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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255213
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Different and interesting...

Author's Response:

Welcome to my story, I hope you continue to like it...lml

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lot of info in that chapter, well put together and paced. Do like the way they keep sliding looks ateach other. Interesting times upcoming.

Author's Response:

it gets ... hmmm, what's the word I'm looking for? .... stimulating ...lol Thanks for leaving a comment ...lml

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Mine is fairly good about mine also.
Now to the review, love the way you write so smoothly that I never realise how much information you have given me until I suddenly realise its the end of the chapter and I know so much more then I did at the begining...

Author's Response:

I had to think what you meant by mine is fairly good about mine also...but then I remembered I had made a comment about my husband's understanding...(poor husband's..lol...

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Moving along at a lovely pace. Wonder what Edward is thinking...

Author's Response:

My story is told at a day-by-day pace, and I want to show the relationship and the bond between the two of them grow, while the outside disturbances take a back burner. But like any pot of water, it will start to bubble and eventually blow....but the more you watch for it, the slower it bubbles. ok...thanks for the comment ...lml

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A lot of conflicting signals coming from Bella but that is to be expected.
Still love the way you have put this story together.

Author's Response:

Bella is just unsure of herself ...as is her nature

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They are all so sweet...think they are already giving her the security she needs.

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She seems to generate strong protective feelings from most of those surrounding her, especially Edward...Jame on the other hand sounds like a total monster.Love the quiet flirting interaction between B&E.

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story evolves beautifully, slowly opening out.

Author's Response:

Thank you and I am sorry I didn't get to answer each of your reviews...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ah,ha! Nitty gritty...God she has had an awful time...you describe, in short pieces, so much..

Author's Response:

Her whole nasty story is told is short spurts of horror...thanks for the comment...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

They are getting into it big time...glad he wants her to keep some hair (none makes me feel its creepy, in a pedophile way) I love how they are having a good time but something tells me it won't last

Author's Response:

They get along together real nice...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He is mean but he will give her more tomorrow.

Author's Response:

Yeah she gets it good tomorrow...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

God...shudder...my absolute worst nightmare...shudder again...even thinking about it makes me want to throw up. Your writing is powerful.

Author's Response:

thank you...your reviews are very appricaiated ...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Very moving ceremony...a very emotional day all around for her.

Author's Response:

it should be special ...

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Why do I keep feeling the other shoe is about to drop...I am getting some really wierd feelings in relation to danger for Bella...

Author's Response:

ohhh...i think you feel like that because the laces keep opening up ...lol ...(that was a good anology) ..thanks for the comment, I have a teaser for you from the next chapter ...lml

 

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.  

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Was she out of her mind ...that bastard need to be in a grave not prison... she should have pressed charges and it will never be over for her until he is charged and they all know what he did. It won't make those who know and love her think any less of her, it may help them understand her better. It amazes me Sam and Jake did not kill him.

Author's Response:

Well you will see later on, as the whole story of that night unfolds that Bella made a deal with the devil. She did what she felt she had to do in order to protect someone she cares about...Thanks for reading..lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

She lives in a very scary world.

Author's Response:

Sometimes we all do...lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It is a fine line he walks, she is far more fragile then she or he thinks and though she needs to build up her confidence and reduce her fear she needs the close body comfortand reassurence he gives her. Lonliness is the last feeling she needs. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Your right that is what she needs as well as the security of the confidence she gains from him love and respect ...lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yes I have changed my mind he messed up, realised it and fixed it. He really does care for her.

Author's Response:

ta - da....yes that was the whole point I was trying to make. Some people just couldn't get that point and they still can't ...lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

The 24/7 thing I find a bit wierd - OK for some people, I suppose - too much disipline, submission and third person, a bad thing? Too much quietness and getting your own way. Do not think having a personality around the person you love is a bad thing.

Author's Response:

yes I agree with you and I would find it hard to live in that atmosphere, but there are people who do...lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

See even Edward has a funy feeling, as if something is off. The tat sounds lovely

Author's Response:

There is a picture on the extra's page...I wasn't sure if you seen it or not ...lml

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

He,he...sounds like its going to be a fun weekend.

Author's Response:

lol ...it will be interesteing ,,,lml

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

See...she is still dealing with her insecurities and triggers.
That ink better be gone soon...bat...dark alley...mutter, mutter,*giggle*, just kidding.

Author's Response:

oh, yes those triggers are there. The full fledge panic attack came on when she went to find Edward to talk to him, and couldn't find him ..and his car was gone and then the fear became too much when someone other then Edward touched her....and are you threatening me? ((LMAO)) ....

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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hahahahaha...that was a sad and a fun chapter.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it ...Thanks for reading i have a teaser for you...

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That was so well written it was as agonizing to read as it must have been for her to go through.

Author's Response:

were you rocking in your seat trying to get some friction?...lol ...that;s what I did when I was writing it ...LMAO .....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh come on they were just getting into the swing of things..the million dollar baby comment...hmmm...methinks I smell Caius and the stink of that bastard ex of hers....

Author's Response:

they willbe talking about that soon...lml

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Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thank you...but I think I will keep my thoughts on those ten minutes to myself. Great chapter and building nicely(not being facetious)towards the next climax (double entendre intended)and I want to know who is behind all the odities...

Author's Response:

I would like to know too...lol ....here is this weeks teaser...

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

 

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Does he ever...looking forward to seeing what has got up his butt.



Author's Response:

Edward is a man who always has a reason (good or bad) for everything he does... thanks for reading...louise

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

God he is a nasty one, *giggle* well I suppose he will not stop next time...

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Consistantly brilliant...

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Can feel the tension...keep expecting something awful to happen...hes cute looking at the rings.

Author's Response:

Well all I can say is that sometime it's going to have to come to head ....I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a review this week ...lml

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Terrifying!!!!! I hate cliffies...hope it was only Edward.



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Yes , I do the rock thing...though I collect very small coloured ones and shells. I don't paint or date them but they stay in my garden. I also look for fossils in the rocks and those stay on shelves in the house, mostly. You would be surprised how many places have fossil rocks.

 

I feel the tension rising...I'm looking forward to Edwards reaction if they meet James...



Author's Response:

I love rocks and I collect them from all over the place, everywhere I go..I bring home a rock ...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Ha,ha,ha children and what they hear, learn and repeat, love it.

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Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Excellent chapter...touched all the right notes on the emotional rollercoster that is E & B in this story...most especially the last word, chilling.

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Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

He is so clever, she needs to be in control of herslf and not allow anyone else to control her. Submission does not mean he controls her it means he looks after her needs and she is in control, that is what the safe words are for, she was so out of control she forgot this.

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Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Oh! boy is he in trouble and maybe there is safety in numbers...very enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

He just might be in trouble

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Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Oh! yeh! loved that one, especially the end.

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Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Love the chorus  and the echo...

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Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Always thought there would be more to her story...great  chapter.

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

I have not got a clue who it is.

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

Take your time...RL is more important then anything else. The story will be waiting to emerge when you are ready. Sorry you are having such a rough time hope it improves soon. A.

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Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Nice twist and it all begins to become clear.

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Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

:) Happy out.

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Lots, I'm sure.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

It begins to come clear. A lot of funny stuff going on. You are tying it up well.

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87584
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Funny reckoned it was her... That chase was fun...

Author's Response:

thank you. =)

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Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am looking forward to finding out who, somehow I don't think it is the obvious person.

Author's Response:

You'll get to learn who it is soon, don't worry. thanks! =)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is so readable, I am flying through it, still a great story.

Author's Response:

=) Glad you're liking this.

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Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God this is good!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. =)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok this one has me intrigued and by God its hot...the sexual tension is oozing from the screen.

Author's Response:

thanks! =)

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Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Been there, (pregnancy and hospital) done that and it is terrifing...same outcome and he was born healthy and strong.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you and the baby are fine now. Thanks for reading. ;)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

That was brilliant, perfectly paced tension filled and very, very smooth. I'm in for the duration

Summary:

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Banner by: edwards_girl_1918... Author & Co-Author of some great Fics... check ´em out!!!

4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

Wow! emotional stuff...

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What the.... Didn´t See that Coming

God I did not think the chapter would end like this...skank does it every time.

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: I Am Ready For Love

That was the best first time I have read and the funniest, I'm still laughing.

Like your recs absolutly adore 50...

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Great ending...just the right amount of everything and finished it on a very positive note.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

Finally, love it...just balanced so well, sweet tender and not smutty at all. As we all wish our first times were.

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

AW! he is sweet and so much fun. Why would he not try to take over the story.

Author's Response:

It's just his nature I guess.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

Love Emmett, actually love all of them, great story.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

This story just gets better and better...

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I can't wait,heheheheh...

Author's Response:

soon...a couple LRMs first then back to V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

The best, hahahahahaah...

Author's Response:

yeah, that's one of my favorites too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

Hahahahaha, Do love Charlie...

Author's Response:

Team Charlie!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Ah, just beautiful... the poem was lovely
...as for Fr. Pats comments on the retreat
hahahahaha can you imagine Emmett in such a setting.

Author's Response:

unfortunately, i can.  lol.   Thanks!  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V chap- http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Dying to hear the hooker turkey story...



Author's Response:

i posted it a little while ago...the inspiration for it will be posted on facebook tomorrow in a note.  Thanks!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Thank you for the turkey story it was fun and the second half was even better...feel very tearful...



Author's Response:

it was sad...but I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Oh, that was soooo much fun...been there done that, hahahahaaha. Can't wait to find out why Chris is there.



Author's Response:

hopefully you've read the latest chapter of LRM which give details of Emmett's party.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks

Love these two...



Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics

First off, the 'biggest dick in the ward'was the funniest yet, I'm stil giggling. Secondly...hahaha...Bella slipping and telling Rose about the sex on the honeymoon, truly priceless. Great chapter and oh I'm looking forward to the drama in the next one.



Author's Response:

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104701
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well...What can I say...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!...MORE PLEASE...pretty please.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So am I, its great...

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389631
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...

Excellent as usual...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

Worth the wait...



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!

Krazi

xoxo

FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!

Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

:) perfect chapter...the set to with Leah and Jacob was brill and the begining of training...beautifully drawn.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Love the start!!!!

Author's Response:

 Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Bloody amazing...I'm hooked...

Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

Mad for this!!!!! Will be with you all the way...love them both...insecurities and all. As for Alice... well you have outdone yourself shes brill!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah E & B need to get there act together, thank God we have Alice sticking her nose into everything!  Lol!  Glad your enjoying.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

That was such fun, love Seth, beyond cute, as for Will!!! and Leah he,he can you imagine the mess. Love the relationship between Bella and Seth and cannot wait for the conversation with Sir.

Author's Response:

Lol!  Yeah, Seth is a real cutie and I love his relationship with Bella too.  As for Jacob/Will and Leah fiasco, I have no words for that eff´d up mess!  Lol!  You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Did I what...gave all that was promised and more...sizzling *gigggle*

Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Uggh! uh...uggh! Speechless...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Oh my God!!!! intense does not even begin to describe that. Sir and pet have just become my favourites.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

What do you mean *IF* we like it...IT was bloody amazing...I can't wait until the next update...what happens next...does he love her...hate her...does he still think she is married..WHAT?

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

By a mile that was the funniest, sexiest and most tension filled piece of writing I've read in a long while. The caps on the last line say it all, hahahaha...keep up the very excelent work...I live for each update *sad I know* but worth every moment of anticipation.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Leaving the love...gobsmacking first time...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

Great chapter, moved everything along beautifully.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Ah! perfect ending...little shit needs a good ass kicking.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

It was worth it...God was it worth it. Just perfect.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

:) Love the atmosphere you create in your writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

Your very bold, confusing me and all...damn it I was looking forward to another installment, well hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Hey! *waves*

 

Yes, real chapter will be posted this week. We have 99% complete =)

 

Thanks for reading...this crazy lil chapter lol

 

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

OK very alieny but interesting

Author's Response: LOL Thanks =D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Certainly different...

Author's Response:

Yes, it is.

Thanks for your comment =)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

OK I'm hooked...nice little story begining to develop here...looking forward to the journey

Author's Response:

Yay! Awesome, glad we hooked ya! =)

Thanks for reading and commenting. We'll post more soon.

~Jells

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Hell of a start in life for both of them...can't wait to see how it plays out.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. =) We'll post more soon.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Yikes! talk about lack of control...the fun begins now.

Author's Response:

Yup, the fun does begin ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

Wow!!!!Amazing...intense, bloody, horrrific and excelent

Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

And thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Prepare to be Pissed

Got to say I was enjoying this and you have left us hanging...but exams come first...hope you do well.

Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for understanding. We'll post more asap.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Great chapter, no longer confused...



Author's Response:

Awesome!!! Thanks so much!!! =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread

Rosalie did the right thing, Bella should have told them all and put James ass in jail

Author's Response:

i agree:).. people do things without thinking sometimes.. thankyou for your review

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

I'm confused if Bella is only 2 months gone then surly she has plenty of time to abort or maybe its just a story device???

Author's Response:

yea she had plenty of time.. she knew that but asked her doc not even suggest that as a possiblity to renee. she wouldnt have gone through with it and didnt want renee to force her

Reviewer: artri Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

Don't know what to say, at her age and in her situation, I would have jumped at the chance. That is why it takes all types to make the world

Author's Response:

very true... i prolly would have too to be honest... but a good friend of mine didnt, she  went threw with the adoption