose actually interested in my improv prompts. 

 

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I'm so Sick...

Christ, Tyggs, I knew you were a sick fuck but really... I love it. Nuff said....

Author's Response:

BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Smoke and Signal fires...

She's just as likable as he is. Nuff said... Damn, Tyggs, they's just plain ole sick in the haid.*hillbilly accent*

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717313
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Still reading, of course! Really looking forward to the next chap. I've really fallen for these guys.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

Banner by Rita01tx

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 88300
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just found your story today and so far I'm impressed. All through Edward's opinion spiel about teen gangs and adults reactions I heard My Chemical Romance's song Teenagers ringing in my ears. Hope if you don't know it you can youtube it. I Love that Song! (and I am 50)

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184175
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Motherthing Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good Grief!! Quit writing??? I was anxiously awaiting this post so I do hope you won't quit. Your imagination and writing skills are amazing. Don't make us live without them. PLEASE CONTINUE NOT ONLY THIS STORY BUT ANY PLOTBUNNIES YOU MAY HAVE!!!!!