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Bio:
I decided it was time to face reality and get rid of the long stories I had on here. I did that because they honestly weren't good, and I know that. I've decided it's time to post the facts. Almost 8 years ago someone really close to me died. That person was basically my Muse. Without that person in my life I've mostly stopped writing. I still get strokes of passion once and awhile, but it's rare.
As a result I won't be posting much anymore. I'll still post an occasional one-shot. Not necessarily for Twilight but it might be, as I am still very in to Twilight. I may also eventually edit and add on to the complete stories that I removed and repost them, as well as finish stories I never completed and repost them. But that's still years out if I ever do that.
As for the one-shots still up, I had gone through and edited them to my best ability as of 08/01/15 on FF.net and now have updated these posts to match. Ultimately, I write for the fun of it. Not for perfection.
"Not me, me I like to keep the things I love close. Hold them in a death grip and never let them go."
--- Detective Jo Rosati, Rookie Blue
Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Again wanting more I leaned back, drinking him in with my eyes.
Once again I have to wonder if she wouldn't be too far gone to give a shit already? Usually once your lost in feeling, in the kiss, in everything. Looking at the man is usually the last thing in a person's man by then.
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
I took a half step back, and looked him in the eye as I shrugged the slight sleeves off my shoulders allowing the dress to pool around me on the floor. His breath caught briefly before he quit breathing all together as his eyes widened slightly, yet remained glued to my own. It was as if he were to look at my half-naked form, it would be his undoing.
I have a hard time believing this. I've spent time with many different men, and even the most honorable men would have a hard time not looking (at least to have a peek). It's well-wrote but it sounds very unlikely.
I don't intend offense.
Author's Response:
Perhaps a man in his twenties wouldn't, but this is a moment I took from my own experience. :D
Thanks for the feedback as always! RB
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Certain my heart was about to pound out of my chest, I sank slowly down onto the edge of the bed and scooted back toward the center. As though he was tied to me with a chain, Edward followed to settle on his side next to me kicking off his shoes and socks as he went. His eyes followed his hands as they roamed the smooth expanse of my abdomen neatly framed by black satin panties and matching bra. His breathing matched my own as he leaned in to place a long lingering kiss just above my navel.
This is realistic and possible. A reader can relate easily. Men are attracted to women (well with the exception of gays) and the will always follow a woman who takes the lead. A lot people believe a man won't submit to a woman, but I know better (a lot better)
Author's Response:
Why, thank-you. And yeah, no one, male or female should say, "I would never," because when it comes to sex, it's amazingly easy for all bets to be off. Others I know who participate in BDSM have said the same thing (this person was male saying it about women who don't think they would/could ever be turned on by certain things).
I particularly liked this moment as well. :D
Thanks as always!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Unbidden, my body spasmed, reacting in a way I never knew was possible. He moaned, and I twitched again.
Here it is clear that she hasn't fooled around. A female that has fooled around, would have felt this situation. The difference between parts in this story confuse me. At times it seems like she has had experience (and that she isn't really a virgin) then there are points like this where it is very clear that this will be her first time.
Author's Response:
Thank-you for that perspective. We had envisioned that she had perhaps fooled around, but only shirt off explorations, and never with anyone she was terribly physically attracted to. She had stayed very intellectual/clinical in the past. Again, a bit of personal experience from us. It's important to know what makes the translation to the reader.
Appreciate you reading and responding!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
I needed more. I had waited years to feel this, and I wanted more -- now.
Once again it is clear of her complete innocence. If she has never experienced the touch of a man that can rival the one she is currently with; she is innocent.
Author's Response:
I had done a lot of messing around before I was with someone who made me tingle, let me tell you, there's a HUGE difference. There is nothing that can compare to physical attraction paired with emotional attachement. It's like you haven't really done anything before. Or at least it was for me. I'm odd in other ways, perhaps it's just me again. :D
Thanks for helping me see what made the translation (or didn't)!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
“Undress me, Edward, please. I want you to touch me everywhere.” ... "I want you to show me what you imagined doing to me all this time."
These lines border dangerous territory. They make her sound sort of like a whiner, and that she is extremely needy. They are fairly cliche lines too. They were alright in this story but generally refraim from making a female sound needy, unless she's a spoiled little rich chick or a slut.
for the first sentence it would be best to remove the please (no one wants a begger, espescially after how dominant she had been earlier) This line could be condensed into 'Undress me, Edward, touch me..." Trailing off so the please is silent in the air, still obvious, but unheard. And it no longer sounds needy.
Trailing off for the second line would make it sound better, or instead saying 'show me what you dreamed of' would work.
Once again, no offense intended.
Author's Response:
Thank-you. We appreciate the feedback!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
“Lift up, Bella,” he instructed sliding the arm he was propping himself up on under my shoulders to cradle me to him.
A change of rolls to where she has become the more Dominant. This is realistic; especially in a plain vanilla relationship. Though I don't know if you can really call this that. It is more like a one night stand that could possibly turn into more, if they don't screw it up.
Overall well wrote, and easily relatable.
Author's Response:
Thank-you. It's really important to both of us to create stories that can be related to easily, or draw a reader in if it is new (my FD). We both really strive to always create well written work. :D
Thanks for the input!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
“Oh, God, Bella! You’re so close, aren’t you?”
I notice a lot of authors write this kind of thing, it sounds redundent after about the twelth or so smutty story you read. Try to write it definitely, so the question is there, but between the lines. It will look better and new; not obvious and so done a thousand times before. It is a working line, but it loses justification when every author uses it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but I for one was drawing from the experience of someone close to me for this, and I have to admit it gets a visceral reaction from me here. lol I do agree with you and can readily see your point.
Thanks!!
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Okay, this is my last review. You now have thirty from me and thirty from Tish. If that ain't enough for you to post early, I don't now what is.
A few words of advice:
Be careful of what words you use; like, great, good, pretty, sweet, things, stuff, junk, cute, nice, ugly, mad, sad, and happy - refrain from using them if at all possible. Try to use more descriptive words; tearful, heartfelt, amazing, intringuing, beautiful, treacherous, angry.
Avoid cliches, it takes away from the story.
Try to avoid what other people write. If you read lots of stories, mentally categorize often used lines. If you want to use one, change it so that it sounds different, new. You may just start a new fad, plus everyone will remember you for it.
Take the bad with the good. I've been cussed out because of my stories more time than I care to count. There will be people who think your stories suck royally. If they comment, take it in stride. If they tell you why, use their words as advice in the next story. You might impress them yet.
Don't overuse a word in a paragraph, chapter, or story. I don't know how many people use the word 'then' every other sentence. It sounds bad.
Try to stay away from stating the obvious, sometimes it's neccesary, but most often it isn't needed.
Keep the characters from sounding needy - unless that is their personality trait - and even then, it can drag down a story seriously. Characters, even minor ones, need to have a range of traits and emotions. If they have one emotion, they sound bad in a story.
Trust me, everyone has trouble with that stuff. I have a horrid time with most of it, but I'm getting better all the time (I should be after all the stories I've wrote). You've probably already heard most of them, but it never hurts to be reminded.
And if you ever need help catching cliches and horrid lines, or helping you to discern your style and the era you are basing it off of, I'm only a PM away. (It's my specialty, I have several authors that come to me for that specifically; they don't use me as a beta [though I have several people I beta for as well] they just get my advice in the area that most betas don't notice, or at least choose not to mention on).
It was a very well-wrote chapter, and has been a well-wrote story all along. I look forward to the completion, though I will be tearful to see it go.
Also, one last time, I never intend offense.
Author's Response:
Thank-you for your detailed feedback, and for the passionate pursuit of an early update!! :D You and your sister made us smile, laugh and consider over and over. We'll be quite sad to see this journey end as well. We have had so much fun working together as collaborators and not just beta and writer (reciprically). It's been such fun to put my one of my minors to use at long last through the discovery of FF.
Thanks for joining us on this journey! You've helped to make it eminently rewarding!!! I'm hoping you'll consider checking out our other stories. I've got your profile open for the next time I have some available time to check out your work. I'm quite intruiged!
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True
How many reviews do you need from Tish and I this time? 30, 40, 50... You've already seen that we can each do thirty, don't tempt us to far.
I loved the lemon; it was beautiful and amazing. Can I hope to see a new one? Or are my sister and I going to have to butter you up with lots of reviews?
Please don't make me write another thirty reviews before you post again, or I will be tempted to post thirty bullshit reviews.
Please, please, please don't make the hormonal pregnant woman wait too long. *Puppy dog eyes, hands clasped together, down on knees, lips quivering*
Author's Response:
LOL! How about two each (one for the initial impression and one for the "oh, I almost forgot") and if you feel like refering friends, that would be great! :D You two did a great job of satiating our inner review h00rs! ;D
We do promise we got the extremely short chappy bug out of our systems, and TA is in the mood for some mornin' after lovin' so...we'll see! *tee hee* Oh, gawd! Not BS reviews!!! :S
You know we are easily swayed by puppy dog eyes, quivering lips and poses of suplication!!
Thanks for all the love, bb!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After
Oh frick, I swear up and down that the only thing you two are capable of is fracking cliffies. I don't care what you say I have yet to see proof of otherwise.
Nice, long chapter, but seriously, do you know how to do nothing else?
Author's Response:
LOL Well, then go check out my story Forbidden Desire or TA's Honeymoon Suite! And afer 10 pages, we needed to create a break. Besides, the tantalization seems to motivate people to speak up! :D
We could have ended it with less tantalization, but then wouldn't have updated for another two weeks. We thought ya might like what we did better than a wait.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Banner made by xrxdanixrx
Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...
Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.
Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?
Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh holy fucking hell. You can't end it there. I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter12
Great story, I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Wow, sweet jesus, let's get that next chapter out. This story looks extremely interesting.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I loved the chapter. I'm a serious begger, so just one more chapter today, please. *down on knees begging*
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Damn you, stupid cliffy. Need next chapter.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Dammit, you can't leave it there, f**k. I need to read the next chapter.
Oh and did your story really get booted off of FF, or were you just worried and kicked yourself off? Some of mine were put in the shit list and I was forced to remove them.
And don't worry about the reviews, they will start coming, just give it some time.
Author's Response:
my lemon brought attention to someone and i was afarid they were going to rat me out and have me banned. i might repost it later or not. i dont know.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Sweet chapter, I look forward to the next chapter. The title to this story sounds more appropriate all the time.
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Loved the lemon, hate the cliffy.
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I loved the chapter, look forward to the next.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I look forward to the next chapter, this one was interesting
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Sweet dang, loved the chapter
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Dang you, I hate cliffies get out that next chapter.
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I loved the chapter, and look forward to the next
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Another great chapter by you. I look forward to the next.
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Dang you with the cliffy, next chapter please?
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Have him re-ask the dang question
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Ah crud, next chapter please?
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Uh-oh
I'd rather have shorter chapters and faster updates
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Next chapter please? PLEASE LET EDWARD BE ALRIGHT
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Okay, seriously poor Bella... Edward's a stubborn ass
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Well, as fluffy as it was, it was well wrote. I enjoyed it, and though I truly hate to see any story end it was a good ride while it lasted.
I am going to give you some advice, as I am an author who has dealt with several flamers and is still dealing with a couple. If a person cannot get out what they have to say in 3 paragraphs or less, than don't waste your time reading it. This is fiction, some things are bound to be somewhat unrealistic. All plot stories, while interesting, can and usually do suck; fluff is what makes the edges of a story. If a review drives you to a point of being upset or tears, it is time to stop reading it and forget about it.
If you ever want to talk to someone who has been down the road of bad reviewers and flamers you can always PM me from FF.net, my account is http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1980992
Once again, great story.
Jadiona
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Great job, but I hate to see this story end.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for always reviewing on this story and I've always enjoyed your reviews. I hate to let EBD go too, but on the bright side there's always the Epi..and I hope to make that delicious :)
Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!
Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter. Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago. Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground? What will happen when these two cross paths?
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Oh crap, next chapter please?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Posting will resume this Sunday!
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: UNEXPECTED VISITOR
Great chapter, I really hope to see another chapter soon. As for ideas, I've done my own little war-ish story (still writing it actually). I'd like to see an actual conversation between Peter and Bella, one where she actually answers his questions about some of her past. It seems like there's a lot of back story missing, and I know you're writing a fuller version in that prequel of yours, but I just think there needs to be some true back story in this one. I also would like to see another lemon between Peter and Bella. just a thought...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Thanks for your thoughts and I am sure you will see what you are looking for. Chapter 13 will be your next lemon and I wrote some serious dialog between Bella and Peter. Plus, the dialog will contain more of her back story. Yeah, I guess I am kind of dragging out her back story. Oops! All will be revealed...promise!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: CAUGHT
Great chapter, it was interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: KISS
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: VOLTURI
Well interesting chapter, I look forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17
Banner by rpattz1990
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Interesting story, I look forward to the next chapter(s) in this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
It was a great chapter; I look forward to the next.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Interesting chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Interesting, I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Okay intriguing, I look forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Taking a guess... Emmett
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I was right, it was Emmett, hah
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I don't know but... Hopeful Awakenings
Author's Response:
I like Hopeful Awakings:)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Well, great chapter as always, I look forward to the next one
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Endless Awakenings
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
I look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Great story
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
An evil Volturi experiment, Werewolves and Vampires, Imprints, and our favorite clumsy girl. This will be a much different Twilight story...Summary is in the first page, so click it!
Disclaimer: I do not own Stephanie's characters as you all know. I hope you enjoy!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141698 Read Count: 16318
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43- What I Was Missing, Is You
Ah crap... next chapter please
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Be Here
Dang girl, wtf, how dare you end on a cliffy. I look forward to the next chapter. You're a very good writer, especially for being your age.
Author's Response:
ha thank you, and il right as soon as i can. im only three years younger than you silly. btw i love your stuff
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Be Here
Sorry you said your sophomore year at school a couple of chapters ago and I just assumed you were high school level. At least your writing style and accuracy makes more sense now.
Author's Response:
thank you i'm glad i'm doing this right :)
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- I Knew I Forgot Something
Loved the chapter, I can't wait for the next.
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Remove His Head From His Body
I loved the chapters, and look forward to the next. Is Bella going to come up and visit her father? Even though I know this is mostly about Revi and Jake I really hope Bella and Edward end up together
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand
I loved the chapter, and I look forward to the next.
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Come True
Oh no, next chapter, please?
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- Fight or Flight
Aw crud... Next cahpter please?
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts
My suggestion to your predicament is get a flash drive. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You
Ah crud, next chapter please
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35- Can’t Get Rid Of Us That Easily
Loved the chapter, looking forward to the next.
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36-Won The Battle, But What About The War?
Interesting chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37- That Old Chestnut
Yay, we're finally getting somewhere with the Bella department *jumps around clapping and grinning like a maniac*
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Before Us, None and After Us, None
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39- He's Been Looking For Her, Shes Seen Him
hmmm... this story's getting better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40- What Are The Chances?
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41- Stumbling
Interesting, I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42- Love at Five
Great chapter
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44- I'm A Cold One Too
Interesting, next chapter please?
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45- It Was The Worst Of Times
next chapter please?
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine
Great chapter, next one please?
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49- I'm On It
Oh for frick's sake, you can't end it there. Next chapter please?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50- Most Beautiful Sound, A Beating Heart
I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51- You're What's Wrong With Me
Interesting.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53- Ass Backwards
Great chapter, I look forward to the next
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54- Crooked Smiles
great chapter
P.S. you posted it twice
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55- Something Wrong, That Feels So Good
I look forward to the next chapter. Great chapter by the way
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56- It's A Hop, Skip, And A Leap
Great chapter, I look forward to the next
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57- Romance Lotus
Great chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58- Twenty Three Year Old Virgin, This Blows
Nest chapter please?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60- Head Hard
Intrigueing, next chapter please?
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61- Let's Not, And Say We Did
Intriguing, I look forward to the next chapter
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62- Did I Stutter?
Intriguing, I look forward to the next chapter
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63- It Is Time
Oh frack, next chapter?
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64- Fucking Well Done
Interesting
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65- Tweedle
Great chapter, I look forward
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66- Fight For The Magic, Not The Norm
I look forward to the next chapter