Reviews by AmesB
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: AmesB Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You. Are. Mean. I know there was no other way to end that chapter but with that cliffie but still!!!!!



Author's Response:

I totally had to end it there, trust me. The next chapter is nearly completed so it most definitely HAD to end where it did. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108988
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: AmesB Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

Well, I would have to say I think you should go back and do more. There was never any drama with these two which was kinda weird. I thought it would have been cool to see Lily's father come back in the picture and freak out over Edward taking over as daddy. Anything other then the puppies and rainbows that was always the case with them. You don't need extreme angst but the story needed an arc of some sort. It's up to you in the end though!

 



Author's Response:

You know, it's strange... you're definitely not the first to point it out that there's no angst in the story, but that's for a reason. Mostly because I feel like there are too many angst-filled stories already out there but also because I feel like writing my fanfiction is a way of escaping the angst in my life (and trust me, I have enough angst in my life) and into a world where everything actually can happen with no set backs...

 

but, yes, if I do the sequel, which I probably will, there will be some harder times for them... not gonna give anything away, but there will be.

 

Thanks for reviewing

Summary:

 

Best friends growing up, until she takes over Edward's life, leaving me alone with only one way to be apart of his life... from afar.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Angela
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2410 Read Count: 324
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: AmesB Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Obsession

Angela?!?! I was not expecting that!! This is going to be good. I can feel it. Should I be worried that your warning at the beginning made me excited and want to read it even more? LOL, oh well. I was thinking Bella was the crazy one and that he was with Alice the whole time I was reading. Weird. Keep it up and please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Oh sweetie this is just a one shot. I have thought about continuing it, but right now I have two other stories that I want to finish first.

And no, I don't find it weird at all, but then again, my husband was kinda freaked out that I wrote something like this lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: AmesB Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Obsession

I didn't even notice it was a one shot! Booooooo. You should totally think about making it more!



Author's Response:

I've been concidering it. But I want to finish my other stories first.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Summary:

Edward Cullen is the rich new kid in town, with a troubled past and stuck up parents. Bella Swan is the neglected daughter of the towns Chief of Police, who is used and abused by her older sister, Rosalie. In one weekend can Edward and Bella fall in love and right the wrongs in each other's lives?

Lots of humor, lemons and language. All human...all your usual suspects!

I'm trying something new and publishing this as a completed story. Reviews would still be appreciated! Thanks!!!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41796 Read Count: 11753
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 24 Oct 2010
Reviewer: AmesB Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

To be honest, I don't really like reading the same things in multiple POV's. I would rather have alternating chapters or something. With that said, I would LOVE to get a sequel or two. These two have just started and we need to see what happens next. I wanna know what Rosalie's reaction will be and whether all the girls at school will hate Bella for snatching Edward before school even started. I hope you decide to post. Thanks!



Author's Response:

The sequel is on it's way. Getting it ready for posting now. Should be up in the next day or so! Thank you for reviewing! :)