Reviews by LRK860
The Lost by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

Bella Swan was not normal. She had been born with the gift of seeing the dead, but to her it was a curse. She had sworn off her abilities as she returned to her hometown to live out her final year of high school in an attempt at being normal, but nothing is normal when you are the one hope at redemption for the spirit of a lost boy. *paranormal romance & drama* beta'd


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115308 Read Count: 9384
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Emmett is being cautious.  Bella broke into his home and he's heard from people (probably Kate) that she's crazy.  That struck me as funny, Emmett is the town freak and now I guess Bella is in competition for that crown.  Now maybe we can finally, finally hear Emmett's theory.

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Who's following Bella?  Is it Mike?  I hope Emmett spills his theory soon. 

Does anyone know who makes the rules for ff.net?  Shouldn't they realize that they can have parental control settings so the kiddies don't read anything they're not supposed to?  I know they do this once in a while, but I'm just a  reader, I don't write anything so I don't know who the messages are from.

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Now I know that Emmett is clueless.  He's like so many grieving people that get taken in by *psychics*.  Tanya seems to have some sort of gift, but not enough to actually be of any help.  In this chapter it's almost like she uses the little bit of gift she has and misinterprets it. I wonder what she's been telling Emmett all these years?  His theory doesn't match with Edward's account of his relationship with Rosalie.  So now it's off to find Rosalie for Bella, (I hope) she's the one with a lot of the answers that could solve this mystery. 

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Imaginative start to a story.  I love it.  I wonder how Alice and Rose will act around their own children.  They both have hearts of stone. 

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35366
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It was popcorn Edward was going to say right?  lol  Angela is really gross.  I hope she is shown the door right quick! I also hope Bella will let Edward explain their relationship.  I think that particiular conversation needs to be had.  You've thrown us for a loop here...Carlisle running for office on an anti-drug campain?  How very daring and short-sighted of him.  Does he really think he can pull this off?  Or does he think he can secretly keep his drug operation going because of his high government position?  Or does he think he can frame Edward and gain control of the company?  What is his end-game?  Looking forward to your next update......Can I dare hope for sooner rather than later?  You tell such a great tale................

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This Bella rocks!  She's going to give Carlisle and Charlie a run for their money.  I love how she ignores them.  And I'm wondering why Charlie is following her around.  So glad she knows the truth about Edward.  James is an idiot.  But we still don't know why he hates his loving sister.  Glad Bella's done with him but I don't think he's done with her.  Trouble, that's what he and Angela are going to be.

 

p.s.  I'm so sorry for the trouble you've had on FF.  I'm so glad you chose to keep going with this story here.  I love this story and it's a favorite of mine.

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What Carlisle and Charles don't realize is that Bella is on to them.  She sees them for what they are.  I also don't trust that James all of a sudden has his sister's best interest at heart.  I can't wait for Edward and Bella to really start talking and getting to know each other.  I'm so glad Edward is cured. He's probably going to be so sweet to Bella it will make her head spin.  lol   I also haven't forgotten about that selfish, spoiled, drug addicted Angela.  I just know she's lurking somewhere and will pounce at an inopportune moment.

 

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What the hell was in that wine?  How come it made Bella so sick?  Did those rotten Uncles' have someone taint it?  To keep Bella away?  Thank goodness she made it before he signed the papers.  Now he can work on making that wonderful dream come true. 

Reviewer: LRK860 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thank-you for the quick update. I think James is a day late and a dollar short with his warning. lol I hope this is the start of B&E's romance. They both deserve love. Nice twist withEsme.