Reviews by StayAsYouAre
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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Is there a traitor among the guards? How else could he have gotten away?

Bella is behaving a little strange but still quite adorable!

And this no sex until the wedding is a bit confusing, but I guess that will speed up the whole process a bit, at least where Jasper is concerned.

I like the chapter and kind of missed this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

So yeah, I just found this. I like it so far. Waiting for an update. :-)

Hopefully Edward will not get lost in his so called "duties" to his people. Everybody deserves happyness. Hmm will Bella get a scholarship? And even if she gets a scholarship will she leave? Or will she do as a her mom wants her to and earn money for her brother career, which is totally unfair in the first place. Let see, ...

Seems I'm getting ahead of myself again with what ifs. Can't wait to see where you will take this story!

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Breaking Dawn from Renesmee's Point of View. Starting just before Edward 'hears' her for the first time.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63938 Read Count: 3962
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Seen and The Unseen

I like your concept for this story. Quite interesting.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

I like your story so far. I couldn't believe Alice forced Bella to ride back with Edward and didn't trust her. However in the meantime it looks like it was a good idea of her after all, hopefully Bella and Alice will get closer again. It seems like Bella is getting better. But what about that last sentence there: "I looked up towards the clear blue sky and said my last word." ??? Hope this was just her good bye to Emily and not to life in general? Did she jump? I guess I have to wait and see/read.

By the way I loved the quote from "10 things I hate about you" in the last chapter. I absolutely adore that movie.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I'm not going to tell you what she said goodbye to, you'll have to read that in a few days ^^

xx
Gelix

P.S I LOVE that movie, too!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Puh, that went surprisingly well and nearly drama free. I was a little bit anxious about their meeting. And to be honest about Tanya turning for the worse because of Edward, as she does in so many other stories.

I'm glad that isn't the case here.

Will Victoria show up in future chapter? And who was this other guy Jack could remember? James?

It all seems a little bit tooooo good to be true. But whatever, I'm definitely not complaining about a low drama level story. SO thank you. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


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Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45295
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Eager Beaver

Pure evil, leaving us hanging like that! ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

IMO: There's no need to marry just because of a kid on the way. However maybe Bella has other motives for her reaction at first (at least in the bathroom, as we don't know her answer for sure yet). She's not already or still married to someone else, is she?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Woohoo! The evil witch is gone! :-)

Hmm the idea with Jeffs brother is good, but I feel that another villain was sending the flowers and he might be much nearer when they know.

So yeah I will be waiting patiently (or maybe not so patiently9 where you take this story next.



Author's Response:

the flower stalker isn't done yet..... but that's all i'm going to say.  Glad you liked it.  THanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is the story of Pierce. She used to think she was a normal girl, but normal is not the norm in her family. She is a freak among freaks, almost unnatural...

To put it mildly, with out giving anything away... she doesn't fit in with the family business, or half her town.

She thought that after she left for college, things were going to get better. She couldn't be any more wrong.
Instead of going to medical school, she should have been a Vet.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77148 Read Count: 11950
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 28 Feb 2014
Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Evil! What does he ask her???

Can't help but feel that Pierce is behaving a bit like a spoiled child (don't know how to word it better right now). Erin seems to at least make an effort and somehow I think that taking her as his mate was not his idea or even his prefered solution either. Or maybe he is just trying to manipulate her? Would like to know his view of this deal.

Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

hmm, thought/hoped that Dr. Scott would be the mysterious uncle. he seems to be nice. But then the story would end pretty soon wouldn't it???
Looking forward to the pack meeting. Hopefully this Erin doesn't turn out to be part of the "douche pack", ...



Author's Response:

Next two chapters and you will be dissapointed... sorry (evil laught)

Reviewer: StayAsYouAre Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Charlie is just too cute.

But: Guilttripping! So not cool in my book.

Even though the family was uprooted because of her, she was just a child, she never asked for it. Now Emma is asking her to tie herself to someone she doesn't even know? Easy for her, she found someone she loves already, ...

Will we meet this Erin in the next chapter?



Author's Response:

Yes, that is why I cut the chapter there... the next chapter is about their engagement party, and shoping with Dr. Brown.