Reviews by cmitch
Summary: Past Featured Story

botm

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great story!!!!

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

hard to read but beautiful as well thank u

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

so good! Cant wait 4 more! Thank u

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

so beautiful! There are no words.....

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

that was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read...Thank you so very much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

MORE ETCHED hELL yES!

Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

edward bella

After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i liked it



Author's Response:

thanxs -mili

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

YES! What a great chapter!!!! Can't wait for more. Bravo!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

OMG cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

great chapter cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I love Charlie Swan! so glad that hes finally in the thick of things. Awesome chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

OMG!!!!! That chapter was sooooooooo good and the cliffy pure evil! love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

YAY! LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

how romantic ahhhhh how wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Barrel of a Gun : EPOV

awesome!

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

omg! cant wait 4 more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! =)

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love this story

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading bb! Glad you're enjoying it! =)

Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

GREAT Chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! =)

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG! that chapter blew me away! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm happy that you were surprised with the chapter and I promise to keep the chapters coming!

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing!!!

Blind Intentions won an Avant Garde Award! I found out on my birthday, which made it so much better considering the day before! So thank you to all that voted!

Chapter 19 is written, and in the process of being edited, added to...etc I can tell you Chapter 20 will absolutely see the return of Esme! Fun times a head!

Thank you for all of your support /w BI, it means the world!!!

Teaser for Ch 19: (un-beta’d)
On Nathan’s first day of kindergarten it was I who cried, not Bella. In fact, I distinctly remember being laughed at for being such a sap, but I couldn’t help it.

“Daddy.” Nathan pulled my hand down indicating that he wanted me to kneel down to his level.

“I’m right her,” I croaked out.

“It’s okay to be okay, it’s just kindergarten,” he laughed at me. His smile was infectious, and I knew I was over reacting, but he was my little boy. He wasn’t suppose to grow up.

“I know, you go have fun, I’ll be fine.” I waved him off with my hand.

“I’ll see you later.” He waved goodbye to me and Bella before marching straight into his classroom and to his seat.

When the classroom door shut I froze...that was it.

So now, on Nathan’s first day back to school, it was no surprise that I had turned back into a sap.

“Dad, are you going to cry again?” Nathan half whines, half laughed.

Love to all,
Kelly (SLM)

Summary: Past Featured Story

love

Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Love Will Bring You Back

love this story!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177663
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: cmitch Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I really am enjoying this story! Thank you for another great chapter.