Reviews by DezPride
Sex on the Beach by IWantToRentJacobBlack Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96110
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: DezPride Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Never Gonna Be Alone

I must say that I was very pleased with the fact that you left them as a threesome, I have read many stories where they write the ending as a twosome and in following story make Bella choose the other one. I hate that, I love that you left it alone. I think it was a great ending, I am almost afraid to read part 2 if you decide to change it.