I'm now reading this through a second time. And I've made commits on the full circle. What about his sexual abuse he does to her? when he was anger and took his rage out on her and cause to a shell of person. Well half the time she wants him to stop, nearly sobbing but yet let's him continue.  He abuses her sexually, try looking into that more. Sorry does stop it. 

Hi this is my 1st time review. Thank you for continuing Christian and Ana's story. This is much better then the original. Christian was an abuser and he has come a long way in his ability to love and be loved. Ana on the other had is still stupid. At every opportunity she goes against Christian, his need to protect her, care and her. She just doesn't get it. He couldn't protect his mom and that's something he can't get past. So why she continues to fight him on that, I feel you need to put her to the test on how she can take care of herself and doesn't need all his protection. They are a high profile couple so have her get kidnapped and knocked around or either raped or molested. As you can tell not a fan of Ana. Then let's see how Christian can handle what is his, mine, only me when someone else tries to take that away. I feel Ana has become the Dom. She manipulates Christian at every turn now when he is not ready. "No" to her means, I'm gonna keep badgering you until you comply. Because he just wants her to be happy at his own emotional expense. Like the crack baby, please don't give into that, he said did say no. Like the playroom, he already said he doesn't need it, but of course she pushes it even to the point of incorporating one in there family home. This just might push him back to his sadist behavior. She's so stupid. She doesn't listen  to him and it's really tearing him up inside. I'm also new to this BDSM and don't understand the relationship he had with Amy. I think you need to bring that out to exactly what they did during those 2 scenes. Christian is a very sexual being and he has them sit there just in there panties and he is all about pushing limits between pain and pleasure and she walked out wearing the silk sheet. For him to dismantle that room something more had to happen then just beat her. I know you write from Ana's point of view, but really Christan is more interesting. How about follow him some where and let's get his insite on a 1st person account. Maybe when he goes to the hospital or to Dr. John or how he feels during sex especially when he is feeling aggressive and reminds her of the safe word. She just takes what he gives her. she wants him stop but of course she doesn't.  Thank you again. I appLaude your commit to Christan and sucky Ana and making them better characters then the original. I hope you continue. Now I have to wait for every chapter but well worth the wait. 

While there at the apartment you should Have Ana ask what actually occurred (details)'between him and Amy. Still like to know how it's not a nonsexual incounter hen he has them naked and she was wrapped in the red satin sheet.  We know what happend when he was Elena.   Come on revisit it. He had 2 scenes with Amy. Had to be a little more going on. 

When do you update?