Reviews by longtobeme
tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am so glad that Bella will be changed in time to kick Aro, Alice and Edward's butts...a perfect trifecta!

Author's Response:

Yup, Bella's got vamp ass kicking on her agenda!

 

Thanks for reading hun!

 

T

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella is unique...how could her first day be complete without wolf reunions, too?

Author's Response:

You know Jake had to show up at some point! lol

 

Thanks for reading!

 

t

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can't wait for Jacob to see his yurt! I am sure that Emmett is going to tease him about those living accommodations! Thank goodness, Bella only broke a few of Jacob's bones in her hug. I love this misfit family...Cullens, Volterra fugitives, Peter & Charlotte and now a shapeshifter. :)

Author's Response:

They are all one big happy family.  lol

Thanks for reading hun!

 

t

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Vampire Bella is a little scary! Jasper better keep a hand covering his "jewels" while Bella is angry. Jasper may become "Jasperella" if he is not careful!:)

Author's Response:

Yep, she may just take it right off next time! lol

 

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Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Jasper needs to return to Bella and the Cullens ASAP.

Author's Response:

He's working on it!

 

Thanks for reading.

 

t

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow! Amazonian girl werewolves! :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, you know, 'cause girls rock!

Thanks for reading!

 

t

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, this was an entertaining chapter and so much estrogen was flying around the Cullen's home, not to mention dog stink! I love the mental picture that your description of the fight club girls created. The next chapter should be even more entertaining. This is such a great break from the angst swirling over the presence and threat of Richard. :)

Author's Response:

Yes, there was indeed a lot going on in this one. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

 

t

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Jasper may be the "Major", but he should never forget that Bella has the power to zap his "mojo"! :)
I am going to miss reading more updates when this story concludes. I really enjoy reading the adventures that you create for your Bella and Jasper.

Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for following my little fic. I shall miss writing it for you guys!

Yup, and Bella sure did put the Major in his place! LOL

 

t

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: C31 Haven, Lies and Centaurs

Jasper is just exhausted and his feelings are confused. Of course, he will forgive Bella and make a wise decision about his responsibilities as the "Promised One" after he rests and clears his head. I think the jealousy that Jasper feels toward Eric is hilarious. I am assuming that Edward is not meant to be Bella's mate in this story. I get the feeling that Jasper is more than just a special warrior for Bella...he is her future husband, too. I wonder if this is another secret that Bella is holding from Jasper. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a great adventure story. :)

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the story, look out for part two, coming soon. I wouldnt assume anything, just saying, there is still so much that needs to be said. Thanks for the review :)

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me

Wow! I read both chapters and I feel as if I just stepped off a rollercoaster ride! Please update soon!:)

Author's Response:

Lol Thank you, I like to keep my readers on their toes ha ha

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Valentines For The Enamored

This is a great chapter! I love Edward's fear that Rose may somehow know that he has Bella's Little Mermaid panties!

Author's Response:

those panties are going to haunt him forever...LOL   Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

I am nervously waiting for EPOV on his dinner and meeting with Tanya that was shown on television and the resulting circumstances of his confession to Bella.

Author's Response:

i'm anxious for Edward's meltdown afterward...that should be fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

Great chapter! Of course, reading Edward's mind in this chapter makes knowing the "Tanya Publicity Spin" that is about to hit the fan so much more cringe-worthy!:)

Author's Response:

he's kind of an a-hole when Bella's not around.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

I admire your descriptive restraint and I love reading Edward's POV! Christmas night is going to permanently scar Edward!

I can't believe that Edward dove into Bella's lingerie basket and then stole the Little Mermaid panties! How will he explain possessing this clothing item if Bella finds them? :)

Author's Response:

it was a little pervy.  lol.   The unwritten logic says that Bella has assumed that Rose found those panties and destroyed them.  I want to see how Edward explains his way out of having them in his possession.  lol..  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Resolutions For The New Year

Well, the sh*t should hit the fan in the next chapter or so! :)

Author's Response:

I can't remember how many...but soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Making Plans For A New Start

I would love a Thanksgiving outtake from the past that included Emmett. I loved Emmett's explanation to Edward of Bella's F word slipup in church!:)

Author's Response:

the one i'm working on, unfortunately, doesn't include emmett...well maybe a little.  sorry...BUT if I can get it to work it should be funny.  THanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Calm Before The Storm

I loved reading Edward's impression of the church service that he attended with Bella. This story is such a fun read! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you like it.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

If anyone doubts Edward's sincere feelings for Bella before his disclosure to Rose, all is clear now! How embarassing for Rose to know Edward is a virgin! No wonder, Emmett and Charlie's discovery of this information caused so much disturbance on Easter weekend! Holidays with the Swans may destroy Edward's nerves! I can't imagine how Edward will handle Father's Day! :)

Author's Response:

Emmett and Rose have known since chapter 14/15 of both stories...and Charlie knows now...so ..yeah, poor Edward.  I think he's just resigned to the fact in V&V that everyone in both their families know.  It shouldn't be a big deal...but where would be the fun in that?   lol   .  THanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

I loved reading Edward's reaction to Emmett calling him a "virgin" at the Rocky Horror Picture Show! :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Just posted 18...now off to more V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Prelude To Aspen

The Brangelina brood is like the Kate plus 8 brood ... I can only imagine the chaos of herding those kids plus the paps through the airport!:)

Author's Response:

you got that right.  i personally think BOTH families like the attention...media whores...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Long Awaited Reunion

I am curious to read EPOV on how he nearly destroys Bella's trip to Los Angeles! Great chapter, as ALWAYS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!:)

Author's Response:

You can kind of see how he will talk himself into that. oh well.  Thanks!  Merry Christmas to you too!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Setback To A Full Recovery

Edward's mental self-flagellation is worse than when he torments Alice with his need to assume guilt for everything that happens to Bella. He exhausts the other characters, himself and even us readers!
That said...I love this story!
:)

Author's Response:

it's like Catholic guilt....lol.  He's definitely in love with the right girl.. Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Warm Love For The Impatient

Tanya needs a kick in the arse... just my opinion. :)

Author's Response:

i agree.  Rose would probably do it if they lived closer....just sayin.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Crash And Burn

Reading EPOV on trying to break up with Bella to save her from the media madness is even sadder than reading BPOV regarding E's behavior. Luckily, we know that things work out!

Author's Response:

yes.  He is such a mental case. lol Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

I loved this chapter from EPOV! He really overthinks every situation. Thank goodness, Bella has such an unusual sense of humor to balance Edward's paranoia.

Author's Response:

glad you liked it ...Thanks very much!

Summary:

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Edward Cullen is a hematologist by day and a serial killer by night. Because of mysterious circumstances surrounding the death of his mother, Edward is raised by Carlisle Cullen, legendary former F.B.I. agent. Sensing his dark tendencies at an early age, Carlisle molds Edward into a weapon for justice. Edward believes he is unfeeling and emotionless, so he hides behind the facade of a happy-go-lucky family man. Bella, a recovering alcoholic with a dark past, wants to know the real Edward. Can she ever face the monster within in him without being devoured herself? Will a new serial killer in town give Edward the most exciting game of his life?

 


 

Thanks to my beta Twimarti for her superb help in getting this fic ready! This story is a slight Dexter crossover, in storyline and character behaviors. No characters from Dexter will appear. All pairings are canon. Story genre is Horror/Romance/Mystery  Warning This story is going to be very violent, and in a later chapter will have a non-sensational depiction of rape. NC-17 for a reason, but will have a HEA.

Banner by me and the awesome blinkie is by Betti Gefecht

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42561 Read Count: 6949
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 ** Women **

I am so excited to see where this story goes! It is on my favorites list and I plan to continue reading!:)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: ** Disguises **

Great chapter! I wonder if Edward will slice and dice Mike next?

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ** The Stalker **

This story is one of my favorites because you've included a dark and ironic humor to Edward's attraction to Bella. I wanted to laugh when Bella saw the dark figure in the backyard who began approaching the house as Edward whispered on the phone to her! She is completely distracting him and I love it!

Even the darkest and creepiest stories are better for a little dry humor!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 **Heroic**

I am so eager to find out what Edward will be telling Bella regarding his "work" and stalker tendencies. I am becoming fond of this quirky Edward.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Obsession

Thanks for EPOV on his stalking activities! I hope that the sickening crunch Edward hears is not a head injury or spinal injury for Bella or himself. Edward has enough head games of his own!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

great update...now I am so curious to find out what Demetri is if he has blood! Bella is a tough little human to face off against Demetri and then to even spit on him!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

We’ll have more soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

~Jells and Tyggy

Summary: Past Featured Story

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It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC. R&R.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37619 Read Count: 5184
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2010 Updated: 12 Dec 2010
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Is This What it Feels Like?

I just came across your story and read these first chapters. Your story is great and I am adding it to my favorites list. I can't wait to read how Edward and Bella's first conversation goes. :)

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17466
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter

Loved it! I plan to read this again and again and again...a fun and fiesty little indulgence!:)

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40705
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Greatness

Wow, I am so glad that Bella spoke up and stood up to Aro and Charlie. I hope that she can put an end to Aro's insanity.

Great update!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Want

I just finished reading this story and adding it to my favorites! This is such an intriguing story and I can't wait for another chapter! Surely, Edward will run with Bella to find Charlie. Bella has already proven that she won't survive alone to get out of the forest.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Running

This is an amazing chapter! I felt as if I were on the motorcycle, too! I hope the helicopter crashes with Rose and Emmett!:)

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Charlie

Thanks for the update! Wow, Bella has nobody to rely on for help except Edward. Too bad EandB did not kill Charlie! I can't wait to find out more about Edward's past and what plan Edward has for Bella's next move in this adventure! :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Red

Great chapter! I was so excited to see the update! Bella can't die! Also, where is that berry that Bella and Edward are seeking? I think it is good that Bella told Edward about Carlisle's behavior at the Lab! Definitely, returning to the Lab is not an option for Bella.:)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Fury

Wow! I cannot believe that the key was planted in Bella's body. Edward knew the whole time! This is sick! I hope that Edward is not dead.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Born

Wow, this is difficult to read, I cannot believe that Edward is dead! I love this story and I am eager to see what Aro has in store for Bella.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Cute

I loved this chapter! Bella is becoming a fighter and survivor! I loved how creepy and helpful Eleazar turned out to be!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Ribbon

EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Fate

I am ready for Edward to come back!

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79499
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love that Edward came to help Bella.:)

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2674049
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

I have just spent the past 4 days reading this story from the beginning up to the present chapter. Your use of SM's characters in this story is fabulous. I've read and enjoyed other EdandBella mob stories, but not stand out quite like this one does. I love the Brooklyn accents and the drama of Edward's business associations. The descriptions of the wives, girlfriends and various extended family relations is great. I love the moment when Edward went to purchase the flat screen for Dr. Smith's office and when Edward went in a store and greeted his "uncle's cousin's wife's ...." the family tree that preceded the Italian name Maria was hilarious! There is so much about this story that I love...Harry Potter World, Frontierland and the Wild W est shootout...with our Brooklyn Edward's reaction was classic! I loved how Edward can't seem to take Bella out to eat without getting into trouble if he sees someone look at her body. I am so happy with following this story and I plan to reread it once it is concluded!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Great chapter and I am happy that Jacob is gone. I could not stand him in this story.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

I loved this chapter! Welcome to the family, Santino Anthony Cullen! How did Bella go along with Santino for her son's name...Italian Mafia...hehehe. At least, they will call him Sonny (cute). I can't wait for Bella, Edward and Sonny to get home and try to get used to being a famiy of three. This should be amusing.
Edward is the ultimate husband...even when Bella is in labor and with her water broken, Edward is ready to make love! Yeah! How could Bella not "redeem" Edward's fake BJ coupons? He is just so loveable!

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think Edward is making progress and he will earn Bella's trust. Definitely, Edward needs to watch his dad because something is up.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! There is a lot of interesting mystery surrounding Isabella and how she came to be a captive. I am curious to see what happens next. I am adding this story to my favorites.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't think Edward has any idea of what difficulty he is about to face for harboring a kidnapped teen whose past is a total mystery to him. This is going to be a nightmare for both of them.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, this is a little scary, but I hope that you will include BPOV as this story develops. This will give us readers an insight into her personality and background. Also, it would be helpful to see how she plans to react to her situation.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Pedophilic Pervert is a good description of Edward at this moment. I can't imagine what he thinks is going to happen, but he should forget rainbows and lollipops...Bella is being terrorized.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

At least, Bella did not try to kill herself in the bathroom. I have a feeling that she will inflict injury to herself if this goes much further.

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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope that she bites his sack off!

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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think that Bella's POV would be very helpful for this story.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Too bad Bella did not take a razor and slit Edward's throat when he passed out!

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Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward needs to find a balance with his conscience and what he is doing. Great chapter!

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Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! This is a whole new side to Edward and I am pleased that his sincerity is believable to Bella! I can't wait to see where this new level of trust leads our couple!

Just Breathe by jtmd24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when the man you've loved for 6 years starts to change right before your eyes? Bella is forced to question her heart when the black sheep of the family returns. In the end, will she put her trust in the right person?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106360 Read Count: 20213
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Battered and Bruised

Alice is a scary mean girl because she pretends to be so sweet. I hope that Bella gets to kick Alice's butt. :)

Author's Response:

LOL yes she is!  Next chapter will show if what you want comes true!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: As I Lay Dying

I loved this chapter! This is the first story I've read where Bella is changed and doesn't know it...even when she wakes up! I don't think Edward needs to worry about "protecting" Bella from Alice. Yeah! Bella is gonna kick Alice's butt!:)

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Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Raise a Little Hell

I am so happy that Edward and Bella are wearing their matching shirts, drinking O negative blood and watching TrueBlood together. :)

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533692
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck

Thanks for this wonderful chapter! As a mother of a little boy, I know how hard it can be to have quality time with my husband. This is so important for them. I love the trust, fidelity and respect your Edward and Bella have in this story for their relationship!

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

I loved the first chapter! Edward and Bella are hysterical and I love how Edward cherishes Bella in his own "Jersey" way! Your EPOVs on family life are so much fun to read. Edward's interactions with Sonny are going to be fun to follow. I have a feeling that we will be learning many details of Edward's life at Sonny's age as flashbacks when Edward is dealing with Sonny's "growing pains".

Damion sounds like a loveable little brother. It is clear that he is going to drive Edward crazy, too. I love the way Edward freaked out when Damion wanted to wear Bella's heeled red boots and had Bella's lipstick! Kids are so unpredictable and there is no "how-to" book for each child. Watching Edward and Bella roll with family life is great!

I love this story. Thanks for a sequel!

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Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

Great chapter! I love how tough Edward is in handling "business"!

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Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

Good chapter! I think it is important for Edward and Bella to discuss Aro...he is never going to recover and the Feds are hovering. I think Bella will agree.

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Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

It was long and intense, but I loved reading this chapter. Edward had to deal with the demons from his nightmare and clear the air with Bella on his insecurities regarding Aro. They made a lot of progress after they calmed down and let out some of their pent up anxieties and fears. Clearly, they need to reunite with their children and find another place to live. I really enjoy your writing style. I loved QUIET STORM and I am loving this story, too.

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Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

I loved this chapter. As with the two prior chapters, all of these things needed to happen. We need to see things in the POVs of Edward, Bella and Aro. I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner meeting! It cracks me up that Bella cut her hair! Talk about FEISTY! Also, I am glad that Bella finally understood what Edward was talking about with Aro's feelings. Bella now can see things clearly. She will always love Edward and be his, but this moment in the hospital was a reaffirmation of their love.

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Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

I loved this chapter! Bella knows how to get what she wants and Edward needs! I am so excited to get 2 chapters so close together! You are spoiling us readers with this gift!

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Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Great chapter! I think Carlisle may kill Esme when he finds out that Esme put a hit on Candace!

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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Weather the Storm

Wow! Aro is passive-aggressive in his behavior with Edward. This is a doomed relationship between these two. I can't help but think that Aro is going to do something to Bella in a spontaneous moment and Edward will kill him.

Once Carlisle finds out about Esme's involvement in Candice's death, all H*E*L*L* will break loose!

Love this chapter, as always!

Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime…mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed. –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: To Read, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125792 Read Count: 33645
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just came across this story and I am HOOKED! I am adding it to my favorites. I plan to quickly read the chapters posted to get up to the latest post!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward is so sweet and I love that he calls Bella "Angel"!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think it is hilarious that E,Em and R caught Bella sitting on her front porch having a "conversation" with her dead hubby! Thank goodness, Edward came over and the confrontation with R and EM happened. Bella really needs all of the information laid out in front of her. She has been on her own for 4years and she is protective of her daughter.

Edward is clearly a good guy and he deserves a fair chance at a relationship with Bella and her daughter.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think it is good for Bella to feel a little bit of possessive jealousy regarding Edward...he should have made it a PRIORITY to introduce Emmett's lil sis to Bella at the reception.

Also, I think it is GREAT for Bella to be asked for a date by Dr. Whitlock. She needs to see that she is attractive and datable!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so happy that Edward wants an "exclusive" relationship with Bella and in his mind, they are already "dating"! I hope that Billy makes a good recovery and it is time for Jake's sisters to get involved with helping their dad.

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am so happy that Edward is helping Bella with Billy's medical expenses. Embry's little revelation to Bella was an unwelcome shock! Thankfully, she dismissed it and moved on.

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow! Bella is really putting up with some petty crap at work! She needs a break!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have a sneaky suspicion that little girl may be Edward's daughter!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am so excited that Bella is planning a special overnight date with Edward. The big girls' night is great, too.

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm proud of Bella for her strength. She is doing the right thing. I think she was classy in how she told Edward how much his absence affected Jax and her. Also, it was so important for Bella to have her own room and to tell Edward that his actions did have consequences...he decimated their attempt at a romantic relationship. She is a mother and now a friend to him. She has to protect Jax and herself in this situation.

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think the meeting with Edward is going to be hilarious!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well, thank goodness, Edward and Bella are on the same page for their relationship!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am so excited that Edward and Bella have a date for New Year's Eve!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Excellent chapter! I am so happy that Edward and Bella are getting married!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad that Bella had a chance to send a message back to the Reservation for Jacob's friends to stay out of her personal business!

Bella doesn't owe those people any explanations for how she lives her life.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so excited for Edward, Bella, Chelsea and Jax to celebrate their first Christmas together!

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Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

A perfect Christmas Eve!

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Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Twin girls...perfect!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is a wonderful story! I am so happy that Edward and Bella have a son
to add to their family.

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A young woman sets out on her first adventure in the big world. She thought her father had prepared her for everything but she holds the key to much more than she ever thought, and now she sings for every vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34870 Read Count: 9882
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This sounds like a fascinating story. I added it to my favorites and I am excited to read along as you write!

Thank you for sharing this story with us!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading.

Watching Her by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He
watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the
doors forever? Daily Updates. AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95686 Read Count: 35349
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Belle

This sounds like a great story! I've added it to my favorites along with the sequel. I plan to read this before I begin the sequel!

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77591
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  I hope you'll like what's to come!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I cannot wait to see how Edward reacts to Bella's note.

Author's Response:

I hope you'll like it!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward's reaction is hilarious!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow! Could the DR. CULLEN be the same one who is working with Edward?

I am so excited with this story!

Author's Response:

The one and only, of course!  I'm glad you like my story so far, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love how much Edward and Bella are thinking of each other. Jason has no chance now...Bella has written him off for good.

Author's Response:

Poor Jason.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So, Edward's dad is coming down with the Spanish influenza...

Author's Response:

Yeah, it had to happen. 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so happy that Bella wrote to Edward and was so honest with him. He really needed that letter. I hope that he is able to write back and tell her about his father's death.

Author's Response:

I like the way one of my other reviewers put it.  Bella pulled an Edward on Edward!  But she came to her senses a lot faster.  (Of course, she is a girl, so she's a little quicker!)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love Edward's response to Bella!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So...this is how the cousins learn of Edward's "penpal"!

Author's Response:

Edward had to tell his cousins, the rest of the story couldn't happen had he not told them.  It's key to the whole plot line.