Reviews by allforkedup
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

ok, I have scraped myself off the floor after the heart attack you just gave me.  Whew!  I worry myself to death about some Edward, ya know... BTW, tomorrow's my birthday, and a new chapter would be an excellent gift.

 

THUD (that hint was rather heavy, lol)



Author's Response:

LOL...I would, but then everyone would have to wait till monday for the next chapter, which would be even worse than the heart attack this chapter...Trust me...you want me to wait :)

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25615
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Wow.  What a beautiful tale.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I hope you will check out some of my other stories as well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Actually, it's an excellent way to end one store and begin another.

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 119984
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Wonderful story.  You were able to infuse it with so much emotion!

I have one question, though... how the heck did Bella get a 1960 Mustang, being the things were not introduced until 1964 for the 1965 production year?  Haha.  It didn't have any effect on the plot, but it's just one of those things that can irk somebody, ya know? 

But I still loved it.  Good job.



Author's Response:

Ok, when I started this story I could have sworn that I found a 1960 Mustang online. I must have been dreaming, I do alot of research for my stuff but I guess I was lead astray.... Anyway, Thank you for the review and for reading my story:)

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I vote yes to continuing.  You have constructed the beginning of what could be a wonderful multichapter tale.  The story is coherent, entertaining, and compelling in a sweet way.  So many people try to tell a story; it is good to find someone who can, and can also manage the apparently difficult intricacies of spelling, grammar, and punctuation.  I can understand a few mistakes, but too little attention to those three details make a story almost impossible to read.  Thank you for being a capable author.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Renesmee and Jacob have just married and Edward and Bella are free to enroll in yet another university, where they plan to follow a course of classical studies. Suddenly Edward leaves and Bella is confused and totally alone. However, she is sure of his love and fears that something terrible might have occurred. It has. Indeed something happened when Carlisle was in Rome in the 17th century and now all the Cullens have to pay for it. A Latin myth opens for Bella the road that might allow for her to rescue them.

 

 

 

As I am a disaster with inserting characters, they are: Bella, Edward, Carlisle, Aro, the Cougar, all the Cullens and the Hon. Salvi Donati.

 

 

 

I am thinking to stop posting the story unless I get some reviews. If readers don't like it, then so be it.  I am surprised because on Twilighted net and ff  net it was well liked. I now post Chapter 9, and see what happens.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24333 Read Count: 1394
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 10 Jul 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Gone

Because I saw your note requesting reviews, I read this first chapter.  I like it.  I don't know why few pople have read it or reviewed, but if it's any consolation, my story has many readers, but very few reviews.  I think that most people are like me; I read voraciously, but rarely review.  I feel a story is many times a personal thing, and I really do not feel like I have any business judging anyone else's thoughts or imaginings.  That's just me.

Also, this morning, I heard on the radio that the President's speech the other night was too intellectual for most Americans to understand.  Here's the kicker - the speech was at a 10th grade comprehension level.  I tell you this because this story may be too cerebral for many readers.  Sad, huh?

Another thing - because I read voraciously, I usually read only completed stories.  I cannot keep up with several story lines at once; I get too confused.  There could be many more readers that are like me in this matter.

Now, one more thing - please continue.  I have read only the first chapter, just to see if it held promise, and it does.  It is very imaginative; I could not possibly create anything with such depth.  Don't be discouraged by lack of feedback.  Write because you have a story to tell; you don't have to please anyone but yourself.  I look forward to reading the entire story once it is complete.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am hearthened and will continue posting, then. Strange, this possibility to interact with authors has changed my life. A few weeks ago I was reading a book on paper and I wanted to ask  the author  why a character had been put on the first chapter and then forgotten for the rest of the story and of course I could not. So frustrating. A review does not need to be a literary review, but just a comment, a question, an emoticon ... As I am Italian and some authors introduce sentences in Italian, google-translated (they are all wrong), I PM them(I don't put it in a review) and now I am editing the Italian of many writers, on Twilighted Net and FF net.

I learned from my reviewers, and some learned form me. In any case since we don't make any money, the opinion of readers is the only reward.

You are right, Eros and Psyche could be too cerebral for some - it was for me too, almost. After it i'll start posting The Parachutist. It is an historical novel with Vamps, AU, but it is certainly less complicated.

Thank you again, I'll look you among the authors.

Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice.  check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: allforkedup Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

oh, yes, please do continue!



Author's Response:

I plan to but I know it is going to be a few months before I can start posting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Nickey