Reviews by SeralynsMommy
Summary:

What happens in the months after Ana is released from the hospital after her confrontation with Jack Hyde?  A glimpse into the life of the Greys before and after Teddy's arrival.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Jose Rodriquez/Anastasia Steele
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90526 Read Count: 39613
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Apr 2014
Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ok see now after reading this chapter my opinion has changed. I agree with Taylor that the amount of attention Tina paid as opposed to Storm is what would have me hiring her.

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't know why but I like Storm more than Tina. She seems like she's one of those dull nannies that thinks everything has to be perfect while Storm seems like he'll be the fun one that likes to play with the kids. I don't know why I feel that way I just do.

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmmm wonder what was wrong. No temperature or I would have said an ear infection. No colic so maybe he just wanted snuggled.

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yep that's always the issue with breast fed babies, getting them on the bottle. They'll just have to out stubborn him like Ana said.

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I really like your story and I hope you come back to it soon. It's nice to have a sweet one to read without the drama. I also like that you dealt with Hyde. Of course there's always room for some drama. Like Elena showing up even if its just for a second or finding out there was more to why Linc bailed Hyde out in the first place. But this is your story. I hope everything with your original work is going well. I'd like to read it when it comes out if it hasnt already. 😀

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember that Rh shot. I'm a negative blood type but the hubby is positive so I had to have it. As for her getting cold its most likely the weather. I was extremely hot throughout my whole pregnancy because I was pregnant during the summer. I know Christian doesn't want to look into his birth parents but for medical reasons he needs to. I love it so far!! On to the next chapter!! Also I noticed you have this listed as incomplete but haven't updated in three months almost four. I hope all is ok with you!!

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yep I remember cocoa butter!! Made me want a chocolate bar!! Lol. The gossip rags suck but they do provide great entertainment! I especially love when they make hugely outrageous statements and I have a great laugh!! Lol great lemon!! 

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ugh no Kate!! No to Asher Grey!! Lol. I like how you had them come up with Theodore. 

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:D loved it!! Especially Christian dancing with Sophie!!

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah I forgot Christian's birthday and Father's Day would be three days apart.

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm routing for the male nanny just because I think it would make the story more interesting! Lol. Imagine Mia getting a good eyeful!! Heehee.

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences

I'm here!! Lol. I got that message from fanfiction. I checked Wordpress but didn't find you so maybe I looked wrong (Wordpress confuses me) so I may just stay here. I'm not sure how to know you updated unless all I had to do was favorite you and the story (done and done)? Told you I'd follow where you went cause I love this story. Let me know when you get Wordpress up (I follow bronze goddess there so it may be easier for me) and I'll check it out too! 

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I don't know if you succeeded in removing her or whatever, but I haven't found a fanglover 2012. There's a 12 and a 201202. I also didn't see a story by that name. I was going to review it and warn people it's stolen. ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going for a swim and then walking into the wrong shower sets up for an interesting start for our favourite couple. One-shot.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5644 Read Count: 1844
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 10 Sep 2014
Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok so I totally disagree about this being for Mia and Ethan and not Christian and Ana. This was perfect for them!! Loved this every word of the way. That's just my opinion. I think this is Ana and Christian all over, the arrogant prick! Lol he was very arrogant and she was always wondering why he wanted her in the originals so I think you got that down right. As for the rest that's why it's called an AU fanfic. Means you provided the story while borrowing the characters. To each their own though. By the way this is Ashley Mercer, I commented on your post from Facebook about this story so decided to give it a read. I'll be reading whatever else you've got too!! :)