Reviews by janefanatic
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Bella Swan was the reincarnation of Isabella Salvatore, Damon and Stefan's beloved sister that had died tragically? She not only looks exact but due to a spell cast years ago, she has begun to remember her former life. What will the Salvatore brothers do when they find out she exists? How will this affect Bella's relationships, especially with Edward? How do Katherine, Victoria and Klaus factor in?

AU: Takes place at the end of New Moon (Twilight) and the end of Season 2 Vampire Diaries.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244615 Read Count: 75632
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Directions to Normal

Uh oh. How is Damon going to react to this! In a way, he's probably worse than Edward ever was, because he would rather she hate him but still live through everything than risk her in any way. Loved the Katherine/Elijah interaction at the beginning!

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Dances with Wolves

Methinks Bella is being overly harsh to Jacob. After all, didn't Edward throw her across the room to protect her from Jasper on her birthday? Jacob didn't even do anythong except look at her darkly. Aaand, once again, Damon makes everything better. This line: 

"Shapeshifter, huh?" Damon's tone was skeptical as he looked off into the distance where Jacob disappeared. "Looked like a damn werewolf to me." 

had me cracking up!

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Leaving on a Jet Plane

Okay, so I'm glad the Katherine/Elena doppelgänger issue is coming up... finally! I was worried that Bella was just going to show up, see Elena, and then start throwing stuff around trying to kill her. As established by Rosalie, our girl's got balls of steel, and when it comes to protecting her boys, she will surprise everyone by throwing down! My favourite line of the chapter comes, unsurprisingly, from Damon. You've really got him down, in my humble opinion! 

"Oh, please" Damon jeered at Edward. "What are you...Mormon?"

I guess it's especially funny because S. Meyer is Mormon... Thanks for sharing! I loved it!

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Welcome to Mystic Falls

I'm looking forward to Elena meeting Isabella!

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

Aaaand, heeere's Elijah! I'm excited about this new addition! I'm also looking forward to seeing what impact, if any, Jasper's powers will have on the Stefan/Elena/Damon love triangle. If he can feel Elena's mixed emotions and pull towards both of the Salvatores, and Edward can hear her thoughts, this will all come to light much more quickly than in canon.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: If It's Not One Thing, It's Another

Damon: "Oh my god, are you breaking UP with me?!?!"

I have wondered myself if the Originals would be at all difficult for the Cullens to kill. By all accounts they are faster, stronger and more durable than TVD vamps, and even the originals could be stabbed by wood. If they were just to dismember the body and separate the pieces, that would suffice, would it not?

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Twilight of my Redemption

I know that i should totally be reacting to the Bonnie revelation, but... grits don't smell bad! They don't even really smell like anything!

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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: When the Cat's Away

Ooh, a day out with the awesome big bro! I'm excited about the next chapter!! Also, I wonder how Bonnie will feel with everyone bar Damon criticizing her decision to help out. I'd be pretty short tempered if I kept saving the town over and over again with my friends just yelling at me for endangering myself. How about a "thank you" every once in a while?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Finally fed up Bella snaps from her Zombie State, she goes to the Volturi in seek of help to kill Victoria and to protect all those she loves... But she finds love in an unlikely person, a grandfather she has never met, littered with scars and a life with Immortality. Caius/Bella, Ra: M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 24029
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
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Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It doesn't say that Peter left the money and sundry in the safe at Chez Cullen; so who did?

Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, a passionate night will erupt between them.

Bella and Edward


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16688 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2012 Updated: 26 Nov 2012
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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Everything

Oh, poor Edward! He truly never had a chance, did he? Love.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: All Fall Down

These lines broke my heart:". I knew this dream was more dangerous than any nightmare could be, I would surely pay for this dream when I awoke. The pain would be powerful, I may not be able to withstand the attack." I've always been an empathetic reader, getting so attatched to the characters that my heart breaks with theirs. New Moon made me cry so much that I even surprised myself! Your writing has done the same.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In a Little While

If only I had such pleasant and realistic dreams! Thank you for sharing. If Edward leaves after making love to a half-sleeping woman, I might just have to kill him myself!

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Woah. Yes, he is a dick. And insane.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, Edward's control/rage issues might have come by naturally after all! I look forward to meeting Esme!

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay, she's gone over the edge now! She's held off far longer than I would, I think.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think you captured the Stockholm aspect truly with these lines: "The words flowed from my mouth flawlessly; the emotion built behind them rang true. And for a moment, even I believed them." thanks!

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I can somewhat understand how Stockholm Syndrome can work its way into someone's psyche, even while they fight it.

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, what a scumbag! I'm confused though. Maybe it's a state-by-state thing, but we never needed parental permission to attend AP classes in my high school. We sometimes needed a teacher's recommendation saying we qualified to take them, but parents weren't involved in the process at all. May I presume you are taking artistic license, or does this vary by state?

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, you've seemed to embody Esme extremely well; she sounds like a boyscout, "always prepared" with tissues ans band-aids no less! Is this just her thorough mothering, or is it the fact that Bella is particularly prone to needing bandages? Time will tell.

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Esme's pov outtake

I'm glad she wasn't just telling on Bella to get her into trouble! 

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sleep deprivation is probably one of the most effective forms of torture there is. Eventually you would do just about anything for a catnap, and the brain is so pliable that any sort of behavioral conditioning would just seep in like a sponge. I'm beginning to understand how this Stockholm-esque exercise could be so efficacious!

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Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

If I were Bella, I would ask for a list of acceptable responses when a man she is supposed to be polite to asks her to leave with him, so she could avoid this type of problem in the future. Of course, if I were in Bella's position, I have no idea how I would really react to any of this. Edward is confusing her on purpose, so she will always try extra hard to be perfect for him. He knows he is being unreasonable, but he punishes her and emotionally abuses her so she becomes even more dependent upon his rare moments of kindness. Still, it would be nice for her to ask how she could have avoided this scenario. Maybe he'll throw her a bone and grant her some sort of escape option for the future. She won't be able to avoid going to the restroom or speaking with Edward's best friend who presumably doesn't know about Edward's lifestyle and proclivities toward emotional abuse without raising suspicions, and he has to know this.

Summary:

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A/U Edward is an ancient vampire searching for the love of his life that was ripped from him over 3 thousand years ago. Reincarnation theme. Canon pairing.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25866 Read Count: 18012
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Akashic records? I assume we will learn more about those later! I enjoyed the priestess interaction, and the Atlantis reference. Unfortunately, now those with red hair are mocked and called Gingers! I think they're beautiful.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Woohoo! Meeting with the Buddha! Or, I suppose Sidhartta was more of a pre-Buddha. Either way, very neat. There's a book that I love called "LAMB; the gospels according to Biff, Christ's childhood pal". It's extremely tongue-in-cheek, yet poignant at times, and the premise is that during the 20-plus year period in the bible where Christ is not mentioned growing up, he (and Biff) journeys to the east to meet up with the three wise men who gifted him when he was born. He goes to thank them, and in the process learns philosophical, cultural, and spiritual ideals from them. It's a fascinating, yet funny (again, tongue-in-cheek) look into what Jesus' life could have been shaped by. This chapter made me think you might like it.

Summary:

The boutique has been closed for 45 minutes and Bella is still waiting to be picked up, something that's become a pattern she's getting tired of. Will an unexpected knock at the door make her stop waiting? O/S, Bella & Edward, rated NC-17 for a reason.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5276 Read Count: 2042
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2012 Updated: 31 Oct 2012
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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Worth Waiting For

Hah! An interesting take on the "I'm in love with my sibling's girlfriend" mold. 



Author's Response:

Well, thank you? ;) And, just in case you didn't know, and would like to, there was a second chapter added to this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3790
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
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Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this! The loophole in pragraph 147 was brilliant. I love that Edward was all prepared to be angry, and then the fight went out of him when he got a look at the shoebox. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Darn loopholes... lol!  Thanks so much for reading!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Turnabout

Wow. Good for Bella! The break-up in New Moon was essential for Edward and Bella's relationship in the long run; it proved to themselves how much they needed one another, and let Bella grow some as a person, but it breaks my heart. I absolutely love that it was Bella here who actually broke it off, but you made it perfectly obvious that it's not what she wanted to do, it's not what Edward wanted to do, but it's what needed to happen. I think if Edward leaves now, he would end up returning sooner than he would have in New Moon. This conversation, and all of Bella's logical points went a long way toward debunking all of Edward's ridiculous reasons to stay away. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

WOW, thank you for this luscious review!! I too think that NM was key for their growth as individuals and as a unit, and I seek to do something similar here. Bella brought up some serious issues during their breakup, and if they're going to reconcile, some changes will have to be made. We shall see...

Anyhoo, thanks for your thoughtful words!! I hope you continue to enjoy their journey :)

Summary:

BannerFans.com Part 3 in the series. Bella's chance to confront the Cullen's comes a little quicker than she thought it would due to a new threat looming on the horizon. How will she react when she sees Edward for the first time since she was changed?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6053 Read Count: 896
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Aug 2013
Reviewer: janefanatic Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A lovely twist! I'm glad Jane has found someone, and I hope Edward isn't too stubborn to see it.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281096
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
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Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hm, I wonder if Alice will react at all to B's set-down? I don't know, but here's to hoping. Now, will Jasper tell Edward to give Bella piano lessons or not? Also, is it wrong for me to look forward to a little Pretty Woman-esque revenge shopping scene?

On These Icy Waters by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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April, 1912. This journey home could change Bella's entire future. She no longer wished to be the decoration on her husband's arm. One fateful voyage could lead to the happiness she always wanted, or be the end of everything.

*Previously posted on fanfiction.net and twilighted.net


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14311 Read Count: 2281
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2013 Updated: 04 Oct 2013
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Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: On These Icy Waters

Thank you so much for this story! I was already crying about halfway through, and I absolutely loved the inclusion of the Unsinkable Molly Brown. I also felt like a major bitch when Philip survived, because Edward was dead in my mind, and I felt survivor's rage by proxy, agreeing with Bella in that her mother did't deserve the wonderful things in life she was able to grasp. Of course I am so glad that Edward survived; I feel like you struggled with that too, and needed to have him survive at the end. Did you intend for him to die, only to change your mind?

Summary:

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Two strangers, two computers.... one night.

Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason, mostly of a lemony flavor.

 

*Previously posted on fanfiction.net and twilighted.net

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140869 Read Count: 35279
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2013 Updated: 04 Oct 2013
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Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake ~ Edward Cullen and the Mysterious Case of the "Uh-ohs"

How lovely! Thanks ever so much for sharing. One question, though: whatever happened to the man who attacked Bella? I think you should go back a couple of chapters and write in that he was caught or something, because it was kind of nagging at my brain, and I was just waiting for it to reemerge. 



Author's Response:

Hi there. There actually is a mention at the end of Resolutions Pt. 2, that once her attacker was in custody, she perservered. He was caught and eventually convicted, I just didn't go into a lot of detail about that since trials like that can take a long time, particularly gathering evidence from multiple victims, and only a matter of months had passed between the attack and her move. So there was no sentence yet. I apologize for the confusion.

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Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ The Unknown

No, I apologize for not reading it carefully enough! I really thought I'd read every sentence!

Summary:

No matter how big and bad you think you are, if a child hands you a toy phone, you pick it up. No matter how damaged you think you are, when someone pure and beautiful offers you their love, you love them back. And no matter how tough, when your mom asks you for a kiss, you give it. And you make it a good one.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38148 Read Count: 8404
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2013 Updated: 05 Oct 2013
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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing this! I absolutely agree. Whenever a child hands you a 'phone' you pick it up. Period. I'm liking the story thus far.