Oh God drop everything Bella needs something...sorry but she is one clingy bitch...even before the bomb. Maybe now would be a good time to notify his boss that shit just got real...and I don't mean Charlie...but, he may find out that he is being reassigned and he can't have that, nor will he be honest with Emmett or Charlie so... hey Edward grab that shovel and keep digging (lol)

No offense but things have taken a turn for the unrealistic? They are not police they are FBI and why wouldn't the Seattle PD be there. Maybe have them there as colleagues on a group task force but here we go with more lies and deceit. I am starting to really not like Edward except for the need for slow and being a gentleman he is a world class ass!! And, Charlie doesn't want revenge? Please!! Edward watched him on the docks selling illegal firearms so this "I have nothing" makes no sense especially when people ended up dead. Charlie is the biggest pussy mob boss I have ever seen! But, I will keep reading because I have to know how this plays out 

No, I don't think he loves HER, but he loves how she makes him feel. We will see if love exists when he has to lay his cards on the table. I wish you would give Edward some opposition in his "job"...you started to go there with Rose and backed off and I thought Carlisle would have at least threatened to pull him. Is my judgement clouded? Ummm YES you like and care about these people and it's not about integrity, it's about performing the job. At the very least Carlisle should have said NO to Italy. Perfect example "do you have a passport" YUP...the business is in Seattle, he has already established that Bella is not involved other than being a target.  Many an FBI informant has died over the years so I don't think the FBI would ok their agent going to Italy when there is no sign that any business will occur. Hell James and Victoria could end up dead in WA, assasignated by the Cignos and Edward will be enjoying the Italian Rivieria discussing King Dong. So much potential angst and plot twists and everything is just going in a straight line 

Please continue writing this story it is so different and fascinating...your writing style and structure has grown in leaps and bounds after reading your most recent stories but the story of good verses evil you have woven so far is so complex and compelling. I am definitely feeling a pregnancy on the horizon and then what will Edward do when he is forced to reveal himself? Oh my mind is spinning with the possibilities of where you could go in this situation 

Good chapter...I am super enjoying this story but I am a bit shocked that Chibs hasn't told Jax about Tara.  Maybe that's why I like the story, hated that bitch on Sons, and obviously you did too BUT, Michaella or alone, Jax is going to be really upset. Things were shit between them when Gemma killed her, and he killed his own mother over her plus, he was screwing the Madam too. My point is, Jax is a male slut but for whatever reason he truly loved Tara and I don't think he should just move on but that's just my opinion. Curious if your going to bring in Mr Jailhouse...can't remember his character name right now but HE was my favorite person on the show up until the moment he killed Lee!!

I totally agree with Gemma!! Even if Ava was still mad at Tig for shooting Chib, she would have been dead without him and if he hadn't have shown up that day, Juice would have let the agents take her or killed her himself!! Yes, Chib's decision but Ava should have at least told Chib to show mercy. Once again, Ava has a poor moral compass but shoves her beliefs at everyone from daughter in laws, to prenatal health, no one should breath without Ava telling them how to do it! Gemma was right on that she thinks she is the queen but has only been in the picture a short time and needs to earn some more respect before she starts throwing her weight around.  That last part with the home decorating was really funny!! Also, Cherry/Kip? DONE, both are too immature to deal with this situation. For Ava to say Cherry already loved Half-Sack? I don't think so, and I know what Chib said was wrong but Cherry was/is a Crow Eater so for their protection, money, good time...that's what she did and Kip seems like he has a moral compass and I just can't see him continuing this farce and Chib needs to tell him to figure it out and everyone needs to stop acting like they share a kidney...they don't and it's pretty obvious that he can't live with this situation and Chib is right, it's not fair to the kid 

Hey, just FYI...chapter 15 and now 18 won't load but 16-17 loaded just fine?? Weird...but I missed the Red Wedding and now I think I'm gonna miss Bella finding out she is pregnant 🤰....sad face!!!

Wow, this is pretty damn sad...Ava is going to be lucky to get out alive. I think she has made a huge mistake from the initial dinner to becoming a prisoner. Sorry, but Chibs thought Kerrianne was dead so this part isn't doing him any favors and I never got the impression that KA knows Jimmy isn't he "da". This is the only life she has ever known and Piney's life wasn't worth all this...she should have ran and gone back to La Push until the trial was over. I have read a lot of pretty horrible stuff in this story but this was by far the worst! I am just praying that Jax isn't prison raped or killed by the Mayans!! Everything is just horrible right now including half-sack running the club. His character (even on Sons) never was a biker, and he needs to turn shit over to Tig because he doesn't have the stomach for what's going on. I don't see how Ava is going to get through this and be the same. This is PTSD inducing trauma.

I think Michaela (since I know you won't be killing Ava, the baby, or Keri off) but people don't survive situations like this...ok, you've basically killed Clay and Piney? You know in Sons EVERYBODY died except Happy Chibs and Tig and I liked it that way because no one is bulletproof. Half Sack doesn't know wtf he is doing and I will at least say that Ava survived the supernatural but Michaela? Her and Cherry both are too soft for this game. There needs to be a serious game changer! Chibs has his motivation, so does Opie, but the others don't and they need a REAL tragedy to push them to their limits. Tara was that factor for Jax, and as sad as it will be, Michaela needs to be the factor now. No woman would lose her baby, then go through this hell for this lifestyle but it's hard to gauge because I don't even know her as a character. Just my opinion but SAMCRO is getting their asses handed to them yet they live? You know what I mean. I would rather the story end with Ava or Chibs as a widower and have a TRUE ending then for them to be portrayed as super natural...that's why I like this because of the human element

Another good chapter, sad about Cherry and the baby...I didn't expect the baby to die. I'm confused as to how Chibs is so certain it's the Kings when Jimmy was there? He has to be involved, even if he did it on the request of the Kings. Hope to hear more next chapter 😀