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Bio:
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59013
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Had both my sons 10 weeks early (4 years apart) so I know a lot about pregnancy and the complications that can ensue. I had pre-eclampsia on the second, the risks are high and it is thanks to the doctors and nurses that so many babies survive.
You touch all the right notes about teen pregnancy in this story.
Author's Response:
Thankyou.. I have my own experinces to touch on.. I had my first at 16.. my mother had delivered a stillborn and my sister had one pass while in the womb. I was blessed that my only problem had been pre-term at 7 months and had to be put on bed rest. Thankyou for your review
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present
That was a superb ending to the chapter. This just gets better and better.
Author's Response:
Thankyou
What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.
After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35770
Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sweetest of the sweet, just lovely.
Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future. Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.
Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Compromised
Where did they get him from, he never told her he was not going to leave...
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged
Sweet is all I can say...with a feeling of true love.
Author's Response:
Aww...thank you! If I can accomplish anything with this story it wil be that readers are able to see the love and affection that Edward and Bella have for one another. They may have their problems, but LOVE was never an issue. I love them both dearly!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Now what????? May be its not just mind reading she has tapped into...
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Wow, did not seem that long but am glad your back...that was so funny, Emmett's comments as he is running out of the room calling for Carlise...I nearly fell off the chair I was laughing so much. I had this image of him skipping as he ran just like a 3 year old going to tell. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper
So will I...
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Come back to me, Baby
That was the best....
Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion. Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name. When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting. Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.
All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer. The rest of the story belongs to me.
Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!
Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
He is an ass...she seems to love him but not in a good way.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment. Yes, you're right! She does love him but it's not healthy. Theirs is a destructive relationship which goes like this--breakup, apologies/courting, getting back together, problems, and then the cycle repeats.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Jacob is certainly an ass...Edward read her well and rescued her...sweet.
Nicely paced
Author's Response:
Thank you again. Indeed, Jacob is a certified a**. Chapter 8 explanation would make it worse. Bella is easy to read, especially since Edward had lived with her for some time. He [Edward] is also protective of her.
When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.
MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51179
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Very well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
You describe it all so well.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It means a lot!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
What indeed!!! Going to find out...
Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
It was just a bit of fun, a chance for an all-expenses paid vacation, and a favor for her bestie. Never in a billion years could Bella have imagined just how much meeting Edward Cullen would invert her world. This was an entry for the Pick a Pic challenge.
Thanks to Belindella for the beautiful banner.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12563 Read Count: 1860
What happens when the host of the popular nightly talk show SexEd finds his relationship in a rut? Will they be able to spice things up before all is lost?
Second place winner in the Eat Your Heart Out Contest!
Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4341 Read Count: 604
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: SexEd
Loved it...very funny.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
M
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
God, what a life, he is a nasty one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
At least they are looking after her.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are! thanks!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
She is so broken.
Author's Response:
But she'll get better now that she has family. Thanks!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
"You said no one's ever asked you for your thoughts before?" I cannot imagine what a life she must have had.
Author's Response:
Abuse is horrible that way. Its effects creep into places you wouldn't expect. Thanks for the review!
In this story, Bella is an orphan who has never met her parents. The only things she has from them is a golden bracelet and a box she was given on her seventeenth birthday. She also starts having strange dreams and her body is slowly changing. Then she meets the Cullens, but what are they? And what about her new friends?
Things cannot be any more confusing about Bella….or can they?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love and immortality
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44525 Read Count: 11285
I knew that I was attracted to her at first. Mostly for her delicious scented blood. But I now knew that it went so much deeper. I’d found my love. My mate. And no matter what she says. I will end Phil Dwyer. My mate will not have to live another day feeling this fear I know she does. He will feel the pain he he gave her. Only he will not live long enough to tell his tale.
*SWEET, RANDOM, ONE SHOT*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1082 Read Count: 352
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow! a whole story in the making...can see it expanding before my eyes...
Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?
(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)
- Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
- Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184537
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Big Balls
Beautiful...as was the way the entire chapter was constructed.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon
Excellent ending...there was something really special about this story..loved it.
What do you mean if!!!!! I want to read it...I can't wait.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate your support :)
Peps
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - How She Got Here
Glad to support your habit (would not be if it was real) Tremendous start.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Do You Remember Me?
Rereading just love this story.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Failed Marriage
This is going to be so much fun...
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Revelations
Ha,ha, love Bella's thoughts...
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Reveal
Edwards expression when he sees Isabella, ha,ha,ha...
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Why He Is the Way He Is
It is too much...I just love it.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Things You Learn at Brunch
He hasn't got a chance...
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Small World
A bit of competition...interesting
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Slumber and Awakening
Ha,ha,ha,ha...he is so completely and totally f*cked!!!! just love it.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Catharsis
Love the spectrum of moods and emotions in this story...
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Smooth Moves
All the pieces of the story are subtley arranged within the story...every now and then one bites... Mikes a twit, he,he.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Moving Forward
Ugh! James is such a creep...but God I love Edwards fantasy at the begining of the chapter. The descriptions of food are yum.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Celebrations and Epiphanies
There is so much in each chapter...where do I start...the father's day meal, all of them are so sweet and caring. The fight outside of the restaurent, she is not as helpless as you think. Her present, she is bright ,intelligent and knows her man...he,he
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Anticipation
The three of them Edward, Bella and Alice, are adorable together..as for the fashion show, beautifully written ...thought I was there watching it.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confessions
Can you believe Billy willing to destroy three live to save him having to face the truth. Some friend to Charlie and some father in law to Bella... loved the last line in the chapter.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Sunflower of My Life
Whats the bets on two and a half weeks???? They are so sweet together.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - A Swan Can Break a Man's Arm, You Know
Yuk!! James creepophile...she showed him, ha, ha...just love the idea of Clive A. Seagull.
There is one that sits outside the window of a particular restaurent in Allessio, Italy, every evening, (or did up until last year) looking for scraps...it was hilarious, cheeky big bugger as well use to tap on the window.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Swingers, Sweet Potato Pie and PMS
God this has everything, food, clothes, sexual tension to die for and of course shoes...great story.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Kiss Me, Baby
Whats the bet the lone customer was someone special????
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Slow Simmer
Well when they get going, they get going...mewling hawt.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Provocative Poach
Great just great!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Building a Flavour Base
Feel the tension building, doubt they will make it to the cabin...also methinks something really bad is a coming...love this to bits, can't wait for the rest.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A Little Poison in the Pot
EEK!!!! God she is a danger magnet can't imagine the type of trouble she will get into...
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Blanched
Agh!!! *pouts* now we have to wait, really glad I waited to read this, now I only have to wait 4 days...God I hope they find her.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase
Yea go the clans...
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Futuretake One
Bloody brilliant chapter...already voted for you on the Lemonade Stand.
Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out
Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: A Rough Landing
Lovely to see this updated.
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 31: From this Pointe On
Great story looked forward to every chapter. Fitting ending, thank you.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 25: three little words
So good to find this story again, glad to see you back.
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Past Actions and Current Consequences
How could you!!!!!...hehe I'm sure you had a reason, can't wait to read it.
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143215
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I...can...not ...wait...
Great story.
Banner by: the amazing and talented ivoryhairbela... you rock!
Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past. Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty. She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist. After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter. Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?
Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?
Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza! A million and one thank you´s!!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS. NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…
Great chapter, well put together and really moves the story along, explains a lot.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: When the Music...
Yea you tell him mama bear...
Author's Response:
Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!
Krazi xoxo
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...
That it was...move it along very, very nicely...like Mac's POV.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...
Cute...
I took an antique in for appraisal, only to find a much rarer treasure. I met Bella Swan on Antiques Roadshow, and PBS would never want for funds again. Canon Couples, Vamps/Humans.
Credit goes to forthelongestday for the incredibly lovely banner.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82797 Read Count: 28260
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh I like this one...humor, wit and intelligence with a smattering of need an want...glorious.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words and your review! There will be more of what you mentioned, for sure!
Rachel
What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob? Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi? canon
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen
He seens cute, pity they all are not as good as him. It is sad to think he will grow super fast, human babies grow fast enough.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94 Arrival
Lovely birthing...quite realistic and yet not too gorey.
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122 Reactions
He never waits, does he...
Author's Response:
Ha! No, no he doesn't!
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123 Simple Question
I am so looking forward to her tearing him a new one...
Author's Response:
Well, Bella will have an interesting way of doing that, to be sure!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93 Delivered
All very exciting...
Author's Response:
Thank you! One birth, coming up!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2
Delightful...so smooth to read. Knew they would have fun.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! They did have fun, didn't they!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120 Spa
Very forthcoming when tipsy and can you imagine what they will get up to now.
Author's Response:
Love tipsy Bells!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97 Burned
Still here...still enjoying.
Author's Response:
So glad to hear from you! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103 Reunions
Oh! yes as long as there is lots of pratice to make sure they do it right...
Author's Response:
ROFLMAO!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144 Consequences
And what a handful...shudder.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143 Reassurance
"uhhh oooooh . . ." is right is he in rouble or what.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142 Feeding
So sweet, in a very weird vampire way.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128 Frank Discussions
E is so sweet and over the top. Already feeling anxious at the talk of Aro.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?
NO to the circumcision, not necessary, painful and like the appendix even if there seems to be no reason for it to be there, evolution has left it there for some reason, so leave well enough alone.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127 Unexpected
A great chapter...you write a really slutty and obnoxious Tanya...love to hate her.
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
Charlie is so funny in an obsessive way... and God they do love each other sooooo much. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Charlie is just an old fashioned dad, kind of like my grandad! lol Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
Like how she told him...
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! I always thought edward should have been a little bit happy about the baby!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
Wow, hot...love all of their reactions.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Please continue to let me know what you like about the chapters!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
Sweet!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
Love Renee's reaction to the underware and Bella's waseven better...
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the mother/daughter laughs! I wanted all to have a glld time together!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Investments
<Love the broken bed and that they help Rennee and Phil.
Author's Response:
I really did love the broken bed, too!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Surprise
Very emotive chapter, painted ascene of great love and joy...
Author's Response:
Ah! new word for me, I love it! Bella just knew what he neded instinctively!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Confidants
Ha, ha so protective...
Author's Response:
You have to love Rose, she really is passionate about things she believes in. It's glld to have her understand Bella a little bit more, don't you think?
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters
who ville, I just love it...all I can see is Emmett doing a skipping dance down the roadway...
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO REAPOND TO EACH AND EVERY CHAPTER!
IT MEANS A GREAT DEAL TO ME.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 Purring
So do I...
Author's Response:
There is a chapter called Winter Afternoon coming up - you-re going to LLLOOOVVVEEE!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom
Little does he know...
Author's Response:
Yep! Hope you continue to enhoy the story! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Genes
Jake and Edward are funny...love their protectivness and rivalry where Bella is concerned...though I keep waiting for the other shoe to fall.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Fishing
You can feel it getting closer...
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Thank you...an exqusite exercise in the beauty of love.
Author's Response:
I am soo glad you see it that way . . . I do too!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 Frantic
Oh yea!! loving every minute...
Author's Response:
Glad you love roller coasters, this one is bumpy for awhile!