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She could love me. She could even hate me. She could loathe my guts but she was not allowed to forget me. Love and hate, both can pave the path to obsession, especially when the thin line that separates them begins to blur. Warning: Dark!
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122715 Read Count: 44804
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I am really enjoying your version of the story. Christian is indeed a basket case, which you clearly demonstrate.
And Ana has pride and backbone. I am enjoying your portrayals and their interactions well beyond the original story.
Thank you for exploring the darkness, but I do hope Ana start to shed some light into Christian's soul soon.
Kindest regards, and thanks again for your efforts.
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Another good chapter, thank you.
Incedently, I thank my wife for introducing me to your story, though I still reserve judgment on her looniness ;)
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Yes, we are a couple, and I appreciate her looniness.
I also appreciated the new chapter, thank you.
I am still very much hopeful that Ana will shine some of her light into Christians very dark heart, Lord knows he's had nothing but rain in there for untold years, from the sound of things.
I am glad that Ana is awakening him to the reality that not all the world chases money, a concept foreign to him it seems.
Well done, as usual, looking forward to more.
Thank you for sharing your vision.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Happy Birthday. I had nearly given up hope, checked and found #26 waiting for me. Happy day!
I am enjoying your characters as usual, thank you for writing down the delightfully wicked scenarios your mind went with when you read the original story and wished the author had taken a differnet direction.
I appreciate you!
Sir
Date: 08 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I was very happy to find a new chapter, thank you. You are wonderful at describing the psychology between these two, but I still wish Christian had at least one gentlemanly bone in his body.
It is quite possible to be Dominant and not be such a prick, I hope Christian figures that out before I end up hating the poor guy ;)
You are a very talented writer, looking forward to more...
Sir Forest