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AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Outstanding beginning! Can see where you could take this in several different directions. And as someone who works third shift and sees a lot of the Late late show, I am very interested on where you take this. Keep it up.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Bella's inner fan girl is in heaven. I say take the big girl panties and throw them where no one can find them and admit to being a felony kidnapper.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Man can anyone else feel that tension. Keep it up!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Allrighty then. Just enought to go hummm. What is the Bella/Jane/Alec issue, but then a very hot-t photoshoot. And then everyone is at the edges of our seats waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
My name....my name....nope can't remember it. Oh yes...its Belward.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hummm Edward tied up. Yep my brain froze there. YES YES I'll be your girlfriend! Keep up the excellent story.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
A perfect chapter which covered a large amount of time, but was still very interesting, thowing in several little snippets of information. Then those evil seven little words that caused such a cliff hanger. Two thumbs up!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh yes...Can I run to my door to see if Edward is there? (sighs) Nope you stole him again. Keep up the outstanding work.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Nothing more sexy that a man unwrapping a gift for you or from you while you are wrapped in his arms. I hope you keep everything a fresh and interesting as you have so far.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Pool.....Water....Edward....darn wait I want to go back there. Scary scene with James but every story needs the tension so okay I'm ready. Wait no I'm back at the wet Edward in the pool.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Yes, Edward again with the swimming. Well sort of. What on earth is going on with Esme. And another cliffhanger. You enjoy doing this to us don't you.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Caius Ferguson how funny! And the twists just keep coming. Excellent use of modern techology (TMZ) and then the sweet revenge over the air waves. And thank you again we are back with a wet Edward in the pool.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oww. Cant Caveward go off on the psychotic one also known as James? The script arrives. I absolutely loved the end of this chapter. What a perfect way to keep the show involved in the story. Did the tie tree ever get delivered?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
And the new movie role is in place. Excellent. DUM DUM DUM Charlie has arrived in the building. Ruh roh.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Not going to interrogate him my foot, that would be a perfect outtake the dad interrogation. Or the first scene from Edwards POV. No no no James is back.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
James and Jane darn Bella just can't catch a break. And Jasper is a what...oh wait till Alice finds out. The Twister known as Alice will knock him for a loop. And Perfect way for the first I love yous...awwww moment.
Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Excellent start to what could be a very different twist on any story I've ever read.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Interesting, wondering where this will go. Keep it up.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Very good descriptions on what a captive slave would be worried about while also staying in character with their normal personalities.
Author's Response:
Thank you. This is my first try at writing anything; I am grateful for your praise. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I loved the added entry of "the 15 year old boy in me couldn't helpd but to snicker at that" it added the perfect counterpoint to what was meant to be an intense chapter. Way to go!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
You did a good job of showing some character growth even while they are captives.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter, I believe that the way you chose to only tell how Edward heard and understood what was said to him from James was extremely more expressive than if you had written pages upon pages of direct quotes from James to Edward. This displayed Edward's mindset the best.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Autopilot and protecting Bella...perfect description for what could have been the name of this chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
It took me a few minutes to breathe after reading this. The only word I can think to describe it was Powerful. And my poor review could not even compare so I will end it here.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
FINALLY! A guardian angel stepped forward.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Outstanding the easiest way to fool and enemy is fool a friend.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
And everyone is in and pulling off the plan. Perfect!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Knives. Guns. Ammo. Rope. Tape. A crossbow and arrows. Tranquilizer gun with darts. Billy clubs. Kevlar vests. Night vision goggles. Flashlights. Explosives. Miscellaneous junk Dear lord be glad they are not totally lost and that they are only wanting their freedom.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Weird thought, I wonder if this plan they used was the original plan or the abuse by James called down the full wrath of Edward. Hummmm.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Rambo Rose and Sheriff Alice makes you wonder what Bella had been if she had been there. But as always Bella is the heart of the group.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Rose's perfect revenge but it was probably the perfect revenge for all of the captives but Rose's was the only on brash enough to do it that openly.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
My Goodness...a chapter that had everything. Music to heal a mind, body and soul and then THE phone call. And the cliff hanger even though I wanted to scream no!! (Glad I just found the story and the next chapter was already posted) Keep going.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Perfect the emotional reconnection phone call and then to lighten the mood a second. Keep up the outstanding work.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
YES! HUNKWARD is here! All you ladies breathe with me.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Important chapter showing the care of the rest of the camp.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Ahh new people...wonder who?
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Tissues I need tissues. On another note, you might want to do a couple outtakes of the parents (Carlisle, Esme and Charlie's) points of view of the phone call and the first time they see Edward and Bella,
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
A small part of the story coming out, that should help with the healing.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Love, music and another step in healing and in the last four words a trophy!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Dang it here comes the Edward we all sometimes want to choke. Overthinkward.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Man so much in one chapter, a great mother son interaction. Edward Bella interaction and others. Then the perfect ending without it being too much a cliffy.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Great chapter, returning the rings. It was something that should be its own chapter but a great addition of showing where they had surivied.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
WHAT A TWIST. K I'm following where are you going to go with this one.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
NO no nononono. Maybe that is enough...nope here's some more nonononono. James can't win. Why do you torture me with cliffy's like that.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Man that was another twist that I was not expecting. Laurent is tugging on the old heart strings.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
YES! Second plan averted. Phhhew. Darn now I'm all caught up. 30 chapters 30 reviews. Thank you again for the lovely story and I hope that you will update soon so we can continue on this journey and keep going you have a talent that I am glad that you share with us. The least I can do is review to a story that I really enjoy and I do read a lot, (probably too much just between the two of us). I will be looking forward to an update soon.
Author's Response:
You are definitely a reading machine! I am so glad you are enjoying the story. I'm having a little difficulty with the next chapter, and this will be a really busy week for me, but I will try to get it to you as soon as I can. If i can get on a roll, I'll post it tonight, so cross your fingers.
Ya know something? When I first started this story, I thought it would be about 12-15 chapters, but Edward had a lot to say.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Yes everyone is still going to be together to help because I think that they all need each other's help to heal.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Once again a chapter showing how families are sometimes made and not born. Even if they are made in the worst possible ways. Keep up the work and enjoy your company visit.
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I just found your story today and I have to say the idea behind your story has caught my attention. I leave reviews on stories that truely catch my attention so that the author knows that people are truely enjoying their writing. Usually I just write comments down about the story as I go along so I hope that you understand what I'm going on about. So here goes Chapter 1: Excellent start even with all the complications of setting up the scene you still manage to provide excellent character descriptions and interactions. And Angela as a best friend, I always wanted her to have a larger role in the series. Fitting Forks Washington is the Vampire town. Okay I see that the vampires are going to be different from the series, thank you for daring to change things around. Even a new side of Charlie, very forward, go Charlie. Exceptional beginning and I look forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Wow! That means a lot to me. I appreciate it very much. I'm happy that you're enjoying the story. Truthfully, I didn't think anyone would.lol
Thank you
~jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Ha ha, even the advertisments described are great. Can you see Charlie in your head dragging off the bad vamps to the poky? LOL. At least Bella isn't passing out every time she sees or smells blood I always thought that was a little dramatic. Yea Yea everyone cheer for Dr. C is here. And you know she wanted to scream 5 more minutes!
I look forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you. I actually will describe Vampire jail and how the vamps are "contained" since simple jail cells wouldn't do the trick, but that won't be until a later chapter...perhaps ch 15 or 16.
I love Dr. C, you'll see more of him. lol
Thank you so much
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
And I'm back again....enjoy the review...
I love the Charlie and Bella interactions, they are just so accurate to a father/teenage daughter relationship. Ugh it's the first day of school for her and we all know how that sucks. Has the lamb been led to the lion pit? Ahhh Emmett is there, that would be the perfect first "good" vampire she could have met. So not only the normal first day jitters but having to worry about blood banks delivering I'm sure Bella is about to have a heart attack. Oh no that is a nightmare a purring, lustfilled Vampire Mike. RUN RUN Quickly. Caught between that rock and the hard place, Tanya and Victoria. Tomato juice (ahhhh I just had to give my dog a bath with it he challenged a skunk but he only weighs in at 5 pounds and the skunk sprayed him) No no no cliffy! Lucky for me the next chapter is already posted!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I LOVE all your reviews!
I adore Charlie! Glad you like. First day of school, not so good for Bella. But it'll get better once Edward gets there. lol
Oh wow! Your dog got skunked. OH MY...
Thanks again!
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
And I'm back...or never left...however you want to view it. Chapter 4...dun dun dun and we countinue from the evil cliffy. Is this who we think it is? YES YES!!! He's there velvet voice and all. And everyone flashbacks to movie scenes of ballet studios in their minds eyes. But you've added a new twist. Edward is the one with the upper hand this time. And you know the original Edward always wanted to growl at Mike to show just who was dominant. And what Emmett always wanted Gym class with Bella. No don't let Tanya harm Charlie and Renee. Ha ha back fire on Tanya I don't think that Edward could ever Hate Bella.
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
You're totally right, Edward could NEVER hate Bella, ever. And you'll see why...that is unless you've read chapter 5 already, which I think you have. lol It's because they are true mates, Bella and Edward.
Yeah, Edward is quite dominat in here, actually most male vamps are in this story.
Thanks for commenting and reading! =)
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
On to Chapter 5...Your bloody hand got licked by a vampire not much else worse could have happened on your first day hun. Yes yes genius tell them about being threatened. Interesting new twist on the Thrist and using main characters on it. Keep going. How did Alice not seen what was happening between Tanya and Bella? We know that Emmett is not going to back down from any dare, eat a carrot stick not a problem. Awe jeez she gets the nerve to tell and bam, slammed into a wall. What kind of luck is this? Edward drove the Aston to school, who's he trying to impress, lol. Well at least Edward's not fighting and running away for a week.
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Thank you =) The vamps in my story don't have any special powers, no mind reading and seeing the future etc. However, you'll find out something very interesting about hybrids and why they are forbidden in ch 12, that is if you are still enjoying the story and continue reading. lol
Thanks again. I appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Back again sorry didn't mean to fall asleep now on with more reviews of your exciting chapters, man I think every one wants a Momma Esme hug of welcome. Everyone wants Edward to be their other puzzle piece. I could have seen Emmett replacing her drink with something else just to mess with her. Great one Carlisle is laying down the law! Okay I think I just had a brain melt that was a good scene keep it up. Oh no time to tell Charlie, hope you are "the vampire" Edward. There's nothing like a daddy protecting a daughter, blood or no blood. Ahh ha Charlie and Edward are ticked...where is this going to go?
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) I enjoy your comments. Makes me smile =)
I adore Esme and yeah, you know Emmett. He loves to tease. lol My Carlisle is a fierce vampire yet compassionate. He will always lay down the law. lol However, you'll notice that Edward's parents won't mind them sleeping together. They understand that Edward and Bella are true mates so it's a little different for vamps.
Thanks again
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Onward to chapter 7...Great more overreaction in different directions! LOL. Oh I so want Edward to go the next time she has to donate. Thank would be something to see. Demolition Edward coming thru. He could lick me anytime he wanted too. Another James encounter, you're taking me on a roller coaster but that's okay I love the suspense. And there is James' baby temper tantrum ha ha Edward tried to destory a forest and you knock over chairs. Go figure. Okay self made tattoos thats a new one. Ruh row...run run, what is that medicine for I wonder. How will Edward's marking venom effect her blood. Darn it another month till the next donation.
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Edward will definitely go with Bella to her next donation...which I think is chapter 13. *looks in outline* Yup, chapter 13. lol However, this next blood donation should not happen. Poor Bella. You'll see why in ch. 12. LMAO@ James' baby temper tantrum. *giggles* I like that. LOL, yeah Edward went nutzo!
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Happy happy dance, it is going to suck for me when I get all caught up. I am so glad that you write nice long chapters, even if we have to wait for them, they all seem well developed and exciting which even if readers complain it is still worth the happy dance when a new chapter comes in so don't change that please. Okay new drugs and mamma bear Esme, look out. Man the bad guys against them just keep adding up, Tanya, Victoria, James, Mike, Aro. I'm going to be jumping at my own shadow soon. you're good. Bruises, scars and all I guess they never thought where their blood was coming from, kinda like us and cows. Uh oh a curious Edward and porn don't think that could be a good combination, but on the other hand. Mike is being a douche as usual.
Darn it who the crap is that in the parking lot. Dang she has got to quit hiding stuff from everyone. And now a killer vampire taking out brunettes. It's almost too much to keep up with but I'm sure that you know that you have everyone sitting on the edges of their seats with their fingers quickly tapping the page down button and then those evil little words Chapter End Notes...and we're like NOOOOOOOO.
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Awww lol. Thank you, I'm glad you like the long chapters. Some readers do not, I guess they feel they have to read them in one sitting? lol IDK But, I'll keep writing long chappys. =)
I will cover more on the drugs that Bella is taking and why the vamp gov't is forcing humans to take them as well. I will reveal that soon.....hopefully by ch 16 or so.
Yeah...there's a killer on the loose. And a couple of strangers lurking around in the woods. But do they belong to the vamp that covered his scent? Hmmm....lol
Thank you for reading and your awesome comments =)
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Happy happy dance, I'm lucky only a few more chapters and I'm all caught up. Good for you bad bad for me. Edward is going to flip his lid when he finds out. I can so imagine Edward trying to sneek in at night and Vampire Charlie catching him. LOL Oh goodie these vampires sleep. More chances for getting caught by Charlie. Ruh row Carlisle and Edward are going to go with Charlie and Renee already there, the blood bank is never going to know what hit them. Okay time for a cold shower. Need I say more? Who's hiding and watching now...the list is long enough. Bella got her Cullen crest yea! And another cliffy you just love to do that don't ya!
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LOL.
Yeah my vamps sleep. I thought it would be nice if they did, although no coffins here. lol LOL@ Edward sneaking in. You'll be surpsised how lenient vamp parents can be if their sons or daughters found their true mates.
LOL@ cliffies. They're fun....for me. lo
Thanks again. I appreciate all your comments
~jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Bang what an exciting start to a chapter. Okay really I don't like Santiago or Afton whatever they are. Oh and why was Bella ill in that last chapter I just remembered to ask that. And Edward finally snaps we knew it was going to happen. Practice does make perfect. HA HA HA HA Emmett is let loose in the lingeie shop that is just the end of the world. And we begin to wonder if Alice is the first bi polar vampire. There is labrador Mike showing his colors. Okay so Bella's taking a walk on the wild side. Wouldn't we all? Darn it Edward is cockblocked again. Poor vampire is going to explode on somebody soon. Okay okay have pity on us your going to make our water bills run higher from all the cold showers after reading this. YEA!! Angela is in the house.
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
Thank you =) So glad you liked!
Soooo as for your question about Bella.....here it is...
A little spoiler:
~Bella is slowly falling ill. This is why the vamp gov't is panicking, distributing those pills for increased red blood cell count and forcing humans to donate more. They want to drain out as much blood possible before everyone falls ill. However, I won't cover that until a little later, ch 15 or so. I guess it depends how long my next chapters will be. lol. But what Bella is experiencing is the first symptoms of the new human illness, however, Edward's marking venom is slowly down the disease at an incredible rate.~
LOL@ Alice being the first bipolar vamp. I think so. lol
LOL. Love your comments. Oh boy your on ch 11. Not one of my faves =(
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I'm so sad only two more chapters and I'm all caught up...how can you do this to me. Okay enough whining on with chapter 11....hee hee Angela has no verbal filter this should be intersting. Feel feelings, no no explain later explain now. Okay now I'm more than curious how does Edward change her? I mean he's been biting her and they've mated. Hummm, I can't figure it out. Oh awesome, Ben is going to meet Angela.
NO no no not a cliffy like that.
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LOL.
I'll explain soon how a vamp changes a human to a hybrid. It's not that complicated but Edward biting her a few times doesn't do it like SM's vamps.
Thank you so much =)
~Jells
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Sniff sniff, my last chapter, (are there any more coming soon) look at me I haven't even read it yet and I'm already begging for more. Are you proud of what you do to us readers? You should be. Anyway on with Chapter 12: Breathe. One question is this Aro king of the world or just vampires? I'm kind of confused on that one. Legends what legends...darn must read faster...Damn Carlisle looks good for his age....back to reading...ditto to Esme....reading...King Edward yes it does have a nice ring to it. Ohh goodie...finally hybrid information...reading...So hybrids have the special powers? Huh thats new. Okay scratch that idea, yes thats me up on your roller coaster ride you've enjoyed putting out there for everyone. Man poor Brock. So that's what happened to Edward...excellent story telling. Heck just make it two million and one times today, I would not be complaining. Ahh teasing in class what a lovely way to pass the time. Awesome it's party time...PERFEcT!!!! Ben was just knocked for a flip by little Miss Angela...go Angie Go Angie. I love when authors don't forget the little people. LMAO I'm Ben by the way...reading...a drunk Bella...lol...And we're doing loops again in the roller coaster who's fighting.. Mr. Cheney man I was so not expecting that. It's okay Ben can become a Cullen I say so. Lauren can take a long walk off a short pier. And Angela can become a Swan. There it's settled. Okay now we're going backwards thru the loops on the coaster Mike is the killer...that is just perfect I'm sure no one expected that twist. That is just evil you cliffy queen. And those three words I hate Chapter End Notes. AHHHH and no more chapters. I hope that you are writing you are writing currently aren't you...if not I'm going to go find Mike and send him after you. Just kidding or am I.
Looking forward to more!
~Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! OMG! LOVED this review!
So Aro is King of Vampires, but since he rules over everyone, including humans you could say he's King of the world.
Yup, some hybrids have special powers, very few do. And that terrifies Aro.
LOL. Kay, Ben is a Cullen now and Angela is a Swan. Sounds great!!! I wonder though....just how far will Mr. Cheney will go to keep Ben and Angela apart? Hmmmm...*evil grin*
LOL. Yeah, love them cliffies. LMAO! I'll be watching my back for Mike. He's a crazy and creepy vamp.
Thank you soooo much! Loved each and every review! You've made my day!
I'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Dab darn it, pick the phone back up....YES YES....a new chapter and sweet lord 27189 words what a number. Thank you in advance. A new chapter (heck some whole stories are not that long!!!) This will just make my night (even though I am sneaking at work and reading it....shhhh don't tell gotta love iphones.) Okay....reading now...hope you remember how my crazy reviews work and I foresee that this will be a long review. Very interesting Bella's POV and we really have no clue as to what has happened (maybe I should go back and re read....no no 27189 new words are out there for me...onward) Yes the bronze haired one can make anyone feel safe. No no no, who is the second one...grrrr....must read faster....Tyler...darnit where is everyone else... a little help here guys. Is this a dream scene/ out of body experience/ pre death scene? Don't know yet ... reading... Oh yeah I'd like to be in that Personal heaven. Ha Ha nice wish Bella always hopes it is just a dream. Oh man please tell me that we are not going to have a emo, depressed Edward, what is going thru his head now. Edward Pay attention listen to your reviewers....Go destroy another forest NOW! Way to go, a strong bond with Rose and Bella starting to form, most authors shy away and just throw Rose in in the background. You weren't afraid of facing that challenge of merging a friendship between the two polar opposites who could learn from each other. Good Job! I'd like to see Emmett and Bella ruling the world it would be a better place. I want a big brother like Jasper. No no no no go back you can't just skip over that....Edward and Charlie fought. Not fair. Monday.....reading ... go Ben you are an action type of vampire not a wordy prissy one. Bree? oh yeah neighbor, what is she in there for....hummmm okay will store that for later. Name things are all complicated for Ben and Angela. I still say let them become a Swan and a Cullen (I wanne be a Cullen. Lucky Ben) If only life was that easy. Yea! Can I move in Doctor Cullen? Tuesday....reading...ah the joys of Trig classes brings back memories...no no keep the math problems away they are invading my dreams. Is the weather reflecting or reacting to Bella's mood? Oh I would have loved to see that speech live and in person. Did the other vampires tinkle in their pants? A patient vampire, my foot, we want an impatient, impossible, dominant out of control Edward. Uhhh oh Riley/Emmett I foresee a brawl for our Emmie boy in the near future, maybe he has been left out so far. Yes yes poor Mike (he's really gone because I sent him after the author ..shhh don't tell). YES yes Go Emmett Go Emmett. Wednesday....reading BLOOD DONATION tomorrow Finally! Is Edward goinna flatten the building? Proper police coercion. Ha Ha was it Charlie? Vamp court like Night court? AH HA not Edward Carlisle is gonna go off now. Go Carlisle! Go Mama Esme! Big Brother Bear Emmett! No NO no Angela don't tease me with only half a story....Grrrr (this is almost like informaion overload but I swear I am not complaining!) Thursday....reading....BLOOD DONATION Day! DUN DUN DUN Emmett came ( my my isn't our little author just full of surprises!)TEAM BELLA has arrived we'll wear T shirts next donation day. Oh my a bored Emmett that won't be good, yes give him something to entertain himself with. Cute little girl. Wasn't her number IMS9131987 not MS9131987? Ruh roh Doctor Cullen is gonna flip his lid. Here we go no more marking. Is this dude dumb? He deserves anything that happens to him. Friday...reading....Ahhhh Cig for anyone? Don't need to say anything else (you should not have worried about that lemon). Ha Ha Busted by the Chief!! Dude that is the wrong place for that she should have just embarassed the Chief into letting her stay home. All those vampires should send Bella thank you presents!!! Druggie Edward do you need a 12 step program? If people give you a hard time about it say people have sex with honey and that is just messy. Food is food. Sorry about your blouse that is almost as perfect as "Hi, I'm Ben". Okay I made it. Dear sweet lord, that was a ride and a half. Thank you again it was almost too much and I can assure you that I will go back and re read it and yes then re read the rest of the story so that it will all sink in. (darn only and 800 word review) No where near as amazing as your chapter was. I hope that you are currently writing. I'm almost scared to send anyone after you to watch the last one I sent you killed him off in the next chapter. You are one scary author. LOL. Seriously. I am stunned at how much was covered and how smoothly it flowed together. Well I have had my fix for the day. Keep up the excellent work! (AHhh got to go my boss just got here....BYE!)
Robin
Author's Response:
LMAO! I LOVE your reviews! They make me smile and laugh! j/s
Yeah....this is the longest chapter yet. I always say to myself (not that i talk to myself) lmao but I say "this is going to be a much shorter chapter" and pfft...that never happens. lol
Yeah it was just a dream scene. And no emo Edward here. He's very protective of her, but I just can't make him all brooding. lol I adore Rose actually. She's going to be very good for Bella....esp when she's turned, that is if she'll ever be turned. lol
I'm going to try to squeeze in more Jasper and Bella time. I need to develop his character much better. He's kinda...in the background. *makes mental note: add Jasper and Bella time*
Poor Angela and Ben....I think it may get much more difficult for them. =( C'est la vie in a dominated vamp world.
LOL. Hell yeah. You can move in with the Cullen's. But IF and only IF you don't send anymore vampires after me. Actually *ponders* ....let me rephrase that...you may send me Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper and Edward. lol
Hahahaa so you want an impatient vamp? kk, I'll see what I can do. lol
Yeah...Riley and Emmett...it's only a matter of time before they brawl.
Great question.The weather was reflecting Bella's mood. Yeah info overload. It's sooo much info, it makes my head spin. lol
Yeah, Emm wanted to go to the blood donation. He adores Bella like a little sister. And the vamp court will be coming up soon. lol @ wearing Team Bella t-shirts on her donation day.
Buahhaa @ thank you presents. That would be hilarious XD LOLOL. Yap, Bella is his drug, he can't get enough of her. lol
Hahaha like I said, you can send me a vampire.....but can you make it a Cullen this time? Mike wasn't fun, he's crazy. He had to go!
Thank you soooooooo much for commenting! I loved every minute of it. Oh and thanks for pointing out the ID number mess yup. You're totally right, I missed the letter I. I made the corrections already. *shakes head at self* lol
Thanks again, bye!
~Jells
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yea yea, side across the floor. I got a happy email notice and my favorite story was updated. Okay you have made my day, after a crappy night of work. Okay remember i just rammble as I read...Snickers pouting like a vampire child. Ha ha is he really trying to explain...he he sucks to be that principle. Green, red now orange...okay. Oh crap, why did you stop it only takes a second for them to catch you. All I can say is not a word for polite society. Go Edward!! Oh just go key the car as revenge. Bella going to go off on Edward? In his mood he'd enjoy it. The Vampire Flu what color would the venom be then? LOL. No no no those evil little words I hate Chapter End Notes.....what is going on. That is just evil. I am going to bring Crazy Vampire Mike back and send him after you. Be on the look out. Otherwise great chapter. Just to get myself thru I'm going to have to convert this to mp3 tonight so I can listen to everything to get over that cliffy there. You should be proud of yourself!
Enjoy
Robin
Author's Response:
LOLOL.
Hiya!!! *waves like some crazy person* lol
Thank you sooooooooooo much. Your comments totally make my day!!! I smile like crazy and laugh when I read em.
LMAO. Fiiiiiiiiiiiiine. Send Mike after me. I can take him. lmao No worries, my beta still has my chappy 15 but she said she's working on it, I'll post asap.
LOL. I looooooooooooove cliffies. I really do. lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Carlisle speaks to a panicked Bella and Edward on their honeymoon at Isle Esme. He believes Bella is pregnant, but it's definately not a normal pregnancy. Follow Bella's pregnancy through Carlisle's eyes and mind. Contains medical terminology and graphic descriptions. Banner by Fuzzylittlewingedthing.
Part of the Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes Series
Stephenie Meyer owns all of Twilight.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme, Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Carlisle and Esme: Through Their Eyes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7549 Read Count: 428
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thank you thank you thank you. This was a POV that I have waited a long time to see written of that scene. You did an excellent job of protraying what I believe Carlisle was feeling. I hope that you keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for you enthusiastic review! The scope of this was huge, so putting it in a o/s was challenging, but I so love Carlisle, I couldn't resist giving it a try.
I appreciate you taking the time to review -- and I'm a HP fan too!
Best selling author Edward Cullen gets roped into being on The Bachelor. He feels a connection with a reluctant bachelorette on the first night, but what are the odds it will sustain itself until the final rose ceremony? (Pick a Pic Entry) M, AH. Fabulous banner that was the inspiration by Belindella.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16818 Read Count: 1419
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: What Are the Odds?
Okay I am so torn by this fic and I mean that in the nicest way! I loved it. The plot has so many ways it could have gone. Normally I don't like one shots because I love to watch characters develop and grow, but you captured my eye with this one! As I sit here in the cold in my car typing your well earned review after I had to finish reading this on my phone cause I couldn't put it down. And now I'm sad cause I could have seen this piece driving readers nuts and causing lots of happy dances when new alerts entered email accounts! Keep up the excellent writing!!!!